MG SS:~:Back to My BABY:~Pt4/Pg23 Got HER BACK

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Back To My Baby

INTRO


"Geet, i am sorry baby...but i have to go to Mumbai as my Boss want me to continue in that Mumbai Branch as a HRM department head..." Maan said sweetly as he and Geet were here, in this expensive hotel to have a candel light dinner

"But Maan..." Before she can speak...Maan spoke up


"I will be back soon and will take you along with me...for now, i am going to live in a quarter but i assure you, as soon as i buy my own apartment out there... I will call you...please" He looked pleadingly at her and that's what he do all the time to make her agree

Like always she felt defeated infront of him...and nod in yes as a tear drop from her eye

Maan saw this and pulled his chair beside her and let her put her head on his shoulder

He keep calming her hairs with tender moment of his hands

"Don't cry baby, it will be hard for me to go then..." Geet wiped her tears, hearing him

"I am coming back soon...and i will keep on calling you..." He said looking forward for his success

"Now smile" Geet look up with a weak smile...Maan traced her cheek to make her smile get bright and hug her from waist

"I love you" he said sweetly

"I love you too..." she said feeling him close to her...as she put her hand on her tummy

"And your love will stay with me forever...Our love" she smiled at the thought but didn't tell her about her pregnancy

Thinking he might lost his concentration...and that she don't want...he worked for whole two years, after there marriage to get this position...and now, she can't be a hurdle...and more than that, he is going to be back soon in a month or two as he promised

But will he return?...if yes then when?

INDEX

Part One-The PhoneCall------Page-6

Part Two-HE IS BACK------Page-13

Part Three-Confrontation--------Page-17

Part Four-Got HER BACK-------Page-23

its just a 4 part SS...an old one i am sharing now...so you will surly found an immaturity in my writing...plz ignore that..hehe😆😆



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept..

So they r married but he is going away to Mumbai

Geet pregnant but she did not tell maan

Will he be back

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ohh...so maan is going to mumbai...they are married and geet is pregnant but she did not tell him...hmm...
don't know feel like he is going to come back very late...
update soon...waiting for it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start dear continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THEY ARE MARRIED BUT HE HAS TO GO TO MUMBAI FOR A MONTH
HE DOESNT KNOW SHE IS PREGNANT
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!good start..
so geet hides her pregnancy...
he s not going to return soon?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yay new SS and good start...maaneet married already nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the Prologue ...nice one
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please don't make it a sad one
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Posted: 12 years ago
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he is defo not going to come soon...waiting for next update soon...

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