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Hi friends this is ur own jazz, and im not plagirizing some one else's work. I am just reposting all my works with new ID... so this is an OS on maaneet.. plz hit like and comment... And do send me a friend request too, as this is my new ID


Part 1

There was pin drop silence in the room..

There were 5 people sitting in the room but it seemed like the room was empty...

There was not even a slight movement from any of them...


1 middle-aged couple and an old lady have grave expressions on their face...


While the young girl (maybe in her late teens) and young man (maybe in his middle 20s) were emitting fire from their eyes...as if they would kill each other by mere looking at each other...


At last the middle-aged man said "Dadima, Jo hona tha ho gaya, but ab hamein aage ki sochni chahiye!!"


Dadima looked at the young man sadly and nods slowly.



The young guy tries to protest "But Dadima--"


Dadima gives him an angry look and says "Maan, aap chup rahiye ab! Aapne jo karna tha aapne kar liya, now let the elders resolve this!!!"


Maan looks away frustratingly and his eyes fell on the young girl who was smirking tauntingly at him, and his frustration turned into anger.


He glares at her and was gonna say something when the middle-aged man again spoke "I think hamein in dono ki shadi karwa deni chahiye!!"


Her smirk and his anger vanished instantly and shock washed through both of their bodies.


They looked at the man with widened eyes as if he has just come out of some spaceship and was talking into an alien language!!


After few seconds, the girl came out of the shock and tries to protest "But Dad..."


But again she was silenced by him "Geet just shut up!! Tumne jo bhi kiya hai na, uske liye hum tumhe kabhi maaf nahi kar sakte!! Lekin ab tum wohi karogi Jo hum chahenge!!!"


Geet looks away in frustration at her helplessness and glares towards Maan, who is the cause of all this mess...


Her glare was reciprocated with the same intense glare from him too...


Dadima says "Aap theek keh rahe hain Mohinder! Ab hamare paas in dono ki shadi ke ilawa aur koi raasta nahin hai!! Hum agle hafte hi inki shadi karwa dete hain!!!"


Maan and Geet looks at Dadima in shock and then looks at each other in anger and both stood up resistantly and says at the same time


Maan: I don't want to marry her!!
Geet: I don't want to marry him!!


Mahinder, Rano and Dadima also stands up and dadima says with finality "Aap dono ke chahne naa chahne se koi farak nahi padta hai!! Aap dono ki shadi agle hafte hi hogi!!"


And all three elders left the room leaving behind the lion and the tigress who were ready to pounce at each other and rip each other's body bit by bit any moment...


Maan and Geet glares at each other while trying to kill each other with the invisible daggers that their eyes were throwing...


They slowly pounced towards each other and the room fills with the heat of their anger...


Their anger has crossed the endurance level today and both of them were mentally blaming each other for this marriage...


Geet says angrily : This is all your fault!


Maan(with the same amount of anger): Blaming others for your own faults is your old habit, am I right Geet??


Now they are standing face to face.


Geet: Dont think that I will marry 'you'!!! Even if you are the last man on this earth, I will prefer to become nun than marry you!!


She said with disgust and anger!!


Maan: Then go ahead! Atleast mera peechha to chhootega tumse!!


Their faces mere inches away from each other...


Geet: Dont think I'll leave you so easily Mr. Loser Singh Khurana!!! You have to pay for what you did!!!


Maan fakes fear and says sarcastically "oooh I'm scared!! Don't forget Geet Handa ke tumhara saamna Maan Singh Khurana se hai! And the payback is on you this time!!!


Their breaths fanning on each other's face...


Geet: Asshole


Maan: Bitch


And he smashes his mouth on hers and kissed her wildly.. Geet reciprocated with the same wild passion... They kissed, nibbled, bit, sucked each other's lips harshly...


He held her from her waist and pulled her more closer to him while her hands travelled in his hair and she held onto his hair strongly...


He slammed her body into the wall while still kissing her rudely... Their tongues in a fight now to get the upper hand in the kiss...


Maan broke the kiss and held her hair tightly and pulled her head back giving him better access to her neck...


He kissed...nibbled...bit her neck leaving his marks on her...and he pulled her top down to give his mouth free access to her cleavage now...


He squeezed her breasts...sucked...bit...her nipples hungrily...


Geet moaned and pushed him to the wall and now came in top of him... She wildly broke the buttons on his shirt...kissed him on his chest...licked his nipples...making him moan in pleasure...his hands traveling to her back of hair...


Her mouth moved up to his mouth while her hands travelled to the front of his jeans and opened the button...he moaned...his manhood in her hands...


With a fine movement...he ripped off her skirt...he entered her...with a rhythm...she tries to scream in pain and pleasure...but he smashes his mouth on her lips...she scratched his back...his arms...


He holds her hands...pin them on the side...while still moving in the rhythm...still kissing her wildly...


"Jangli billi!!"...Whispered in between the kiss on her mouth...she bit his lips in passion...whipered while panting "basttard!!"


Kissed again...biting...sucking...nibbling...hands entwined...


Reached their climax...moved faster...moment of ecstasy...he collapses on her...both panting heavily...kissed her gently...whispers in her lips "I hate you..."


She kissed him back...whispers "I hate you too!!!"



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Part 2

The whole house is swarming with people doing the preparations... Kids were playing around...ladies were singing songs on dholki...everybody is happy that the most happening couple of Delhi is at last getting married...

Everybody is happy...except the bride and the bridegroom!!!

Geet is in her room pacing from one side to another in tension...

She has just one day left!!! Tomorrow her parents will marry her to Maan!! She gritted her teeth in anger at the thought of his name... Jerk!!!

Her mind is not working anymore... In the last week, she has tried everything to persuade her parents not to marry her to that asshole, but her parents were firm on their decision...

She sighs and says to the empty room "I'm sorry Dad! I'm sorry Mom!! But you leave me with no other option!!"

She determinedly takes out a bag from the top of her cupboard and starts filling it with her clothes...She finds a picture of her and Maan's from under one of her dress...

She looks at it for a moment...those were the happy times... But she shakes off the feeling and comes to reality... She tears off the picture nonchalantly...and closes her bag...

But she can't go out with the bag in her hand...everybody would know that she's running away...

She looks around and goes to the balcony... She thows the bag down and smirks to herself...

She walks casually out of her room...

As she goes downstairs, she looks around that nobody sees her...

She tries to sneak out silently when she heard a voice from behind her...

"Geet!!"

She closes her eyes in frustration and looks back trying to put a casual face.

Dad: where are you going Geet?

Geet: Parlour dad

She was ready for this answer!!

Outside the house:

Maan is all ready to go out and is about to sit in the car, when dadima calls him "Maan, where are you going??"

Maan fumbles as he wasn't ready with the answer.

Maan: umm... Wo... Dadima... I'm going to the... Yeah I'm going to the parlour!!!

Just then Geet comes out...

Geet saw Maan and glares at him which was reciprocated by a glare...

Their throwing-daggers-with-the-eyes game was interrupted by dadima!!!

Dadima: Geet, ab aap kahan jaa rahi hain?

Geet: Parlour dadima!!

Maan whispers "Jitna marzi parlour ke chakkar laga lo, but no parlour can make your ugly face beautiful!!"

His remark was missed by dadima but not by Geet, which was his intention...

Geet gave him an angry glare and was gonna use an abusive word for him when dadima said "Maan is also going to the parlour!"

Geet looks at Maan and smirks tauntingly and whispers for just Maan's ears "Mujhe nahin pata tha, ke tumhare shouq ladkiyon wale hain!!!"

Maan narrows his eyes but before he could reply Dadima said "Geet beta, why don't you go with Maan??"

Geet and Maan looks at Dadima and then at each other and the same instant both remembers their plan and said at the same time "NO Dadima!!"

Dadima looks at them confused and Maan said "Nahin Dadima..woh actually...hum dono ka parlour alag alag hai!! Haan!!" he was very proud of his excuse and he looks at Geet and prompts her "Hai na?"

Geet first thought of not helping him in his lie, but then decided that it's in her own benefit too, so she says "Ji dadima!"

"Koi baat nahin! Maan will drop you first and then he will go to his parlour!!!" dadima said.

Both looked at dadima with artifial smile while cursing her and their fate in their mind!!!

He said reluctantly seeing there's no escape "Ji dadima!!"

Dadima goes inside leaving both Maan and Geet glaring at each other.

Maan thought that after dropping her, then he will execute his plan...

Geet was looking at her bag with longing eyes which she has thrown under her room's balcony when she heard him say "Ab chalo!! Mere paas poora din nahi hai tumhara badsoorat chehra dekhne ke liye!!"

Geet looks back at him and says angrily "Then go away!! Mujhe tumhare saath kahin nahin jaana hai! Samjhe tum?? Now get lost!!!" she didn't want to get into any arguments with him right now!! She has to pick up her bag before anybody would see it over there...

She was again looking at her bag when Maan follows her eyes and saw the bag under her room's balcony and he understood her plan... But how can he leave the chance to have an upper hand on her!!!

"Ohhh!!! To bhagne ka plan banaya gaya hai!!!"

She looks back at him while fear starts engulfing her... He was the last person she wanted her plan to be disclosed to...

He said casually while enjoying himself "Aur ghar pe jhooth bola gaya hai ke parlour jaa rahi hoon!! Nice plan Geet!!! But chhoti si gadbad ho gayi, nahin?". He smirks and says "Tumhara kya haal hoga Geet agar main abhi ander jaa kar tumhara plan sab ko bata doon??"

Geet tries to sound brave and orders him "You will NOT do anything like that!!"

Maan folds his arms on his chest casually and says "And why would you think that I won't do that??"

"Because you also don't want to marry me!!" she pointed out hoping for him to see some sense...

"Wo to ab waise bhi nahin hogi! You know after everybody will know about your plan, you will become wrong and I will become right!!! So they will not make me marry someone who has tried to run from her own wedding!!". He was happy with his plan... Geet has herself given her weakness in his hands...

Geet looks around in frustration and her eyes fell on the bags in his car's back seat!! And she realises that he was planning the same thing like hers.

She smirks and looks at him with glint of mischief in her eyes. Maan didn't know what has brought this change in her expressions...

She says while smiling "You want to tell everybody? Go ahead!!"

He looks at her suspiciously...

Geet opens his car's back seat and takes out his bag while Maan's eyes widens in shock...

She said smiling "If you tell my secret, I will tell yours!!! I'm sure ye bag leke tum parlour to bilkul nahin jaa rahe the!! Nahin??"

Maan glares at her and says "Fine! Teri bhi chup, meri bhi chup!! Deal?"

Geet says mischievously "Itni jaldi nahin!!! Main chup sirf tab rahoongi, agar tum apna plan poora karoge!!"

"Matlab?"

"Matlab..ye raha bag...aur ye rahi car...go ahead and run away!!! Aakhir meri jaan to bachegi!! Mujhe tumse shadi karni to nahi padegi!!!" she said making a disgusted face...

"Excuse me! Main kiyu bhagoonga?? Bhagne to tum bhi wali thi na?? To tum bhaag jaao, meri jaan bach jaayegi!!"

Geet looks at him angrily "I'm a girl Maan! Did you ever think what will happen to my family name if I run away?? You are a guy! Nobody would care if you run away!!"

"Ab tumhe apni family ki izzat ki parwah ho rahi hai?? Kuch der pehle jab khud bhaag rahi thi, tab nahi socha apni family ki izzat ke baare mein???"

Geet: "Socha tha!! Par tum se shadi karne se achha, main bhaag jaaoon!!"

Maan: to bhaag jaao! Abhi bhi der nahi hui hai!!

Geet: Main kiyun bhaagoon?? Jab ke hum is situation mein tumhari wajah se hain!!

Maan's mouth fell open in shock and he narrows his eyes and says

Maan: Whatt??!!! Meri wajah se???

Geet: Jee haan!!! Door ko lock karna ladke ka farz hota hai!!!

Maan: What?? Kahaan likha hai, ke darwaaza hamesha ladka hi lock karta hai? Tumhare haathon mein mehdi lagi thi kya???

Geet: Oh! To iska ilzaam bhi ab tum mujhpar daaloge??? For your kind information, door hamesha ladka lock karta hai! Agar yakeen nahi hai, to mere paas bohut saari bollywood movies ki DVD hain, bhijwa doongi!!! Aaraam se baith ke dekh lena!!!

Maan: Excuse me! Main koi Hindi movies ka villian nahi hoon aur na hi main tumhe koi rape karne jaa raha tha, Jo main door band karta!!!

Geet: (sarcastically) Nahin nahin! Tum to pooja karne wale the na?? To door kiyun band karte!!

Maan: (sarcastically too) Ofcourse tumhe to pata hi hoga na Geet!! Aakhir pooja mein aarti to tum hi kar rahi thi!!!

Geet: You are such an asshole!!!

Maan: Perfect for a bitch like you!!!

Geet narrows her eyes and he holds her from her waist and pulls her closer to him..

He said while looking from her eyes to her lips and back to her eyes "So what's the plan now??"

Geet closes the little distance between their faces and licks his lips seductively... Maan takes her tongue in his mouth and starts kissing wildly while their tongues again starts a fight inside their mouths.

Maan picks her up while still kissing hungrily...and puts her on the passenger seat of the car and reclines the seat back, while getting on top of her...

Both of them were very uncomfortable in the car seat because of it's hardness and small size, but neither of them objected. In fact they loved this!! This was so wild and crazy!!!

Making out on a car seat with a house swarming with people, was the most wild fantasy of theirs...

They kissed each other wildly...biting...sucking...nibbling each other's lips...

His hand moved under her top and moved up...he squeezed her breasts from top of her brassiere while his other hand moves at her back and picks her back a little...still kissing her hungrily...with a swift movement opened her brassiere hook giving himself free access to his breast...

He picked up her top along with her brassiere and started kissing...sucking...biting...her breasts hungrily...

Geet's moans...she digs her nails in his back from top of his shirt...

He moves up back towards her neck...she opens his shirt's buttons wildly...

Moves with Geet on top of him...

She kissed him on his chest ...biting and licking his nipples...kissed his shoulders...while his hand travels under her skirt...

He puts his finger in her...she moans and bites his shoulder harshly...he whimpers in sweet pain...

She opens his Jean's button...he moans while her mouth finds his mouth...

They again moves...now again Maan on top of her...



He holds her head back...kissing her hungrily on the neck and shoulders...

Geet pulled his hair in pleasure...breathing heavily...her hands travelled to his manhood...he moans...

He enters her...moving in a rhythm...Geet moans in pleasure...

She digs her nails in his skin...

He reaches her mouth...kisses her hungrily..biting...and sucking...her lips...

He whispers on her mouth in between the kiss "So are you sorry Geet?"

Geet panting..in between the kiss... "Never!! You have to apologise to me!!! It was your fault!!!"

Still moving in a rhythm..."You said your parents were out!!! So it was your fault!!!"

She bit him on his lips wildly "They did went out!! But you were supposed to lock the door!! So it was your fault!!!"

They reached their peak...and he again collapses on her exhausted and panting heavily...

He kissed her again...she said in between the kiss breathing heavily..."I'm not marrying you Maan if you won't apologise to me!!"

He bit her lips...blood oozed out...he licks the blood...

"Who wants to marry a bitch like you??!!" he whispered on her lips in taunting voice and gets up from her after giving a peck on her lips...

"Fine!!" she also gets up and pulled her dress in place before walking out of the car...

"Then I'm going inside and I'm gonna tell dadima that you were planning to run away!!!" she said evilly.

Maan said daringly "Don't forget Geet, that you are on the same boat like me!! If I'm going down, then we are going down together sweetheart!!"

"Fine! Then don't you dare touch me again!!!" she said pouting.

"Well this rule also works the both ways!! You also don't touch me!!!"

"In your dreams!!! I have no interest in touching you!!!" she said defiantly.

Maan said while showing her scratch marks and bite marks on his neck and arms "Of course Geet, I got these marks by myself right?? I have this weird habit of scratching myself and digging nails into my skin!! You never touched me!!" he said sarcastically.

Geet said in same sarcastic tone "Really Maan? I didn't know that!!"

He narrows his eyes on her sarcasm "I have these kinda marks all over my body, which is the evidence of you touching me!!!" he said with a taunting smile.

"Excuse me I have the same kinda marks too! So don't tell me that only I touched you!!!" Geet said angrily.

He said mischievously "I can't see any marks on you Geet!" and he holds her from her waist and pulls her towards him with a jerk "Prove it that I touched you!!"

Geet narrows her eyes angrily and said "Proof?"

"Yeah! Show me the marks!!!" he smiled mischievously...

Geet looks at him and then at his hand that was holding her and back into his eyes and said "Bhool jaao Maan! That you will ever see those places again in your life where I have those marks!!! And as of proof! You are touching me right now!!!"

And she pushed him away and starts moving inside.

He calls her from behind her "What happened Geet? Did you dropped the plan of running away?"

She glares back at him but didn't stop walking and neither said anything...

Maan was about to go after her when his phone rang...

Maan: Hello


Other person: ...


Maan: Yes Yash!!! Your bag is with me!! You forgot it in my car!!


Yash: ...


Maan: Don't worry! I'll send someone to your hotel with the bag.

He disconnects the call and smirks and goes inside after Geet!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3

Geet goes into her room boiling in anger while cursing him under her breath...



As she entered her room, someone hugged her into a bear hug...


It took a second for her to realise what's happening and after a second she said hugging back "Meera!! When did you came back?"


Both ladies broke the hug and Meera said while faking anger "Geet tu to mujhse baat hi mat kar!!! My best friend is getting married to my brother tomorrow and nobody told me??!!!"


The happiness and surprise that flooded Geet's face to see her best friend after almost 3 months, vanished instantly with the mention of Maan's name...and it again replaced with anger!!!


Geet said with controlled anger and a forced sarcastic smile "Wo isliye Meera," her control on anger loosing with every syllable of every word "because your best friend is NOT" smile and control all gone "marrying your asshole brother!!!" forced smile and control returns "Infact, your best friend is gonna" again smile and control on anger gone "MURDER your brother!!! So don't worry, uske funeral pe tumhe zaroor inform kar denge!!!"


Meera says with a resigned expression and voice "Don't tell me Geet, ke tum dono ne shadi se ek din pehle fir se jhagda kiya??!!"


Geet says with a shock "What??? Main jhagda karti hoon??!! For your kind information Meera, tumhara wo loser bhai hamesha mujhse jhagda karta hai!! He is the one who always fight with me!!!"


Meera shakes her head not having any words to say...


At last she says "Geet, I'm failing to understand that when you both love each other so much, then what's the problem???"


"Problem?? Problem is his big ego!!! Ok fine! Maana hum dono mein fight hui hai, magar pata hai tumhara bhai aaj kya kar raha tha??"


Meera picks up her eyebrows questioningly.


Geet smiles artificially and says sarcastically "Aapke bhai sahab aaj shadi ke ek din pehle ghar se bhaagne ki tayaari mein the!!"


"WHATT???!!!" Meera almost screamed in shock.


"Agar bataa hi rahi ho to poori sachchai bataao na Geet!" a voice made both the girls look towards the door.


Maan was standing at the door with Geet's bag on his shoulder and looking at them with amused expression.


Geet makes a face angrily and looks away folding her arms around her chest.


Maan comes inside and keeps Geet's bag on a side and comes closer to Meera and hugs her and says after kissing her forehead "How are you Meers??"


Meera says frustratingly "I'm fine bro but what is all this?? Kal aapki shaadi hai aur aaj aap ghar se bhaag rahe the??!!" she asked unbelievably.


Maan looks at Geet and says "So Geet tum bataaogi ya main bataaoon?" he said with a hint of mischief in his voice and eyes which wasn't missed by Geet.


She narrowed her eyes and says "I don't want to talk to you!!"


Maan nods and says "Alright!! Meers, your best friend over here was running away not me!!"


Meera looks at Geet questioningly and says "Geet?"


Geet didn't reply and looks away angrily.


And Maan adds "Wo bhi poora boria bister (bags) ke saath!!"


Geet looks at him angrily and says "Thats because I don't want to marry a jerk like you!! And why are you blaming just me?? You were trying to run away too!!!" and she said to Meera "Meer, I saw his bags in his car and he was all ready to run away!!" and she glares at him.


Maan said to Meera "That was Yash's bags!!"


Geet narrows her eyes realizing that he lied to her.


While Meera controls herself from smiling with difficulty.


Geet takes a dangerous step towards Maan angrily and said "Ohh, to ab tumne mujhse jhooth bolna bhi shuru kar diya??"


Maan smirks tauntingly "I never lied to you Geet! Tum khud hi samajh baithi ke wo bags mere hain to ismein main kya kar sakta hoon!! Maine tumse kabhi nahi kaha ke wo bags mere hain!!"


"You are such an asshole!!" she takes another step towards him dangerously.


And now Maan also took a step towards her and says with a dangerous angry tone "I've heard that before!!"


Both were glaring at each other but Meera comes in between them and says "Woah!! Cool it guys!!!"


And they takes a step back.


Meera said with a resigned voice "Ab tum dono mein se koi mujhe bataayega, ke aakhir jhagda hai kis baat pe??"


Geet said glaring at Maan "I hate him!!" she again takes a step that she has took back before.


Maan took his step too and said glaring back "You know what Geet? Feelings are mutual!! Even I hate you too!!"


Meera closes her eyes frustratingly and holds the air in fists and says "Aaarrrggghhh!!!!! You know what guys? You are impossible!! You guys fight like kids!!! Now both of you shut up and get away from each other!!" she said angrily.


But Maan and Geet were too engrossed in glaring at each other and were ready to pounce at each other, that they failed to hear Meera's words.


When Meera saw that both of them were not making any effort in moving, she went in between them just when they were about to pounce on each other and saved herself from witnessing their wild love!!


She pushed Geet back forcefully and made her sit on the bed while Geet and Maan were still glaring at each other!!


Maan's eyes moved from her eyes to her lips and down on her body and Geet knew he was undressing her with his eyes...


Geet's eyes went from his eyes to the buttons of his shirt and had a huge urge to rip those buttons open and feel his smooth skin under her hands and mouth...


Then her eyes went to his jeans and looked back at him with a mischievous glare in her eyes...


Their process of undressing each other with their eyes was interrupted as Meera stood in between them blocking their view of each other.


"Geet?" she said confusedly and shrugs her shoulders questioningly.


Geet looks at Meera and brings her attention on her.


"Now will you tell me what happened this time?? Why are you guys fighting??" she asked her.


Geet looks towards Maan who has moved a little bit and Geet can again see him. She saw him looking at her with mischief in his eyes and taunting smirk on his lips.


Geet narrows her eyes angrily at him and said "Mom Dad saw us!!" and she added pointing angrily at Maan "and it's all his fault!!"


He said tauntingly "Yeah right!! Seriously Geet! When will you stop blaming me for your mistakes!!"


And before they could again get into argument Meera interrupted "Woah!! One minute guys!!! 'Saw' you?? What do you mean by 'saw' you??" she asked confusedly "Haven't they seen you before??"


Geet says frustratingly "Meera yaar--" she makes a face and said meaningfully "They saw us!!!"


But Meera still didn't understood. She looks at Geet confusedly waiting for her to say something more.


Seeing that Meera is not understanding, Geet said irritatingly "Seriously Meera, now I'm damn sure that you are Maan's sister!!! How can you be so dumb??"


Before Meera could defend herself, Maan jumps into their conversation for Meera's aid "Oh come on Geet! Now you are being unfair to her!! Tum khud theek se bata nahi paa rahi ho, aur ilzaam bechari Meera pe laga rahi ho?"


He smirks mischievously and said "Seedha seedha kiyun nahi batati ho that your parents saw us in the bed doing--" he lefts it at that and smiles enjoying himself.


Geet glares at him which was returned by taunting smile while Meera looked down smiling embarrassedly by this piece of information.


She knows that her brother and best friend have been dating from last 3 years and she also had the idea about what kind of relationship they share but it was the first time that they had openly admitted it in front of her.


Her embarrassment broke with Geet's sarcastic words which were intended towards Maan "Thank you so much for elaborating it!!"


Maan said in sarcastic tone with a smirk "Completely my pleasure!! I can elaborate it more if you want??" Oh he was so enjoying this!!!


Geet said in the same sarcastic tone "No thank you! I think she understood!!"


He nods while she glares at him before looking at Meera.


She said to Meera "So Meera, you tell me, whose responsibility is it to lock the door?? Girl's, or guy's???"


Meera looked at her out of words!! She looked towards Maan for help as she has no idea what to reply to that!!!!


But Geet jerks her towards her and says "Meera don't look at him!! Look at me and answer!!!"


Meera said doubtfully "Sorry Geet...but I don't...know!!!"


Geet says unbelievably "Seriously Meera...you are his sister!!! Hindi movies nahi dekhti ho kya???"


Meera says innocently "Par Geet yaar Hindi movies mein kahaan woh sab dikhate hain?!!"


Geet slaps her forehead in frustration while Maan chokes on his laughter but covers it up with a cough as Geet gave him a glare.


Geet said frustratingly "Par door to band karte huye dikhate hain na??"


Meera nods.


Geet says smirking while looking tauntingly towards Maan "To apne bhai sahab ko zara ye bataana Meera, ke darwaza kaun band karta hai?? Ladka, ya ladki??"


Meera says innocently "Ladka!"


Geet smiles victoriously and says towards Maan "Did somebody heard that??"


Maan narrows his eyes and said curiously "Meera! Please explain to me that is this a law that only the guy has to close the door??"


Meera says"No"


Now Maan smiles at Geet victoriously. "And Meera, I would have closed the door with pleasure if" he narrows his eyes on Geet "'somebody' hasn't 'lied' to me that her parents have gone out!!"


Geet also narrows her eyes and said "Meera, if 'somebody' thinks that I'm a liar, then I don't want to marry him!!" she takes a dangerous step towards him..


"Even I'm not dying to marry 'somebody' who can't even accept her mistake!!!" he also takes a step towards her while glaring at her


Geet takes a step towards him angrily and said "It was NOT my mistake!!!"


He takes a step towards her and says "Then it wasn't my mistake either!!!"


"I'm not marrying you unless you apologise Maan!!" she took another step towards him...


Jazz saying : Meera!!! A piece of advice... RUN!!!!!


"Apologize to tumhe karna hai Geet!! For lying to me and blaming everything on me!!!" he takes a step towards her...


"Never asscock!!!" she takes another step!!!


He smirks evilly and said taking step towards her "I know how to make you bitch!!"


Meera didn't know what's happening or what's coming next!!! She is still looking perplexed at their stupid fight to make the other apologize!!!


And suddenly Maan slammed his mouth on Geet's...


Meera's eyes widened and she closed her eyes with her hand and screamed "WOAH GUYS!!!!! ATLEAST DON'T DO IT IN FRONT OF OTHERS!!!!!!"


She peeked from her hand hoping that they should've broken apart by her voice, but she again closed her eyes as both of them were still feeding on each other's mouth...


She again closes her eyes in embarrassment and ran out while closing her eyes...


Jazz says : Told ya before!!!


Maan and Geet were like glued together...kissing...biting...sucking each other's mouth...


Their hands travelling on each other's body... Geet opened the buttons of his shirt to get full access to his skin...she stroked his chest with her hands while still kissing his mouth hungrily...


As her hands reached to the front of his jeans, Maan holds her both hands in his grip and pins her to the wall while pushing his mouth into hers...


Geet urged to free her hands to feel his skin but he didn't loosen his grip and pins them on top of her head...while still kissing her hard...


Geet breaks the kiss to breathe...while his mouth travels to her neck and shoulders...


He leaves her hands to free his hand to take off her top... And as he took off her top, Geet's hands reaches his hair...


Maan presses...squeezes... kisses...bites...her nipples...


Geet moans in pleasure "Maan..."


His hand travels under her skirt...while his mouth still sucking...biting...kissing her nipples...


He enters her with his finger... She moans...


His mouth travels back to her mouth...kisses her wildly...says in between the kiss while panting heavily "So are you sorry Geet?"


Geet whispers in between the kiss "Never!!"


Geet's hands travelled again to the front of his jeans... He holds her hands again and pins them over her head...


Geet gets confused... This was new!!!!


She said while breathing heavily and resting her forehead on his forehead... "What's wrong??"


She was so on!!! She wanted him in her!!! Right now!!!!


He picks up his face away from hers and said with a mischievous smirk "So are you sorry Geet?"


Geet frowns at him and tries to come to her senses... She realised what he's doing!!! She narrows her eyes and said while trying to control her rapid breathing but still breathing very hard "So now you wanna blackmail me huh??"


He smiles shamelessly while he also breathing very hard "Ofcourse!! I'll take whatever advantage I can!!!"


Geet pushes him away glaring angrily at him... Her rational thinking returned but still breathing heavy...but she can control herself now...


"Just remember it Maan!!! Because after this, you are not coming anywhere close to me!!! And I mean it this time!!!" she said firmly.


She waited for him to say or rather do something, but he just stood there with an evil smirk on his face. At last he said "Fine!"


Geet looks at him unbelievably and then puts on her top frustratingly.


She narrows her eyes on him and said angrily "So Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, you can leave now!!! Show's over!!!"


He bows his head and said with a smirk before leaving "Adios!!!"

Edited by jazzdh - 12 years ago
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Part 4

"Asshole, douchebag, jerk, basttard, idiot, stupid, ullu, gadha, kutta, monkey, khota..." Geet was pacing in her room from one side to another while cursing him to the empty room to calm herself. But the more she cursed him, the more she felt angry... The anger wasn't ready to get out of her system even after the cursing and abusing of last one hour!!

She was mad... She was frustrated... She was more mad... "What the hell does he think of himself! Ullu da pathha..." she makes a baby face as she was getting out of stock of abusive words.

"If you think that you can blackmail me to say sorry," she said determinedly to the empty room "then you are wrong Mr. Maan Singh Khurana!! If you think that I'll crawl on my knees to make you touch me, then it's never gonna happen!! In fact, tum tarsoge mujhe chhoone ke liye, but I won't let you!! You are so gonna regret this Mr. Jerk Singh Khurana!!!!"

She looks at her still-packed bag which was lying at the corner where Maan had put it.

She clenched her teeth in determination and looks at the balcony and realised that it's pretty dark outside now.

She looks at the time...9:00 o'clock...

She decides that she will wait for another hour or so...and when everybody would go to bed, she will sneak out...

The hour passed too and slowly everybody went to their beds early because they had to wake up early too...

For the last minute preparations of the wedding, which by the way is never gonna happen...she smirks wickedly at the thought...

She peeks out of her bedroom door to check if the coast is clear...

And she was right...everybody had gone to beds...

She slowly sneaks out of her bedroom and started tip-toeing towards the main door...

As she took just few steps... "Geet!!!"

She closes her eyes in fear and says under her breath frustratingly "Mere saath hi aisa kiyun hota hai babaji??"

She slowly looks back and saw Meera standing there with shock on her face.

Geet gave her an artificial smile...

Meera said "What are you doing--"

"Shhh!!!" Geet didn't let her finish and signals her to keep her voice down... Geet looks around to make sure that nobody has heard her.

Meera looks at the bag in Geet's hand and says in horror "Geet, are you running away???"

Geet puts a finger on her mouth and says "Shh!" and holds Meera's hand and takes her outside...

As both of them reached outside, Meera said "Geet, tu pagal ho gayi hai??!! What is all this????"

Geet takes a deep sigh and says "Meera, I'm not marrying that jerk!!" she said with finality.

Meera says frustratingly "Geet I thought ke tum dono ka jhagda khatam ho gaya hai...you know as you guys were...um..." she left it at that feeling embarrassed.

"Meera, fight ko chewingum ki tarah kaise lamba kheenchna hai, ye koi Mr. Maan Singh Khurana se seekhe!!! Apne naam se bhi badi ego leke ghoomta hai!!! Do you even know what he did today?"

Meera said feeling embarrassed thinking that Geet's gonna tell about her intimate moments with Maan to her "Geet yaar wo to tum dono ka aapas ka maamla hai na... I understand that you guys love each other very much and it's totally fine..."

Geet frowns and says sarcastically "Meera ye tu kaisi baatein kar rahi hai???!!! Love? And with that jerk?? Subah se aur koi nahi mila kya!! Mazaak karne ke liye??"

Now Meera is totally confused "Geet, mujhe to tu bilkul samajh me nahi aa rahi hai!! After all what do you want?? Dekh Geet, mazaak apni jagah hai, but ghar se bhaag jaana, it's not a joke!!"

"Meera, I'm not joking!!! I'm seriously running away!!!!" she said matter-of-factly.

"But why??" Meera was unable to understand that why is Geet running away and that too just a day before her wedding.

"Because your loser brother ab blackmailing pe uttar aaya hai!!"

"Blackmailing?" Meera asks confusedly.

"Yes! You know what he said to me?? He said he won't touch me if I won't apologise to him!!" she told like it's a very big thing but Meera frowns as if it's nothing...

Meera said "Itni si baat pe tum ghar chhod ke bhaag rahi ho??" She shakes her head disappointedly and says "You know Geet, tum duniya ki pehli ladki ho-ogi Jo apni shadi ke ek din pehle is liye ghar se bhaag rahi hai kiyunki use us ladke se shadi nahi karni jis se wo pyaar karti hai!!!!" [u wud be the first girl of this world who is running away from her wedding when she's getting married to the one she loves]

"I don't love him!!!" Geet said pouting stubbornly.

Meera takes a deep sigh resigningly but again tries "Geet, bachpana chhodo, aur andar chalo!!"

"Meera tumse meri khushi bardasht nahi hoti hai kya??" A voice made them look towards the side and saw Maan standing few feet away leaning on his car casually.

The girls hasn't paid attention towards that side before, so that's why didn't noticed him standing there all along.

Geet's expressions changed instantly and she glares towards him angrily.

Geet said narrowing her eyes "What are you doing here?"

He said smirking "Making sure you don't back off! Again!!"

Geet looks at him with fire in her eyes and mentally burning him in that fire.

Maan continued with a taunting smirk "Seriously Geet, ek din mein kitni baar bhagogi??!!"

Geet snapped back "Don't worry!! This time I won't change my mind!!"

He said faking happiness "Really Geet?? Thank you so much!! Aakhir babaji ne meri sun hi li!! Finally!! Mujhe tumse chhutkaara mil gaya!!!"

Geet narrows her eyes and was gonna use an abusive word when Meera jumps into their conversation and said to Maan unbelievably "What are you saying bro??!!! Geet is running away and you are getting happy!!??? Am I the only one over here who is trying so hard to save your wedding??!!" she said sarcastically.

"Yes you are the only one!!" Geet and Maan said at the same time and then looked at each other glaring and then looked back at Meera.

Maan said to Meera mischievously "Meers now don't interfere ok! Itni mushkil se to Geet bhaag rahi hai, don't stop her!!"

Geet narrows her eyes at him while mentally snapping his neck into two while he just smirked tauntingly and continued looking at Geet "In fact I have a better option!! Meers, you drop her wherever she wants to go!!"

Geet opens her mouth into a perfect O and said with a forced smile "Thank you so much for your generosity, but I can go by myself!!"

Maan said with a fake smile too "I'm sure that you can Geet! But it's very dark and..."

Geet didn't let him finish and said with a teasing smile "Ohh!! To Mr. I'm-the-perfect ko meri fikar ho rahi hai!!!"

Maan said while controlling his smile "Stop dreaming Geet! Pehle meri poori baat to sun lo!! I was saying that as it is really dark and I know how scared you are of darkness," he paused to enjoy the effect of his teasing "so I didn't want you to get scared and come back and change your mind!!"

Geet glares angrily towards him. He smiles enjoying himself and said "I don't want to take any chances Geet!!"

Geet was boiling in anger!!! First he blackmailed her and now he's encouraging her to run away!!! Now she's so not marrying him at any cost!!!

"Did somebody ever tell you, that you're such a basttard??!!" Geet said angrily and taking a step towards him.

"As a matter of fact, somebody did tell me that! You!!" he takes a dangerous step towards him too...

This time Meera knew what was coming next, so she came in between them to save herself to witness their wild love again...

"Woah guys! Cool it!!! Why are you making a big issue out of a small thing??!!!" Meera said in a resigning tone.

Maan and Geet was still glaring at each other and didnot even listened to what Meera said.

At last Meera said to Geet "Stop being childish, and let's go inside!!"

Geet said while glaring at Maan "Not until he apologises!!"

Meera looks at Maan and says "Come on bhai, aap sorry bol do!!"

"Are you out of your mind Meera?! And loose the opportunity to get rid of her??!!" he said with an angry glare.

Now they were getting on Meera's nerves. She said at last resigning "Fine!!! Do whatever you want!!! I'm going inside!!!" and she leaves to go inside.

None of them stops her as they were busy glaring at each other.

Geet knew what was going in his mind, but this time she is not giving in that easily. She still remembers the evening when he left her in that condition. No matter how much she wants to pounce on him right now, but she is gonna teach him a good lesson, so he won't try to leave her again in that condition.

She forcefully brought her senses back while controlling her desires, and made a face angrily and starts walking away from him.

She heard him calling from her back "Where are you going?"

Geet looks back at him with a victorious smirk. Oh she so knew what he is feeling right now...

She said in a taunting voice "I think you missed the whole point!! I'm running away!!!" and she adds after a pause "From you!!!"

In the next second, he was on her side and said "I know that! But maybe you haven't heard me!! I'm not taking chances of letting you go alone and change your mind half-way!!" he smiled victoriously. "Come on, I'll drop you!!!"

Geet looks at him unbelievably and then controls herself and said "No thank you! I'm fine!!"

"I know you are Geet! But I'm not!!! I don't want that you change your mind and I get stuck with you for the rest of my life!!"

Geet narrows her eyes and was gonna say something but he didn't let her say and said "So one lift won't hurt!! Or were you planning on just threatening me to run away and not really intending on it??" he asks with a mischievous smile.

"Ha! In your dreams!! I'm really leaving!!" she crossed her arms on her chest protectively.

"So what's the problem?! I will drop you! Wherever you wanna go!! Airport.. Railway station.. Bus stand.." he offers the choices casually.

Geet clenches her fist and said in controlled anger "Airport."

Maan said nonchalantly "Airport it is!"

He goes and sits in his car and brings it towards Geet and stops near her and said "Come on hop in!!"

Geet curses him under her breath and sits in the car.

She had thought that he was joking and would apologise to her once he saw her really leaving. But here he was! Getting happy for her running away and dropping her so that she won't change her decision!! God, how much she hates him!!!

She looks at him glaring while he looked at her with a taunting smile.

After few minutes of drive, Maan said casually "Geet, ab jab tum jaa hi rahi ho, to kabhi kabhi phone zaroor kar lena!! Or else, email to zaroor bhej dena!! You never know, I might even reply to it!!!"

Geet says sweetly with an artificial smile and controlled anger "Maan!"

Maan peeks towards her and says "Hmm?"

She said sweetly "If you don't want ke kal ki headlines ho ke ek ladki ne apne mangetar ko, aadhi raat ko sadak ke beecho-beech shadi ke ek din pehle, strangle kar ke murder kar diya," the smile and control vanishes and she continues angrily "then SHUT UP!!!" [if u don't want tomorrow/s headlines to be that a girl strangled her fianc at night in the middle of the road a day before their wedding, then shut up]

Maan shrugs his shoulders nonchalantly and says "Okay!"

After few minutes, he stops the car.

Geet looks outside and it's all dark.. There was no light outside...

Geet looks at him questioningly but he looks away.

So she asks sarcastically "Ye airport hai??!!"

He looks back at her and said sarcastically too "Of course Geet! Can't you see those planes standing over there??"

Geet glares at him angrily and said "Why did we stopped here??"

Maan says with an artificial smile "We haven't stopped here Geet, the car has stopped over here!"

Geet said confusedly "Matlab?"

Maan said with frustration in his voice "Matlab car kharaab ho gayi hai!!"

"Whattt???!!!" she said shocked.

And then she said angrily "I knew it!! Mujhe to pehle hi pata tha, ke tumhari ye khataara gadi mein aaoongi to koi na koi problem to hoga hi!! Is se achcha hota, if I should've taken a cab!!"

Maan said angrily "Ab bhi der nahi hui hai!! Go ahead!!!"

Geet gets out of the car angrily and her heart sinked at the sight. They were on a deserted road with no vehicle around and even no houses around. Geet couldn't see much in the darkness but she could tell that on one side of the road there was just trees, while on the other side it was a large open ground kinda place.

She gulps down her saliva as the realization hits her that they were all alone in this place at night with broken-down car!!! How the hell they are gonna get out of here???!!!!

But she fakes a brave face and bends down on the car window and said to Maan who was still sitting inside "Now are you going to get out of your precious car and check what's the problem or not???"

Maan rolls his eyes in anger and gets out of the car frustratingly.

He checks the engine and announces "The engine is hot! We need water!!"

He goes to the car's back seat and takes out a bottle, but as he looked at it, it was empty...

He thinks for a second and says "Geet, you wait here, I'll get the water from somewhere. Just sit in the car and lock the doors ok!!"

Geet was scared. She did not want to stay in the car all alone and that too in this secluded street and dark...

She said "No!!! I will come with you!!!"

"Geet! Try to understand!! We don't even know how far we have to walk to get the water... You won't be able to walk that much!!!" he tried to reason with her.

Geet says stubbornly "Aren't you getting it?? I'm NOT staying here alone!!!" she said with finality.

"Ok" he said finally giving up "Let's go then!!" he signals to Geet to start walking.

Geet walks in front of him, and she reached the open side of the road...

She didn't looked back, and just kept walking...

But as she kept her first foot on the ground towards the open, suddenly her eyes blinded with millions of lights...

She didn't know what was happening!! After 2 seconds, her eyes got adjusted to the light and she saw that she is standing on the bed of red roses...

The roses were scattered on the ground making a way that was leading to somewhere and on the sides on the flower-way, millions of small lights were illuminating.

She instantly looks back towards Maan, but there was nobody.

"Maan?" she looks around trying to find him, but he was nowhere to be seen.

And then his voice echoed in the place "Keep walking Geet!!"

She looks around while a smile came on her lips... She should've known that it was all his plan!!!

She walks on the flower-path and after few steps, she saw a heart-shape image made by white roses and in the middle of it was written 'I'm sorry Geet' with the red roses.

Her smile got more wider and she kept on moving forward...

After few steps, there was again a heart-shape image of white roses and in the middle written with red roses 'But I still hate you!'

Geet frowns at the words but keep on walking ahead.

The next heart said 'I hate you because I'm unable to hate you!'

Geet frowns in confusion and thought what does that even mean!!

She walks ahead and the next heart said 'I hate you because you have completely conquered my life'

Geet moves ahead with the smile again returning...

The next heart 'I hate you because I can't even dream of my life without you'

The smile getting bigger with each step 'I hate you because I'm unable to control myself around you'

Next heart 'I hate you because you bring out the best and the worst in me!'

Next heart: 'I hate you because you control my heart and it doesn't even bother me!'

Next heart: 'I hate you because you do all this without any effort on your part!'

Next heart: 'I hate you because you make me fall in love with you more with each and every passing moment of my life!'

Next heart: 'I hate you because I'm madly and irrevocably in love with you!'

Next heart: 'I love you Geet!'

As Geet moved ahead, she saw a canopy decorated with flowers and curtains and lights...

But Maan was still nowhere to be seen...

As she looked around for him, suddenly firecrackers in the sky made her look up...

There were all kinds of different colour parachute firecrackers with each firecracker dying in the sky after writing 'Maan loves Geet' in the sky with different colours...

It was the most beautiful sight Geet has ever seen...

As she was still looking into the sky, she felt two arms snaking around her waist from behind her.

She looked from her shoulder towards Maan and he said in a husky voice in her ear "So will you marry me now??"

Geet turns around in his embrace and kissed him on his mouth... Oh how much she has missed his mouth against her mouth in last 3 hours!!!

She kissed him hungrily while her arms snaked around his neck.

He pulled her more closer to him while kissing her hungrily leaving no space between their bodies...not even for the air...

She enters his mouth hungrily... their tongues playing with each other...their lips nibbling... kissing... He pushes his mouth into hers while to taste her saliva...which she willingly allows...

His hands reaches under her top while still kissing each other hungrily...

He squeezes her breasts...She moans in pleasure and breaks the kiss to breathe...

He picks up her top along with brassiere...sucking...kissing...licking...biting...her nipples...leaving his marks on her...

Geet moans while her hands pulled his hair in pleasure.

She scratched his back wildly from top of his shirt...

He smirked on her breast while still kissing...sucking...biting... How much he loves when she becomes this wild...

He picks up his face away from her "You want to eat something first??" he said while signalling towards the canopy that has a candle-lit on the table with two chairs... He had planned a candle light dinner for her...

But Geet didn't paid any attention to his signalling and pulled him towards her and both fall on the ground... But none paid attention to it...she kissed him hard on his mouth...pushing him deep into the ground with her mouth... She bit his lips wildly and whispered in between the kiss "Yes! YOU!!!!"

She kissed him hungrily while her hands ripped off the buttons of his shirt... And her mouth travels to his chest...kissing... licking... biting...sucking...

He moaned in pleasure...she moved down on his body... her hands ready to rip off his jeans button...

She blowed him...he moaned in pleasure... His grip tightens on her bare back in pleasure...he digs his nails in her back...he squeezed her breasts...

And in a sudden movement...he holds her both hands and flips her over while coming on top of her...

He hungrily bites her breasts... goes down on her body...leaving wet kisses and bite marks on her body...

With a swift movement he ripped off her skirt...took off her panty...he blows her...she moans in pleasure...digging her nails in his back...scratching his arms...he replaces his mouth with his finger while entering her with his finger... and starts moving his mouth back towards her breasts...

Geet screams in pleasure as he enters her with a swift movement... moving with a rhythm... while kissing her hungrily... she bit his lips in pain and pleasure as he moved inside her... reach their peak... feeling of heaven... and he collapses on her exhausted and breathing heavily... kissed her gently...and whispers "Your turn Geet!!"

She whispers back while breathing hard... in between the kiss "Turn for what??"

He smirked on her lips while still kissing and whispers in between the kiss "To apologise!!"

Geet frowns and gets back breaking the kiss. She looks at him unbelievably while he smirks mischievously.

She narrowed her eyes on his smirk and said standing up "You haven't apologised to me yet Maan!! So you apologise first!!! And after that if I'll feel that it was my fault too, then I'll think about it!!!!" she picks up her chin at him.

Maan narrows his eyes and gets up too and said glaring at her "I already apologised Geet with those flowers!! It's not my fault that you have weak memory or weak eye-sight!!"

She said angrily "Excuse me, my memory and eye-sight is perfectly fine!! And the apology you are talking about does not count!! I need a verbal apology not some written one!! And how would I know that you wrote it??!! You might have made someone else write it too!!"

He says shocked "Whattt??!!" and said sarcastically "Oh I'm so sorry Geet but you should've told me before that you wanted a verbal apology!! Or maybe you should think about writing a rule book on what you want or what you don't want!!! So that I don't have to go through all this trouble of apologising to you when actually, I wasn't even at fault!!"

Geet's mouth opens in a perfect O at his last remark and says "Oh really?! Then you want to say that it was all my fault?" she asked sarcastically.

"Without a doubt!!" he said taking a dangerous step towards her.

She narrows her eyes and says "Then why do you want to marry me??"

"Mujhe kya paagal kutte ne kaata hai, jo main tumse shadi karoon!!" he said tauntingly.

"Yeah right! That's why you just proposed to me few minutes ago right!?" she mimicks him and says "Will you marry me now Geet??" she takes a step towards him.

"Kabhi kabhi aadmi ka dimaag kharaab ho jaata hai! But don't worry, waqt rehte hi hosh aa gaya hai mujhe!! I don't want to marry you now!!!" he said angrily taking a step towards her.

She said sarcastically "You don't want to marry me??!! I'm not going to marry you!!!"

"Achcha hai!!! Meri jaan chhotegi!!! Tumhara bag abhi bhi car mein hi hai, don't worry I will drop you to the airport!!" he said taking a step towards her.

"Thank you very much!! Par kya tumhari khataara car chalegi??" she said sarcastically and takes a step towards him.

He narrows his eyes and says angrily "Tumse to achchi hi chalti hai!!"

They are standing very close to each other now...

She glares at him and says angrily "Asshole!!"

He glares back at her and says "Bitch!!"

And she slammed her mouth on his...

Jazz sneaks out of the place while shaking her head unbelievably and saying mentally 'They are never gonna change!!!'


Thats all for it!!! Plz hit like and do comment😛


Edited by jazzdh - 12 years ago
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An amazing OS...
Reading once again..
i love ur writing
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AS I EARLIER SAID I FOUND IT REALLY WILD
N I LIKE IT AGAIN
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U know what i had read till third part but after that i don't know u stopped or continue because i tried to find this story but alas...
I am happy u updated whole OS in one go and it was brilliant piece of writing
Welcome back dear
Plz do update darkness personified also waiting for that ff
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Amazing!!!!!!!
Best OS!!!
Loved it sooo much!!!
Plzz pm me all ur works!!!!

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