Maaneet's Poetic OS: Haal-e-Dil. Part3 Pg61/dt1/10

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JeevanaP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: Miss.Mars
lol anyone missy missy me

sab tuhje mars maine dund rahe hai...aur tu yaha bati hai ??/

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Rituja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Thank You sooo much for the likes guyz... Got more than what I expected... 😊

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Rituja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

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Divz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Edited 😉

aowww what to say U know Ritzie I always wonder kya heart break k baad humare sab emotions cease ho jaate hai, kya ek insaan k dhokhe k karan we forget to live, to love !! aisa hota hai kya Ritz
agar aisa hota hai I serious dont wnna fall in love as it will make me week to see the toughest coz I know dat day I will lose myself

You know the each word was a melody to ear, i was reading it as if I am humming some song and singing it's lyrics LoLz

aowww the start was too touchy, he was waiting for her, she knew it, but she failed to show up, she failed to tell him her heart, beacuse she was fearing another heart break

gossshhh how could anyone do this, that bloody pervert in her past feel like killing that bas***d, shit...bloody hell with him

sheesshhh thn how can she run away, U know what i actually loved of Geet in GeetHSP she never ran away, she faced it with all her might she did it

but wo kehte hai ja *jab kisi se sidhat se mohabbat karo to puri kayanat aapko uss se milane main lagg jaati hai* how could she run away from him

aowww I just love it
that was actually stupendous

hayeee Ritzie even u wnna go Kashmir na issilie un dono ko pahuncha dia LoLz

hush finally he know everything n now I trust him he wont let her go

Edited by dazzlingdivz - 12 years ago

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Divz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: mishtiritu
Updating...!!!

waiting 😆

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Divz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: mishtiritu
@Divzi:
Hehe My GB... Ro mat... And haawww tera maanu...???😉 lolzzz...

heheh yup 😉

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Divz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

NOW GO 😡

shooo

and take rest ❤️

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

beautiful...

so geet was horribly ditched by someone dats y she doesnt want to confront maan

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Remya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

yaar..its just amazing...
i envy ur poetic skills...
so much of emotions in simple words..
so beautiful.

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Faiza Ghafoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#180

hehe Finally here to edit my post
uff was busy and I am not saying sorry 😉
le sorry bol k tujhy naraaz karna hy
ok ok me back to comment
here is it
oh so she is trying hard to shoo off her feelings but how can she is denying his affect
and here Maan is determined to tell her abt his love
OMG how can she think to leave him nooo
and he is determined to get her back
yes man I am with u
go ahead
Ah past why dont she forget abt it???
very nice update Parro
beautifully written yaar
I am a fan of ur poetry but how can u express the feelings of both of them so beautifully.
me still in update
that was awesome
I loved it
love u parooo
next part jaldi de na

Edited by PariNain - 12 years ago