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neha gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#382

Fantastic update!!! I read the last 2 update of urs again and again. Could never get bored. Its so beautiful.

Morning session between husband-wife was great. Maan is becoming so shameless!! But am loving this naughty Maan. He called Geet just to ask het to dress him up!!! And he voiced out his fantasy. Just like Maan, even I am very eager to see Geet just in Maan shirt😳 So much difference in Maan. He was so introvert and now all turn up side down😆

I won't get bored reading this wonderful moment between Maaneet, and I don't mind if you want to extend it. Am all fine

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: ritzy09
Oh hoye...so someone is a black forest cake girl...I love it too...

I love comments and everytime I reply in my head but sometime like today when I have some time, I just express my responses. Trust me, after every update it is like exam result time and I wait so much to read the comments...

don't worry on golden moments...though chapters are less but I will fulfil most of your wishes and some of the last chapters are almost like double updates...so loads of moments coming up

New FF - I am biting my nails...I am so nervous...post karne ki himmat nahi ho rahi hai...

am sure u will give more and more maaneet in vivah... but its just that u fulfill our one fantasy , and another one pops up... but still i have to say this vivah journey was just fantastic and meanwhile i hope u get new ideas to prolong this too😉... greedy me😆

nervous????OMG... what for? u know u r one of the finest and awesome writers of gf...and am sure with the next ff too u will conquer many more readers than the existing... so chill out babes... am sure it will be the best... 👍🏼 all the best

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#384

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Naima

@NaimaMSK1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#385

sorryyy Ritzy !

i know am very late and also lazy in commenting 😭

but i just comment when log in to update ! aab pakka will update time par 😃

coming to the updates they were just tooo goood 👏

loved their first kiss 😳

then maan hurting her 😆

family blaming maan and geet telling what happened 😳

gosh it must be soo embarrasing 😆 becharrii 😳

Hayee maan being despoo 😆😆

awww jejaa - salaa bond was too cuteee 😳

waiting for the next 😃

update soon 😃

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sanj1905

@sanj1905

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#386

Just AWESOME update...

waiting for more...😳😳😳😳

🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
lots of hugs to u for such a wonderful update...loved it ❤️
👍🏼

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Cyberlife

@Cyberlife

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Posted: 12 years ago

#387

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

am sure u will give more and more maaneet in vivah... but its just that u fulfill our one fantasy , and another one pops up... but still i have to say this vivah journey was just fantastic and meanwhile i hope u get new ideas to prolong this too😉... greedy me😆

nervous????OMG... what for? u know u r one of the finest and awesome writers of gf...and am sure with the next ff too u will conquer many more readers than the existing... so chill out babes... am sure it will be the best... 👍🏼 all the best

Lakshmi: I echo EVERY SINGLE word and sentiment you have captured here and add my PLEAS to continue this magical journey for a while longer. I cannot imagine EVER getting tired of reading regular updates on this unique, delicately drawn out love story.
Ritzy: Why not follow your suggestion (probably made in half jest). Even after you have ended this story and begun your new one, I will be very happy to play the sponge and soak up continuing OS from the Vivah FF. I think my doctor would thoroughly approve this alternate therapy and probably far more effective than all the toxic medicines being pumped into me.

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Cyberlife

@Cyberlife

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Posted: 12 years ago

#388

Hai mai mar gayeee!!! The last few updates were like a warm, molten treacle sliding down my spine. The dreamy, gudgudi filled scenes, the progression from stern faced, niras Maan to this wicked, besharam, loafer lover-boy, as always brilliant dialogues, ...warmed the deepest cockles of my heart!!!!

Tumne toh loot hi liya hai humare dilon ko. How do you expect us to give up on our Vivah fix so quickly! Its my elixir. Mons and Thurs take on a whole different meaning because of my anticipation of the next beautiful update in store for your diwane fans.

PLEASE, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, ... don't end this too quickly.

As for your new FF, waiting for that too eagerly. Kya karein - -sub aapki gulti hai for writing so incredibly well.