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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
awww maneet married..
luved it..
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

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😉Updating dear 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago



PART 33


All four were very happy. Their children marriage was their parents most precious dream and it came true, that too on the most sacred place, was something, they were thinking as good sign. All fear and insecurities of their future vanished from dadi and mohindar mind. They knew it had to happen cause it was own babaji decision. And for this marriage, they had no complain.



Maan was super happy. He had got his most beautiful gift, his geet, for whole life. She was his wife, it gave him goosebumps inside. He wanted to spend every second with her. Was trying to steal her alone so could have some alone moment with her but was not having any luck. Here geet was happy , sitting and chatting with dadimaa. She found her mother in her. Before she was only maan dadi but now, it was her dadi also, made her emotional and wanted to spend her quality time with her.



At dinner time



Geet was in kitchen, preparing for food. Maan peeped and searched for any elder but it was his luck as geet was alone. He stepped inside without making any sound. Geet was singing and cutting vegetables then suddenly found a pull and trembled and crashed in maan chest. She shocked. Few seconds passed , gaining her what happened and when she found , fumed in anger. " maan !! what you doing !!'' she asked in anger.



Maan was no where listening her. He was lost in her beautiful face and filling with completeness, finding her near him. He tightening his hold on her waist, pulling her more near. He caressed her face with so much love which melted geet heart and anger too. Both went in their dreamworld. Maan kissed her cheek. He was closing their lip defferance when heard dadi call. Their eyes widen. Dadi was coming in kitchen. " maan..choriye mujhe'' geet said. Maan thought for a second and dragged her along with him, behind opened door. They hided themselves. Dadi came and searched and found kitchen empty. " ye geet kaha chali gayi '' she murmured and left. Maaneet was stood. Stopping their breath and after dadi leave, they exhaled heavenly. Both looked each other and smiled. " maan aap jaaiye'' geet said. Maan nodded no. " please' she pleaded. Maan looked her lips then her eyes, requesting for grant his demand. Geet bit her cheek inside her mouth to suppress her shy. She looked down and closed hr eyes , waiting for upcoming, eagerly. Maan looked her and his heart filled with extreme happiness. He raised his face and kissed her forehead, instead of lip. Geet pouted. Maan smiled looking her. He knew her anxiety. He bend and went near her ear " kya hua geet'' he asked huskily. Her heartbeats raised. She shook head in embarrassment. Maan smiled and said " wait my angel '' he kissed her ear and left from there, leaving a fully flushed and shy geet behind, with her racing heart.



On Dinning Table

Dadi- maan bete.. when we are leaving for delhi??

maan chocked. Both geet and maan looked each other thinking why all of sudden dadi asking about leaving. Both feared what if dadi would think leaving geet only and alone maan would go for Delhi.



"savitri ji.. yu achanak aap log jaane ki baat '' mohindar had same doubt. He asked worriedly.



dadi- mohindar bhai sahab. Now your geet is my daughter in law.. she should have to introduce in our society .. isnt it maan?? '' she smirked, knowing what was running in her grand children mind.



"haan.. ji ji.. dadimaa'' maan said stammering. He cursed himself for not understanding his clever dadimaa devil mind. So it was decided after two days , they would leave for Delhi, back..



At Night


Maan was going to geet room when dadi called them .. " maan bete , i know you both are married but kya aap meri ek baat maanege


" ji dadimaa''


"beta hum chahte hai ..ki aap dono apni jeevan ki nayi shuruaat delhi jaane ke baad kare. hum chahte hai ki aap dono ki shadi hum humaare kul guru ke mandir me karwaaye, apni aankho ke saamne . agar aap ko koi problem na ho toh.. ''


" dadi .. hume koi problem nahi hai .. jesa aap chaahe '' he smiled .. and left..


All were sleeping peacefully expect our maan n geet. Both were restless and awake in their respective rooms. Maan could not able to sleep due to sudden change of his life. He was so excited for his future with geet. What would he do after going back , what surprise he should give to his angel and so on .. he was lost in his beautiful dream when heard a knock on door. He frowned. Looked watch. " iss waqt kon ho sakta hai '' . he again heard knock with a sound " maan'' .. it was geet. He shocked hearing her voice and got worried. Rushed to door and opened.



"geet what happened angel.. tum thik ho na.. '' he asked shaking her, checking her anxious. He cupped her face worriedly. " maan mai thik hu '' geet said, looking his wrinkled forehead. He calmed down. He closed door and hugged her, relaxing his fast beats . After few minutes he loosened his hug. " what happened geet.. abhi iis waqt ?? ''



"wo maan.. mujhe nind nahi aa rahi thi '' she said . Maan smiled. He caressed her frowned forehead and tried to vanish those wrinkle lines. " kyu geet.. mujhse dur nahi raha jaa raha '' he said naughtily.



"nahi '' she made baby face and sat on bed, crossing her legs, over bed.



"fir'' maan sat next to her.



"wo maan.. I was thinking ,, if I would go back what would happen to papa. He would be left alone here na '' she said looking maan , expecting him to make her heart relax. Maan understood her worry. He smiled and cupped her small face. " geet you trust on me ..hai na'' she nodded. '' then dont worry.. I would talk to mohindar uncle tomorrow to come with us or if he dont agree, I would make some arrangement for him here as well.. thik hai '' she smiled and nodded. But no time passed her face had again appeared worry lines.



"ab kya hua '' maan asked ..



"aur meri padhai (study).. '' she asked.



"wo bhi puri hogi .. in Delhi you can complete your collage.. thik hai '' she was relieved. She hugged him happily .. saying thank you maan'' .. he tightened hug.. " ab toh khush ho na ''



"hmm.. bahut '' geet said, looking him, laughing. He peaked her head. " now go geet.. raat bahut ho gayi hai '' she stood and started leaving. They reached to door. Maan was closing door when geet turned and peaked his lips and run. Maan smiled, standing there for few seconds .. then closed door and slept, dreaming about their sweet future...



Precap : Back To Delhi 😉




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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeh dono shadi shuda hai phir bhi alag alag kyun so rahe hai...

awesome n mindblowing update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
finaaly me read all the partsss



awsomeee
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Posted: 12 years ago
mind blowing they r returning to delhi aur dadi is always upto something with her mischief to bother maan
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Posted: 12 years ago



wow lovely cute update.. my naughty maan and embrassed geet..now my maaneet in delhi..so sweet geet thinking of her dad, but my mana know wat to do to his papa, yes he is my maan's papa too.. i love te update so much.
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update lovu...oye lovu koe gadbad lag rahi h...etna asani se sadhi aur ab delhi v jayega ...kher jo v ho dekha jayega...hayeee maaneet sadhi hogaiye 😳😉...lovu age v kuch dena😉...delhi kitne durrr
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update..Maneet & Dadi going back to Delhi...Waiting for next update..

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