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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

where r u..😒...
aaj kal koi upda
te hi nahi de raha hai...😔...


main aagayi updating😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome teaser... waiting for update
do it soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

update on next page😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

update no next page😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

awesome teaser... waiting for update

do it soon


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Posted: 12 years ago

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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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PART 24:

Anuty: kya hua beta tum log aise yaha kyun khade ho?? Anything wrong?? Aunty asked as if she had no idea abt maaneet missing the bus


Maan: woh aunty hum logon ki bus miss ho gayi delhi jaana hai and this damn bus, kal tak hame yehi rehna hoga, aap jaanti hai yaha koi hotel..... arey beta hotel ki kya jaroorat hai?? Main hoon na?? kal hamare gaon mein maata rani ki pooja hai uske baad chota sa festival mere saath aao I promise ull enjoy listening to aunty geet cudnt hold herself back not thinking this will turn things up side down!!!


Geet: aunty main chalongi aapke saath, maan dragged geet aside.... Pagal ho gayi ho geet? hum jaante bhi nahi hai ki woh kaun hai and how can we just go with her?? we cant trust ppl we will somehow manage lekin uss aunty ke saath nahi jayenge he declared


Geet: Did not I trust u maan?? issi liye main yaha aayi thi!!! And the same with her, aapko aana ho toh aayiye nahi toh nahi main ja rahi hoon she tried to walk away bt maan grabbed her through arm harshly holding her waist. Watching them aunty was getting embrassed..... yeh dono toh kahi bhi shuru ho jaate hai!!! hey maata rani inn dono ko kal bya karne mein meri madat karna she shot a quick prayer to maata rani


Maan had no other option than agreeing, bt he was hell angry on geet. Uff!!! Ek toh uske nakhre dusra uski zidd!!! Aunty took maaneet to her home and gave them a separate room to stay till they catch their bus. The daughter of aunty literally gone nuts seeing maan. She came to their room and started to talk to maan. Geet burned in jealousy.


Geet(st): dekha dekha kaise gappe ladaa rahe hai uss ladki ke saath mein babaji?? Koi bhi ladki ho chodte nahi hai!!! ek main hi hoon unwanted!!! Jo hamesha inke peeche peeche bhagti rehti hoon issi liye he is taking me for granted I hate u maan!!!


Geet went outside not liking the way maan was smiling and talking to the girl. She found few guys drinking, she went near them and stood watching them, finally not able to stop herself... bhaiyya mujhe bhi ek bottle mil sakti hai?? she asked innocently. An old man laughed looking at this girl and gave her the bottle. Geet took the bottle and came back finishing off the drink in it completely. By then the girl left, and maan was relaxing on the bed. Geet entered the room without making any noise, bt the smell of alchohol was so strong that maan immediately understood that condition of geet. He woke up and looked at geet who was smiling for no reason.....yeh tum kya karke aayi ho??? Are u drunk?? God kaise sambhalonga iss ladki ho ab main!!! He took a long breath while geet shook him holding his collar..... kya hoon main tumhari?? Kya hoon?? Jawab nahi diya na toh pakka keh rahi hoon rape tum mera nahi balki main kardongi tumhara!!! U have used me!!! She yelled while maan closed geet's mouth....shhh!!! geet aisi baatein mat karo warna sab sochenge ki maine tumhare saath kuch kiya!!! Aur waise bhi ek baar tumne peeya toh main yaha aagay ab kya hoga mere saath??


Geet: kya hoga tumhara?? Mera aur tumhara koi rishta nahi hai!!! don't bother for me so much Mr. Khurana saab aapki range hi kuch aur hai restaurant mein koi aur!!! Room tak koi aur!!! Yaha aake koi aur!!! Aapko ladkiyon ki kya kami hai?? its all me wasting my time and energy for u!!! aapko meri chinta karne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai I am all fine u just take rest


Maan: kya kaha tumne?? He pushed geet on the bed!!! Kya kaha?? Abhi abhi jo ladki aayi thi woh toh ek bachi hai geet!!!


Geet: bachi?? She laughed out bachi!!! Woh aapko bachi lag rahi thi?? Anyways mujhe uss baare mein koi baat nahi karna aap plz mujhe akela chod dijiye saying this geet got up to go out again while maan held her pallu ... tum kahi nahi jaa rahi ho geet!!! he said with extreme seriousness in his tone


Geet: acha!!! Aur aapko iss baat se kya farak?? Main kahi bhi jaon its my personal u don't need to involve, bt maan closed the door....y are u stopping me?? Wat right do u have on me?? Maan didn't say anything..... u have no answer right?? So just lemme go its raining out I wanna enjoy!!!


Maan tried many times to stop geet she was nowhere to listen giving him he followed her out!!! As they came out maaneet found a couple dancing in the rain. Geet started to fantasize the couple to be themselves!!!


Ohhooohhoo..
ohhhoohooo..

Meri pehli mohabbat hai
Meri pehli yeh chaahat hai
Meri itni si hasrat hai
Gale lag ja na jaa


Unable to bear the sight she came back to the room muffling her cries as the couple passionately hugged each other, maan understood her pain he cudnt do much, he found geet sobbing burying her head on pillow. He went upto her, held her shoulder.... Geet!!! kya hua?? Y are u crying?? He asked bt she didn't reply


Teri baahon mein rahat hai
Teri zulfhon mein jannat hai
Meri itni si hasrat hai
Gale lag ja na jaa


Geet: mujhse dur raho maan, geet shoved his hand away from her body, don't touch me I hate u mere paas mat aana!!! Maan felt so helpless he just hovered geet on the bed, then those lines made him go out of control, as he plastered his body onto geet's lying on her completely


Sulge sulge badan hai
Uljhe uljhe se maan hai
Badhti jaati hai tan ki pyaas

Bheki bheki hai raatein
Mehki mehki hai saansein
Rehna rehna tu dil ke paas


Maan: u are mine geet!!!! just mine!!! Those words added fuel so much to geet as they gave more energy to her drunken nerves.


Geet: say that again maan?? she sounded so desparate to hear it again from maan, as he smiled. He was getting a clear idea now!!! Geet is a special part of his life without whom nothing seems perfect nothing soothes his senses!!! He said it again... tum sirf meri ho geet!!! just mine!!! Iske aage kuch mat poochna I wont be able to say my feelings to u in this situation, ill make it special for u!!! very special!!!


Ohhooohhoo..
ohhhoohooo..

Oh tu agar samne ho
Kaise main khud ko rakh pao hosh mein

Darta hai dil khata yeh kar baithe na
Mohabaat ke josh mein


Geet: Mr. Khurana ill wait for the special moment right now kiss me plz she made a cute baby face, Maan nodded for a no geet pleaded he again said no smiling wickedly. Geet got up angrily from the bed and went outside this time making a firm decision that she will not come back to maan again.


Tu agar samne ho
Kaise main khud ko rakh pao hosh mein

Darta hai dil khata yeh kar baithe na
Mohabaat ke josh mein

Badla badla hai mausam
Pighla pighla hai youvan
Jaage jaage hai ab eshaas

Bheki bheki hai raatein
Mehki mehki hai saansein
Rehna rehna tu dil ke paas


Geet sat under the tree drenching herself in the rain, she shivered as the cold water touched her, bt maan was feasting on her body so much that now his urge to kiss geet has become even more strong!!! Not giving a second thought maan went to her taking large steps, holding her arm he made geet to stand on her feet!!! He smacked her on the tree and took her lips into his, fondling her body madly. Maan hauled her more against the tree now, his hand made way towards her blouse strap, bt then stopped himself from taking any advancement. He didn't want to loose himself coz this is something special which he wanted to happen after their relation will be NAMED!!!


Meri jazbon ki jo bhi halat hai
Wo samjh lo na bin kahe

Oh in labon se kahon
Jo armaan hai
Barso yeh honth chup rahe

Oh Meri jazbon ki jo bhi halat hai
Wo samjh lo na bin kahe

In labon se kahon
Jo armaan hai
Barso yeh honth chup rahe

Thandi thandi agan hain
Meethi meethi chubhan hai
Jhudti jhudti hai tujhse aas


Maan separated from geet and scooped her in his arms making way towards the room!!!


Bheki bheki hai raatein
Mehki mehki hai saansein
Rehna rehna tu dil ke paas

Teri baahon mein rahat hai
Teri zulfhon mein jannat hai
Meri itni si hasrat hai
Gale lag na na jaa


Maan and geet changed into the clothes present in the cupboard, geet slept as the alchohol made her drowsy while maan kissed her forehead watching the princess in his arms!!!


Early in the mrng maan woke up as somebody were knocking the door from outside, he looked beside himself got shocked not finding geet!!!


Precap: where is geet?? A BIG TWIST AHEAD!!! Ull love it for sure so get to work next update after 220+ likes!!!


Meri bkh ki besharam ladkiyan maahi, tanvi, sia, mona and sona finally update kardiya happy?? Love u all girls!!!



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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update dear.
Loved it.
Sorry for late comment.
Thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting
EDITED
haey muahhh me dancing kya dhansu update hai muahhh😃😃
but woh SHADDI kahan reh gayai🤓i wana see maan's shocked face🤣🤣
Edited by sona-rai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update dear.
Loved it.maza agaya now i cant wait nexttt yipeee
Edited by maaniqra - 12 years ago

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