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A COMMITMENT

PART 6

Its true that to know someone from deep you need to have a heart which can trust .. geet was having a fear that all will leave her again… and know she was just thinking of shruti..geet was assisting the senior doctor in the emergency and here she was all the while worried about her niece..

It was two hours shruti was her bff.. but she was enjoying a lot with krish and he was making her aware of all his things… maan was tired of running after them.. one moment they will be playing in hall the next moment they will be in kitchen eating pastries.. and after some time maan found them in krish play room.. he was making her learn how to play with his latest video games… though all were boyish things but still there was a familiar aura around.. their were baby's things around cute teddy's all around..

Krish looked at shruti she was looking at some teddy's their a baby cute white teddy in his mumma's lap and their was a familiar longing in her eyes… maan was looking at krish the next moment he saw his nephew went and gave his favorite teddy to shruti…

Krish: princess you can take it.. I am having many here wait I will show you and you can play with them and take them with you… you know these are for my baby sister..

He said with a cute dimple forming on his cheeks and his eyes glittering with some sweet love that he was having for his baby sister…

Maan for a second looked away and wiped his lone tear still after three years krish cant forget that incident that snatched his mother from him .. the child was mother less.. krish was just two when his sister in law had an accident which took her life including the life of her unborn baby.. since then his brother karan was herself looking after his son.. karan even refused to remarry he didn't wanted a step mother for his only son…

Maan looked at both of them krish was sitting with shruti on the floor and what his saw made his eyes to pop out …

Small and big soft toys every where toys..

Atleast twenty teddies … many dolls were scattered and krish was making her comfortable..they were talking ..enjoying…

Maan looked at the mess that they did just in few minutes but the deep contentment that was there on shruti's face..the cute pout the angry glare she was giving to krish made maan to think about his geetika..she was same…

Maan sat with them and call the head chef of KM to bring the snacks for the little brats here only…

It was two hours maan made them eat … now it was ten and still both of them were playing even poor maan he was tired of looking at them they were playing… maan saw something and immediately gave shruti an injection..making her to cry out..she was getting restless .. she was probably feeling the pain..

Loud cries filled in KM…

Karan ( krish's father ) who just had came home ..immediately came to see a cute baby girl crying..she was rubbing her arm..and maan was trying to keep her calm but was not good at them..that's why probably he wanted nurse with him when he was handling kids…and know the pain that she was feeling from the quick flinch of injection was more than that of the pain that was subdued due to the sedative…

Maan took shruti in his arms ..but she was hitting her legs and her arms to maan..she was probably angry on maan till know only her geetu tricked her in those bad and wicked jab and those bitter medicines and know her bff did…she was very angry…

Krish saw his princess crying he too was on the verge of crying he cant see his newly found friend to be hurt… he too glared at maan..maan was feeling scared of what these two will do of him… they were on the mission of killing his chachu and bff … when his savior his brother came and took the baby girl from his arms..he patted her back..shruti finding some kind of familiar warmth snuggled to karan…

Karan : shh..calm down sweety..look kuch nahi hua hai baby ko..dekho I will scold him..will hurt my princess… shh calm down…shruti's loud cries were calming down..she was now only sniffling..

Maan tried to took her but she refused snuggling to karan more…

Maan : bff I am sorry look I know you were feeling pain that's why I gave you that shot… I am sorry..come to me na..he asked with a baby face..but his bff ignored making him to show a perfect scowl on his face…

Shruti nodded in a NO…

Shruti: NO… shruti wont come… shruti hurt… ahh..she moaned in pain..now it was karan's turn to give maan a piece of mind…

Karan: who is she maan..and what are you doing with her.. and krish why are you not on your bed till know…well karan was a calm person but seeing a baby crying he had lose his composure …

Maan : bhai she is my patient .geetika's niece… and she is staying with us tonight ..i am taking her case you know the case for which I came to delhi its her… and she was feeling pain that's why I ad to gave her a shot…

Karan knew who was geetika ..he looked at shruti who was looking tired she was resting her head on his shoulder like wanting to sleep…

Maan again tried to take her but she denied…

Maan: sweety come na..uncle wants to go… but shruti didn't payed any heed…

Karan: leave her maan she will stay with me ..maan tried to protest but even his mother seconds karan…

Shaija: maan use jaane do… karan take the kids with you… I am sending their milk…

Maan: but mom bhai ko problem hogi…

Karan just shook his head looking at maan .. he knew nothing could be done of maan…

Karan: I am having a son too maan.. and clearly krish was having a frown since his dad had scolded him..when he knew that krish sleep with karan and that too after having a good father son time…

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Early morning eight am maan took shruti to geet's place since from last two hours she had called him endlessly just she wanted to see shruti… and karan made shruti ready since she was still mad on maan..and maan just played her favorite music that she liked…but still she didn't utter a single word…

Maan pressed the door bell ..there his geetika opened the door..she was looking tired ..having her eyes red..he knew she must be crying..this time he wanted her to open but she will not he knew…

Maan: good morning geetika…

Geet just looked away she didn't even reacted to his geetika..he knew that something must be bothering her but what.. geet looked at shruti who quickly came to her geetu…

Geet enveloped her in her embrace..

Geet : kaisi hai meri shruti…

Shruti was feeling sleepy due to her medicines …

Shruti 's eyes were droopy…

Shruti: nini bua…

Geet took her to the bedroom..to let her sleep …

While maan analysed the date …

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Next: she yelled at him…

JUST STOP INTEREFERING IN MY LIFE… JUST STOP MAAN..

I HAVE NOTHING TO LOOSE KNOW…. SHE IS ONLY I HAVE LEFT WITH …BUT BABAJI IS HAVING A STONE HEART THAT HE DIDN'T EVEN WANT HER WITH ME….

So here's the next part

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