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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyharika


maine bola main tujhe gaali dena chahti hoon kya padhti hai tu

anyways update shayad kal dongi ya parso😕

😲😡

mereko kayko
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Posted: 12 years ago
So finally geet submitted herslf to maan in tru sense.

Maan thinks he is nt in lov bt he lovs geet fr sure.he jus havn't realise it yet or doesnt want to name their relation as doesnt feel like to b committed.

Geet did took a very big step.

Gosh!! Maan left widout saying anything to geet...

Hw will geet react...

Conti soon.

And one ques,dont knw shud i ask or nt.
In all ur ff/ss evry lov scene strts vry nicely bt ends abruptly. In a way u r giving lov scne bt still nt giving...

Hope ques is nt wierd...

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Posted: 12 years ago

tu gussa mat ho tujhe gussa karne ka right nahi hai tu busy soul hai na issi liye gussa mujhe karna hai 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet

So finally geet submitted herslf to maan in tru sense.

Maan thinks he is nt in lov bt he lovs geet fr sure.he jus havn't realise it yet or doesnt want to name their relation as doesnt feel like to b committed.

Geet did took a very big step.

Gosh!! Maan left widout saying anything to geet...

Hw will geet react...

Conti soon.

And one ques,dont knw shud i ask or nt.
In all ur ff/ss evry lov scene strts vry nicely bt ends abruptly. In a way u r giving lov scne bt still nt giving...

Hope ques is nt wierd...


complaint registered yaar lekin main sirf uss update ke liye deti hoon jo jyada imp ho aage aage dekho na
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Posted: 12 years ago

LOVE?? REVENGE?? RENAMED AS BANDISHEIN MOHABBAT!!!


SUMMARY

for new readers!!!

PART 31


Geet woke up in the mrng and found herself alone on the bed, she was shocked to core..... yeh maan kaha gaye?? She thought and then took her phone, called him. Bt he was not picking it, some strange fear engulfed her whole body. Geet did not know as to how many times she called maan, in a way she lost the count of the no of calls. She sat on the bed hugging her knees shedding unending tears... kyun maan?? kyun?? Kyun chodke chale gaye mujhse?? Kya galti hua tha mujhse?? Then thinking in the other way, a negative way geet's heart almost wrenched with an extreme pain.... Kahi maan ne mujhe iss liye toh nahi chod diya kyunki unhe jo chahiye woh mil gaya?? Nahi geet tu aise soch bhi kaise sakti hai?? bahar gaye honge?? Lekin unhone apna phone bhi lift nahi kiya!!! Kya hua hoga?? Itne saare calls?? Ek do baar mein hamesha lift karte hai!!! toh aaj kya hua hoga??


As the time passed geet felt that maan left her as he got wat he wanted from her unknown to the fact that something fatal has happened so is the reason of him leaving all of a sudden. She cried and cried didn't know until wen and finally taking some after pills she dozed off with tiredness.


*KNOCK* *KNOCK* no response!!! Geet!!! prem called geet for nth time, she was not opening the door, finally after a long time she answered.... Kaun hai?? clutching the spread close to her body


Prem: main hoon geet prem!!! Now can u please open the door for me?? Geet did not know wat to do!!! Her clothes were scattered here and there... aayi prem bus gimme sometime ill open saying this geet wore her dress and ran to welcome prem


Prem: kya hua geet itni der kyun lagadiya?? He asked doubtfully


Geet: nahi prem I was bathing to time lag gaya bus sorry to make u wait she said not looking down, bt prem cud somewhat make out that something was bothering her. Both of them sat, prem was observing geet, she seemed to be disturbed!!! Is it maan??


Geet: tumne bataya nahi tum yaha kaise?? She asked to start a casual talk with prem


Prem: tumhara phone switch off ho gaya tumne dekha nahi!!! Prem said looking at geet all the while.... Haan woh charging khatm ho gaya I did not see


Prem: maan called u!!! tumne call lift nahi kiya toh he called me and said that he left to india for important work and wont be able to come back here. I am sorry geet kaam hi kuch jyada tha ki I cudnt take u with us anyways packing karlo tum hamare hotel mein shift kar rahi ho


Geet: nahi prem I am not coming!!! She said with a firmness in the voice


Prem: par kyun??... prem I want to go back mujhe yaha rehne ka mann nahi kar raha


Prem: oh u are getting bored here?? Sorry kaha na gudiya ab chalo mere saath


Geet: nahi prem I truly mean that I wanna go back plz send me back geet seemed determined this time


Prem: I understand geet!!! lekin aise akele kaise jaogi?? This is the first time eva u came so far and now u want to go alone?? Sochlo will u be able to?? we are still here for 20 more days geet even meera yash bhi project ke complete hone tak india nahi aayenge


Geet: I can manage prem itne din se akele hi toh reh rahi hoon aaj kya hai?? I am not a kid plz send me back!!!


Finally prem had to agree to geet left with no option, bt geet didn't know that these 20days will change everything!!! Especially her love for maan, the relation they were sharing till now!!!


GEET'S ROOM:


Geet was abt to open the door of her room wen the house owner stopped her... geet tum yeh room abhi ka abhi khali kardo aur chali jao yaha se!!! the house owner said guiltily


Geet: lekin aunty aise achanak main kaha jaongi?? Aap khud sochiye aur aisa hua bhi kya?? Y cannot I stay in the house?? I am paying the rent at right time too geet said unbelievingly


House owner: baat rent ki nahi hai geet association mein complaint gaya tha ki koi aadmi tumhare absence mein yaha peeke, he is creating a nuisance taking ur name


Geet: lekin kaun hai aunty?? I mean maine kuch nahi kiya!!! Koi aur agar aisa karega toh uska punishment mujhe milega??


House owner: I donno all that geet he says he was the teacher in ur skul, he said he lost job bcoz of u (remember the part where karthi was punished by this teacher and he hit karthi, Mr. sarangi, social teacher, part 13!!!)


Geet: woh?? Haan maine complaint kiya tha coz he harassed karthi bus aap iss baat ke liye mujhe ghar se nikal jaane ke liye keh rahi hai??


House owner: baat chahe koi bhi ho geet he is creating fuss here aur main kuch nahi karsakti issi liye after a lot of discussion we have decided that ull vacate ur flat that too in an hr no more discussions on this JUST LEAVE!!! Maine dekha tha kisi aadmi ko tumhare saath tumhare flat mein uss time toh maine kuch nahi kaha na?? bina shaadi ke u were staying with a man, aur society mein aise logon ko koi apne ghar mein rehne nahi deta tabhi maine kuch nahi kaha bt now that the situation is out of control ill have to do this geet I am sorry I am helpless


Geet: lekin aunty thoda time dedijiye 1 hr!!! how am I to manage?? Plz geet tried begging bt she didn't buge and then a voice... GEET!!! pack ur luggage, u are coming with me!!! Geet stood rooted understanding who the person is while the house owner looked at both of them and left saying... jaldi karna somebody is on the way to occupy the house!!!


sorry for stopping the update at wrong time kya karon girls main hoon aadat se majboor honest readers gimme lamba comments now as they are the only encouragement for me to update!!!


thanks amrutha for the comment and aashu tu busy soul ho gayi issi liye soch rahi thi ki gaali doon!!! mona!!! love u for the comment u gave!!!


de rahi hoon na regular updates???😃😃


PREVIOUS PART:
PART 30

NEXT PART:
PART 32


Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😡

wapas kaminapanti😡

wo blue use kiya to obvious hai Maan hi tha😆

maan kamina is back for revenge is it😕😭

u didnt show whats geet reaction after prem ka ebtry..did she believe maan or not😕

love ya😃
Edited by aashluvsmaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
u always leave us on CLIFFHANGER😡😡but i wonder yeh maan itni jaldi kaisay a gaya?🤔😛😆
MAAN hi hai na?😆
eagerly waiting for next part😃
Edited by sona-rai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am surprised to find such a jaldi update...😲😆...
Jokes apart...it was a nice update...
Tho geet ne abhi maan ko mis understand kar hi liya ki he left her...and she is even back from the tour alone and that too so fast...
Now yeh owner kya keh rahi hain ...just because somebody is coming in the night didn't she think that he may be harassing her...nahin sab ulta hi sochna hain...stupid woman aur upar se ek ghanta diya hain khali karne ke liye...bechari kaha jaayegi yeh socha bhi nahin...
And here comes the saviour maan geet ko apne saath le jaane ke liye...ab dekhthe hain ki geet uske saath jaayegi yaa nahin...
Update soon...Waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nooo you can't leave us hanging like this

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