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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update but very short one...
Please give a long update next time...
Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
prt1
Geet orphan...
Maaneet r exactly oppisite to each other...
Omg orphanage mei aise gande kaam hote hai???
Babaji geet ko bacha lena...
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Posted: 12 years ago
prt2
Vry nyc
Thnk god geet ko kuch nhi hua...
Maans uncle??? Yuck...how cheap dt narendra kapoor is...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

She never been out of there.. it doesn't mean she dint know what is world


She came here, in this orphanage few months back. Before she used to live on another place

THERE IS A DISCREPANCY IN YOUR STORY

ONE LINE SAYS THAT SHE HAS NEVER SEEN THE OUTSIDE WORLD

OTHER SAYS THAT SHE CAME HERE ONLY A FEW MONTHS BACK

CAN YOU CLARIFY HER BACKGROUND




She never been out of there.. it doesn't mean she dint know what is world

it is because she always been an orphan .. she knew world only what she learn in books or heard from her friends..or people in orphanage. she used to go school even but in very small age she had to leave.. so she dint have practical knowledge of outer world..she knew only, what a child knows about all this..




She came here, in this orphanage few months back. Before she used to live on another place

yes she came here few months back. before she used to live in another orphanage.. it doesnt mean she had her family .. that orphanage was same as this ..


For background you ll hv to wait .. as story is not fully unfolded yet 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
prt3
Vry nyc
Geet maan k car mei...
Geet is soo scared bechari...
Plz cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice one...hope the police won't take her back..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: geet.lover




She never been out of there.. it doesn't mean she dint know what is world

it is because she always been an orphan .. she knew world only what she learn in books or heard from her friends..or people in orphanage. she used to go school even but in very small age she had to leave.. so she dint have practical knowledge of outer world..she knew only, what a child knows about all this..




She came here, in this orphanage few months back. Before she used to live on another place

yes she came here few months back. before she used to live in another orphanage.. it doesnt mean she had her family .. that orphanage was same as this ..


For background you ll hv to wait .. as story is not fully unfolded yet 😊



SO IN THIS STORY GEET HAS NOT SEEN THE OUTSIDE WORLD
SHE JUST READ ABOUT IT WHEN SHE WAS A CHILD
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohh she is so much terrified

hope maan's uncle does not visit him ever
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update buddy
poor geet
maan taking cr of her
waiting fr ur next update buddy thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
read all parts... realy amazing story ...geet is soo naive bt m happy nw she is safe wid maan...loved it...

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