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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

~Ajeeb Dasta~
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PART 19

Geet smiled at seeing her dark brown door, gosh it has been long. 'oh I missed my house so much...' she came by, kissing the door... Oh baby... Back home...

'If you missed home this much what took you long?' the man showed a false angry face. Geet looked back at his gentle sweet face...
'are you doubting my love for you all?' geet simply questioned.
The man smile... With a reply 'I could never...'

'there is a surprise for you...'
'hmm...' geet looked sideway at him... 'acca... And what is that... I want all the mess to be cleared... Soon as possible!' she looks back at him with a false angry eyes...

Soon as geet touched the door, it flew open with two crazy kids... Screaming as they threw bunc of popper on geet and the man who stood at the door step with her luggage...

Both closed there eyes, in anticipation what els will hit there face... Geet suppressed her whole body on the person who stood behind her, while he securely engulfed her in his hug in protective manner...

Than came the big blow as NT popped a massive popper on her face...

'ypiii... At last you are back...'

'MUMIII...' the 2 kids screamed... Geet slowly opens her eyes, tears instantly build up by seeing her two angel... Jearsy and Roy... Her two kids. Jearsy, her 8 years old daughter and her 6 years old son... Roy... Both was reflection of geet and abhay...

'welcome back baby...' abhay, kissed geet from the back, resting his one hand on her waist and another held her luggage to enter the house.

Geet looked at abya: Abhay, a perfect reflection of maan. A perfect mirror image of maan. Geet was surprised enough to encounter maan on there fast day back at that party... For a moment she really thought it was her husband... But his arrogant and rude words made her realize... No.. No one could be her abhay...
'I love you...' she kissed his cheek, before talking her both child in her arm. They came by hugging her tight...'

'oh mama I missed you so much. I love you... I love you... I love you...' Jearsy her eldest daughter kissed geet on the face madly, while Roy, who looked like his dad gave her one kiss.

'I am angry with you..' Roy angrily spoke through his 1 less front teeth.

'meri baby lost teeth?' geet held his small face, 'now open your mouth?'
'awww...' roy opens his mouth wide to show his gap. 'tooth fairy gave me 2 pound!' he proudly claimed.

Abhay laughed... While NT sat at the corner with her hubby.

'kunzoos...' geet looked back at her husband while picking her angel up. Roy spines his hand around geets neck, loving his mummy. 'couldn't you pay my son little more?' abhay looked at geets mischievous complaining face.:)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

~Ajeeb Dasta~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

PART 20

Roy distracts, 'but it was tooth fairy... Not pappa!' he cutely looked at his momma...

'I know beta..' geet spoke while walking in to the dinning room, 'but tooth fairy requires permission before entering our house and ask how much she should put under the pillow... And do you know why they should ask momma and pappa first?' geet questioned.

'because pappa and mamma knows what's best for us!' he happily smiled, while giving a small peck on geets lips.

Jearsy came by, hugging his DAd. 'have you brought me everything? I have to show it to my friends. Some traditional Indian gifts...'

Geet looked at abhay with rolling eyes. 'at-least let mama rest.' abhay tells his daughter. Your mum just came!

Jearsy keeps quit, smiling sadly... Geet came by, brushing her hair gently back, '2moro morning. Promise...'

NT came by to hug than her hubby to shake hand.

'All the foods are done, all the cleaning, everything... And now.. You four enjoy, I will see you 2moro..'

Abhay walked upstairs with geet's luggage, while geet fed Roy & Jearsy... After they went to bed, geet slowly slipped in her warmth bath, relaxed from the 9 hours flight. Abhay came in with the warm candle smell... She looked up at him, picking her wet hand out, to hold his...

Abhay wore a sleeveless top and night tracks, his strong muscle gave his bicep a shape,... He sat on his knee next to the bathtub, stroking geet's cheat under water, than her shoulder...

'was it tiring?'' he came forward and kissed her forehead...
'everything disappears and calms down... Soon as I see you...' geet mumbles while lost in his handsome face...
'have you asked mum about maan? What did she say?'
'she thought my twin brother was dead!' abhay smiles...
'he looks like you but that's it...' geet brings her naked body up from the water, holding abhay by his neck... 'because you are my only abhay...' she suppressed her lips on his, sucking the tongue out... 'oh abhay... I have missed you so much...'

A tear rolled down geet's eyes... Abhay looked back, stroking it way... 'I could never see a single tear on your eyes...' he kissed both before helping geet to clean her self, warping her around a towel and than carried her to there bedroom.

She cuddled her self up against his body, unable to let go...
She roughly dried her hair before dragging abhay to the bed, kissing him hungrily and abhay replying the taste with equal pressure...

'leave this job..' he eventually spoke between his breath... His hand slowly came up, stroking the wet hair way from her face. 'I need you... Our kids needs you...' he looked back at geet's worry eyes... He knew well why she couldn't, but abhay had no regret...

Geet came by, stroking his face, 'I can't risk that. What if yash hurts you?... He shot RK, thinking it was you... He may be lucky, but I can't take that luck chance with you...' geet suppressed her lips again against his lips. 'I will die...'

'shh...' abhay picks geet's naked body, covering with a warm duvet. 'no... I always pray to god... That he should take me before you...'

Geet instantly covers his lips. The word "lost" itself brought geet in to a living hell. Her heart started to beat in random motion and she always fails to control as it travels down her eyes as tears.

'I love you abhay... & this love have greater meaning than a simple words...' she looked back at her husband, he still posses the same young face when she met him 11 years back... And for 11 years her heart only throbs for his presence, his love... His demand...

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

~Ajeeb Dasta~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

PART 21

'let's forget everything and enjoy our life like never before...' geet smiled, suppressing her back against the pillow while abhay slowly crawls his way up with his lips, from her gentle stomach to her curves... Than to her soft neck to the delicious lips...

Abhays hand twisted in-between her bony finger, smothering his smell, stroking lovingly as they made love after almost a month...

'I missed you so much...' geet mumbled as they rocked in rhythms...

'so have I...'

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maan opened his eyes slowly to see England's miserable days... 'gosh England!' he annoyingly face ways under his blanket imagining geet... 'when will she be here?' he mumbles... 'my morning comes with your good morning and your sweet face and the night disappears in your arm...'

He looked up, frustrated yet feeling a welcome warmness. His lazy mind wanted to dream about sweet geet, sweet lips, those curly hair... Playing in-between his finger... When that will happen?

Maan sat up, when bittuji walks in. 'any news?' Maan questioned.

'no chief! I - am trying to locate, I have send people to examine tall the roads, there are about 70 odd roads in that area... it will take few days... Meantime why don't you look around London, maybe you are lucky enough to encounter her, as she is in holiday!'

'do you really think, bittuji, I will met her in London?' MK annoyingly rolled his eyes and stood up to walk in to the bathroom...

His 20 million pounds flat gave a view of the river themes along with London eye. He looked at it, and endless building... Laughing mockingly... 'great! Blind goose chase!'

...

Abhay plaid with geet's curly hair, as they laid comfortably under there thick white duvet, cuddled up in one another arm...
'I could never get board with your curly hair...' abhay mumbled as he looked down... 'gosh you are so beautiful...'
Geet instantly opens her eyes, remembering how maan had said in past... She smiled, thinking, identical twins yet so different... Her abhay had so much maturity and only behaves like a kid with her and there maan... She can compare him to Jearsy and Roy...

He pushed her naked body up, kissing abhays neck, and strolled down his chest than back at his lips... Abhay enjoyed the flow than grabbed her by hair, bringing her up to make love again...

...

Geet and abhay took long shower, after than made breakfast, there both kids ran down, fighting while Jearsy trying to act all grown up.

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 12 years ago

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

~Ajeeb Dasta~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

PART 22

'mama, look, Roy is trying to steal my makeup. Don't he understand he requires shaving machine not lipstick!' she pushed her hair back with little anyonece...

'mum... Tell Jearsy to give me the lipstick!' he pulled a face...

Geet puts an omelet on both of there plate and than at abhays... Looking at him annoyingly. 'that's what you were teaching our kids?'

'I have tried!' he looks at roy, his half face covered in lipstick. 'and I did not teach that! That's why I tell you we should have another boy at least Roy will show his boyness!' he laughed.

'that's not a solution abhay! You can't even look after this two...' she walked in to the kitchen while complaining... ''

Abhay left there two kids eating than he flowed geet... 'it is the solution!' he hugged geet from the back...kissing her cheek gently... 'that means 2 years... You are not moving way from my eyes!'

'no!' geet snaps, shyly looking down.. 'we are not having another kid!'

'and why?'

'because you my-husband, never take the responsibility!'

'oh look who is talking!' abhay suppressed his body more over geet... 'who is been looking after our kids for past month?'

'pata hi...' she elbowed abhay.. Mum called me that how much you have disturbed them and papaji... NT... You even called lolo...'

'have they been complaining to you?' he scratched his head... 'I only gave them to mum when I went to work!... That's just a lye!' abhay complained.

Geet giggled... While giving two toast to the kids.

'mumy I can't eat this much!'

'shh! Look how much weight you have lost! Have you seen kids at your age... They are so fat!'

'good na!' abhay distracts... 'we don't want fat kids... What like our next door neighbor, who requires wheelchair to move!'

Jearsy and abhay gave one another high five... Remembering how fat is there next door neighbor is!

Geet spines around, pointing a spoon at abhay... 'shh!... You remind me of that maan now. And I was so proud that my husband is so different!'

'what can I do? After all we are twin!'

Abhay's laughter disappeared as soon the reality smacked him, that his brother is alive, a super super star... He was truly alive! How he didn't know?

NEXT- ... thats all for today.. dosay how is my twist?
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anjalisen85

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

update soon

so geet is married and have two children😲

then what about maan?

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: anjalisen85
update soon

so geet is married and have two children😲

then what about maan?

Have you experienced... Felt the emotions... felt the regret... the torments...

When a man you love... Loves you back...
When a man that only believes in remorse...
And a man who mahsoos the pain...
This is a story of my life... Love... Pain... Hatred... & remorse...

hehe... lets see :)

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P0K0

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Oh...my...god!!!!

Are u Pagal...!!!

Mahengai ke zamane mein itni sari update...wo bhi free mein...!!!

Seriously u really R one of a kind yaar...my eyes popped out seeing the pm...and u were the person saying u r busy with uni...(humph)what a lame xcuse😉...

Ok...u wanted comment...so i gave u comment...so me off to read...don't mind if u do not find likes from me cause when i'm here from my cell phone...like button doesn't work...!!!

Love,

Zahran.

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: Temporary99
Oh...my...god!!!!

Are u Pagal...!!!

Mahengai ke zamane mein itni sari update...wo bhi free mein...!!!

Seriously u really R one of a kind yaar...my eyes popped out seeing the pm...and u were the person saying u r busy with uni...(humph)what a lame xcuse😉...

Ok...u wanted comment...so i gave u comment...so me off to read...don't mind if u do not find likes from me cause when i'm here from my cell phone...like button doesn't work...!!!

Love,

Zahran.

lol... hehe.. i am busy but somehow i am loving typing this.. and thats why i updte all togather so no worry for few days lol...

hehe... do u think i should stop than.. and don't give any more updates lol

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Eram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

dear...

thanks

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P0K0

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Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Fantastic updates...geet has 2 kids!!!...not only 2...but also 5+ old kids...!!!

Which anti-aging cream she applies...me wanna know too.

Continue not so soon...cause we have to gulp down the shocks.

Love,

Zahran.