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PujaShree

@PujaShree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#681

thanxx for ur kind rply ritzy...:):)
n update was as usuall awsm blossom...:):)
BIKE RACING part was juzzz wowww...i was juzz dreaming maaneet in bike in myt dreamland...:)
n nauhgty maan...how he said ..:"yeh periods kab tak hote hai..."
n geets's rply.."Maan plz mat chedia na...5 dayz tak..;P:p"...uske baad pehen lumgi...
ahem ahem ab toh maan k wapis aane ka wait karing..:):)
update soonnn dearrr...:):)

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seher

@love4all

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Posted: 12 years ago

#682

awesome part dear

i loved it

cont soon

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#683

am so anxious that i cant wait for the next

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neha gupta

@neha5058

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#684

me abhi se sulking for update...

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#685

after ur every update u make me crave for updates more and more...

Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago

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lg001

@lg001

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Posted: 12 years ago

#686

wow loved it...
u showed bike race
loved it...
waiting 4 next...

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seher

@love4all

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#687

awesome part dear

maan is becoming besharam day by day

ufff geet bechari

cont soon dear

waiting for next

thanks for pm

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#688

hi ritzy!i am one of ur silent reader .i am new to this forum also.i just tried once to comment.my sister only suggested ur stories to me. i read ur previous story.i can see the improvement in your writting.i will expect more from ur forth coming stories.indeed u have some unique style of writting.in "vivah" u never failed to surprise me for example i never thought the evening would be a bike race.

At this time i have to tell u one thing,in that SR chapter the out burst of geet to maan is something i loved verymuch.in fact after that part only i got into that story and started liking the story.

you have taken the decesion of ending story at the right time.and i am gald that ur fulfilling the wishes of fans .

Even i dont know hindi because i am from chennai.by watching geet only i learnt little hindi.it is verymuch helpful for me that ur giving english transalation.i have learnt meanings for many hindi words from ur transalation.after geet's end the ffs are my only relief.please continue ur writting because ur one of my favourite writer.

i know i am boring u .i dont know how to express my feelings. i thought my words will express my liking and gratitute to u and ur works.

keep up ur good work dear.

please ignore the mistakes.

WITH LOVE

KALA.