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sweetysaran

@sweetysaran

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#601

loved it...

awesome awesome awesome...

really the story is progressing so nicely...

your way of writing by giving importance to small small things in life that helps in building up maaneet relation... is so nice... i just loved it...

loved the way you showed maan and geet understanding each other before they take their relationship to next level...as trust and understanding is more important than anything in life...

not to mention- arjun talks and maan's answer,bike races, when geet gave importance to both her husband and her brother in bike race was so nice...

totally beautifully written...

waiting for the next update...

Edited by sweetysaran - 12 years ago

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Pallavi

@QueenbeePallavi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#602

sweet update.. lovde the racing part though didnt expect that one coming but yeah it was a good one..ab geet ki baari hai to get some naughty and seducing.. ;) good one..keep it up!!!

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keerthi90

@keerthi90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#603

Hmmm...Ab kya bataye...u gave us a beautiful update and then a promise of naughty update!!!!!!!!! Toh geet wants bike race...hmm...and they had lots of fun during racing...good that they even joined rahul,arjun and annie and the little vicky...

So maan gave her the gift he brought from london for her...aur geet toh itna blush kar rahi thi and she even promised him to wear it for him...

Update the naughty part soon yaar...Will be waiting for it...

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Khusluvsmaaneet

@Khusluvsmaaneet

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#604

Geet thought of bike race..i was expecting something special nd only maan and geet...
Aur ab ye judai..kitna tadpaoge...
Atlast Maan gave d gift to geet...geet was blushing hard after seeing it..
Maan is being too desperate..trip karke aayo maan ur gift is waiting..
Geet was crying thinking abt the last trip of maan...;-(
d cmnt u mentioned at the top of the chapter was really awsum..
Thnx 4 d pm..update soon

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#605

That ws really really Amazing Update👏

Loved it very very much

awww all enjoying bike race & having fun😛

loved thire mashti mazak& teasing session😉

Maaneet moment were so beautiful😳

Loved it alot

aww Maan s going to Businesstrip😭

oops geet crying..feeling scared 😔

of loosing Maan like last time

Loved the gift part😉

hyee Maan tesing her so much😳

eagerly waiting for next update

Continue super soon

Thankx for PM

😊