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sanam1234u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

nice update...now geet will stay in KM...😊

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sdlife19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Nakul tuje meri taraf se der saari blessings

jo tumne Sher se permission liya

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Shashi1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

That's so lovely.

Thanks for the PM

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indiegirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Sorry to hear that you are not feeling well,

But really a very good update...

Thanks

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Dolly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

poor little soul...maan is little buddhu lolz
he doesn't know that this is the same person who
would rule his life one say;) nd caring Nakul jst luv him
I really felt like ki king those guys who were ogling at her
bt geet as a maid in km don't like it like that :(
bt atleast shell b safe there ... bc Nakul is there to tc of her

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URME

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Throwing everything towards u i have in my hand

Where is MAANEET MOMENT

Hayee meri MAANEET in one's another arm
BUT here u ...U... UUU...

oyeee MONI superb splendid JOB

Totally new concept to me ..

i don't how love will enter in MAANEET's life as MAAN is business tycoon & GEET is maid
but i know there will b MAHI MAHI soon

I will wait for MAANEET moment .. i will wait for the first time to build up a story properly cause most of the time i whole attention remains only on MAANEET moment
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I liked NAKUL part a lot .. first time saw NAKUL doing his best JOB

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ritzy09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

very relaistic and a good update...awesome

this story has me very excited and can't wait to read more

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sona rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

lovely update yar,loved it a lot

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URME

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

WOW ... It was awsome .. simply Awsome ..
I thought i wld throw all rotten eggs & tomatoes if there is not MAANEET moment but i am not doing it ...
It was awsome .. really ..first time i am not crying for MAANEET moment .. u write it so beautifully that i didn't miss MAANEET moment at all ...
First time i will wait for a story to build up .. as i only want MAANEET moment but here from story i have lots of expectation

1. I want GEET to b educated .. yes MAAN will support her but i want her to b dependent by her own effort .

2. yes world is very cruel but she must learn to know it is beautiful also ..

3. Again want MAAN to fall for geet not because of her beauty , to fall for her strong mind , fighting sprit & atleast trying spirit .. i want Geet to b self -dependent where MAAN will see her growth as a fighter ...

I don't know whether my expectation match with ur story or not but I want GEET to b stand for her own .. & want MAAN to fall for a maid cause he is lucky enough to have her in his life

last thing for the first time i gave a long comment with suggestion cause i have a lot expectation from this story ..

Hats off .. I am totally fida with the story ..

PLZ give another update tomorrow if u can .. love u

Edited by URME - 12 years ago