Maaneet's Poetic OS: Haal-e-Dil. Part3 Pg61/dt1/10 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
first of all.. Ritzz... me edited my res on page 2.. use chek kr lena..
n boy... this is fantastic... lyk.. full on poetry,...
tussi te chaa gae GF ji... 🤗
waitin for more... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hehe... Song nahi... Tumhari gaaliya milegi kal mujhe... :P

And ha seh lo... :P
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan

first of all.. Ritzz... me edited my res on page 2.. use chek kr lena..

n boy... this is fantastic... lyk.. full on poetry,...
tussi te chaa gae GF ji... 🤗
waitin for more... 😳


Hayeee.. Meri BF ne cmnt edit kar di...

Shukar hai babaji ka... Mujhe laga bhul gayi thi...😆

And Hugsss 🤗 Luv ya...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Devaaa... Ruk ja.. Mein teri cmnt padh rahi hu... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PariNain

ok finally me here to comment
my first reaction after watching this was
OMG a new side of Maaneet that too a poetic one
some one never tried this on If
A new and fresh Idea
and your poetry uff
sonay pe suhaga
loved it
I a in love with your poetry and that too on Maaneet
me dead
kamal kia hy Paroo
thats a superb piece of work
I really liked it
no no actually I loved it
well done Paroo
u gave a new idea like FFs can be written in poetic way too
u r a trend setter wow gal u always amaze me and look once again
u did it successfully bravo man
luv u
DO continue soon


Ye sachi mein tune edit kiya hai deva...???
Apne paroo ki inni tareef...???
Mein sapne mein to nahi... koi mujhe pinch karo...😆

That was a huge comment Deva..

And Thank u sooo much for the compliments...

Muuuhhhzzz... Luv ya...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heya Chandru... Tu bhi yaha... Teri partner bhi yaha hai...

Haila... Dono partner humare thread pe... Maje hai mere to... :P
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtiritu

Hehe... Song nahi... Tumhari gaaliya milegi kal mujhe... :P


And ha seh lo... :P

hurrr marsi urf chotu choti bachi hai na.., gaali nahi deti..,;) jaldi gaana bolo ya phir mai suggest karoon:D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtiritu


Ye sachi mein tune edit kiya hai deva...???
Apne paroo ki inni tareef...???
Mein sapne mein to nahi... koi mujhe pinch karo...😆

That was a huge comment Deva..

And Thank u sooo much for the compliments...

Muuuhhhzzz... Luv ya...


ooye mein ne he kia hy
mera trade mark check kar na
Red colour
Font georgia
size 4 😆
mein Paroo ki tareef nahi karoon gi tu kaun karay ga

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan

finally m hea..

u hv ol d right to pull my ears...
sry sry...
bt it ws beautiful...
full on poetic...
Ritzz in her element... 😉
its very beautifully etched Ritzz...
i love d portrayall of feelings through poetry...
gr8 job... 😃


Hayeee BF... Luv ya sooo much...
And Ha ab permission di hai to pakka pull karungi ears ko.. zor se wo bhi...
And Thank u sooo much... Muuaahhhzzz... Hugsss
Tera Ek word bhi mere liye khaafi hai... and u knw it... as u knw me inside out...
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Chotu:
Hehe... Tu hi suggest kar de song...!!!

@Deva:
Hanjee samajh gayi mein...
And Deva nahi karge tareef to kaun karega...
Waise jaldi kar di tareef... thoda late karte to maar padti...😆

@Chandru:
Hayeee... Ha hum saath saath hai... 😊

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