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Jeba Rahman

@the_chosen_one

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

wow 6 parts in one go.
superb but you stopped in such a point that I can't wait for the next part.

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

ur update...😳

keep ing dear...😃

Shubha Durga Puja to all of u Dears...

lov,❤️

Tama

NOTE: SORRY FOR THIS TOO SHORT COMMENT AS MY NET IS IT"S CRTICAL CONDITIONAM

NOTE: SOMEONE ASKED ME WHOM FAN I AM...THAT ANS IS ONLY SUMIT KUMKUM & HUSSAIN JUHI..NONE OTHER ANY OF RESENT ON TV..

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

part 12
nice part...
Geet is so straight forward...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

part 13
poor Maan she blatantly told him the truth...
bruised ego...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

part 14
nice part...
she seems like a nice lady...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

part 15
OMG that was so rude of him...
poor Avantika...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

part 16
liked the way Geet talked about motherhood...
why is Maan like this?

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

part 17
nice part...
is Maan falling for her?
cont soon dear...

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

amazing update...

u stopped at the wrong time...

waiting fr next part...

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#200

~Ajeeb Dasta~
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PART 18

'do you know geet... I always wanted to tell you... You... You make me feel different!' geet froze with little surprise tone... She mumbled... Than looked right back at his brown eyes...
'w..h...a...t...'

'I don't know what I feel... But... It's sweet... It's believable... It's...'

Geet pushed maan way without any delay as she could observe the seriousness on his face... She looked down and than around the party... Mostly all were lost in there own little world...

Maan looked back at geet with little surprise and her shocking face. The light slowly started to disrepair along with geet over the stair case...

Maan spines around, wondering did he say something wrong? He just want to share his feeling... Nothing els...

After one hour, as the party seemed to calm down... maan walked up to geet's room to confirm his words...

Maan slowly knocks but there were no answer... He knocks few time, still no answer, he slowly pushes the door, the room was empty... His heart was still calm, unable to think outside of the box. He just wanted talk about his feeling. Nothing els.. Nothing more...

He was about to turn around to leave however than he realized that the room was too empty. He looked on the bed, the black sari neatly folded on the bed, left alone... Her luggage was not there... Was she gone?

A panic suddenly without realization smacked maan's face. In worry he rushed in to the room opening the cupboard, it was empty. Was she truly gone?

Maan rushed downstair, asking the guards...
'where is geet?' he in panic questioned, out of breath... His eyes restlessly looked here and there around the gate... Maybe a glimpse...
'she left about an hour ago sir!' the guard with little worry tone replied back...
'WHAT? WHY DIDN'T YOU CALL ME?' maan screamed at the guards...
In fear guard took few step back... Breathing heavily in fear.
'sorry sir... I thought you all new!'

Maan spines around, brushing his hair back...

...
Maan restlessly rang the CIA, however, they simply refuged to give any details. He knew it was pointless to call them for geet's information, however, he have to, he was in love, madly in love with geet. Maan burst his hair back in frustration... 'geet... Where are you? Please call... If you have any feeling for me please...'

Maan restlessly spines his phone, wondering what to do. Bittuji on the other hand looked at his chif in worry manner.

'if this worry you that much, why don't you go to England! We know roughly where she lives! Right!'

'what rubbish?' maan snaps. Do you know how big is England? Where would I look for her?'

'I remember she was talking over the phone once mentioning one of the area in London. Now there can not be more than one area with the same name and that to in London!'
Maan looked at bittuji with little thoughtfully face. 'ok... Book my ticket bittuji!'

His restless act was simply unbearable, avantika, along with all the house member looked at him...

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