MG OS#2: Javeda Zindagi

Maan smiled as he looked at himself in the mirror. Wearing that light gold sherwani with the white base under it, the white turban with a hint of gold was resting beautifully on his head and that gold broach with red beeds adding charms to its beauty. He had a tough day in the office today. Yes, right on his wedding day, he went to office. He was a workaholic and hell, he was tired to the core. But all tiredness seems to go away with just the mare thought of her. His future, Oh no, his going to be wife just in another 2 hours as per the mohrat. He smiled. His gonna be wife, his love, his Geet is hell of a woman. He simply closed his eyes, taking a deep breath and saw her. Her smiling face. Her first look he got.

He still remembers the day perfectly. He went to the mall to pick up his sister Annie who was out with her friends for the day. But unfortunately, her car broke down and she asked him to pick her up from the mall on his way back home. No matter, how busy he is, one thing he always do is be back to home on time. Its once a blue moon that he will arrive late because he love his family as much as he love nothing in this world. His lovely parents, Rahul and Juhi always so supportive and caring and his sister Annie, his life, his best friend. So, he can't trust no one with her. And Annie loved his brother in the same way.

Maan reached the Mall and give a call to Annie. "Annie, I am waiting Sis" He said as he heard a lot of voices from the other side and Annie giggled at something "Bhai, i will be down in a minute" She said quickly and cut the call. Maan sigh and leaned against the car to wait for his sister. Many passing girls give her appreciative looks. He was looking so sexy that day in his dark rust fitted suit, with a pale baby pink shirt underneath. All thanks to Annie for shopping for him and maintaining his wardrobe. No one could resist Maan Singh Khurrana. His brown chocolate eyes, his sexy dimple smile and killing looks were just enough to make him appealing without even the knowledge that he was one of the emerging businessman. He joined his father business right after his MBA and made Rahul pretty proud of himself. Thats all what matters to Maan. His family stay happy and be happy, and he vow to keep it that way.

Soon Annie appeared with her group of friends and reached him. Her friends, not to mention were looking GAW GAW at Maan but Maan just look at them with humble after giving a hug to his sister. "Bhai, meet my friends...Nisha, Juhi, Swasti, Ankita, Sambhavna and...and ." She looked around but didn't found the next person. "Guys, where is Geet?" Annie squeak. Her friends look around to? see. "Geet" she called for her. Maan too look around. Though he haven't saw this friend of Annie. He never notice any friend of Annie. But he thought may be he can see someone approaching Annie so he can tell her to stop looking around. But no use. "OMG, haven't she went to that concert with us" Annie asked her friends. "Annie, i think we should leave, she can go home on her own" Maan said holding her arm "No bhai, she doesn't have the car...i picked her up in the afternoon...we need to drop her on our? way home" Annie explained an exhausted Maan. Maan sigh. He can't argue with her sister. Dropping her bags in the car, Annie bid bye to her other friends quickly and drag Maan inside the mall to look for Geet.

"How can she just get lost?" Maan asked as they took the elevator to the first floor. "Cause bhai there was a concert going on in the mall. When you called, we were just attending it and i just get out from it without informing her. She must be looking for me" Annie was worried. As the doors open, Maan felt his breath got caught in his lungs as they refused to work for a second. There standing the most simple yet crafty creation of God in front of him. The hairs set straight in natural way, the dark brown eyes, ever so deep and the freaky factor, quiet visible. The lips, a little glossed, dressing in simple Sea-green kurti having pale pink paint with a hint of glitter on it with matching tights. Simple yet Gorgeous. That's what Maan can say about her. "Geet" Annie scream bring him back to the world and Annie move forward and hug her. "Annie, How could you just leave me there without informing me?" Geet asked a little angry but Maan saw little tears swimming in her eyes. She was afraid. He can see that. "I am so sorry Aru. Bhai just called and as i was unable to hear him properly, i get out...I am so sorry Geet" Annie hugged her once again and he saw Geet hugged her tightly.

Annie get Geet back into the elevator and press Ground floor button. Geet was standing infront of Maan, quiet close, unintentionally that he can smell her exotic perfume. It was sweet, yet spicy and that attract Maan more. He noticed from the back, she rarely wore any make-up except than the mascara and kohl that highlighted more the color of her eyes. Annie keep saying sorry to her as she said "Its OK" how can someone not left amazed with her simplicity. Maan wondered. and that arise a question in his mind. What if she is having a boyfriend? He chided himself while getting out from the lift following the girls. Annie took the front seat along with Maan and Geet took the back one, but it was good as Maan remembered how he peek at her from the rear-view? mirror.

The chain of thoughts was broken by Annie and Juhi who entered the room to take him out to the car. "Bhai, you are looking superb" Annie said excitedly. Maan smiled at her as she hugged him and later, Juhi put a black mark behind his ear and put a long gold chain around his neck. Maan hugged the two most important women in his life and went out. Getting in the car, he took out his mobile and saw the message "Are you ready?" he smiled seeing her message. and reply back quickly "You don't know from how long i am ready to make you mine" and he wished just he could see that blushing face of her.

He again got lost in the old memories of their meetings. They started meeting when Geet come to there house to meet Annie. She used to come before, but Maan barely noticed that before. But he started keeping tabs on her. One day, while in a conversation with Annie, he asked her "Annie, Do you friend what was her name?..." He acted like thinking. But Annie was quick to observe the change in his brother to thought to tease him a bit "Who Naina?" Maan shook his head "No, Not Naina...the one we met at the mall that day?" He tried to put some senses in his sister mind but Annie again try to act, holding her smile back "Oh, Sambhavna..." Maan scowled. "No, Sambhavna...Geet...yes Geet..." Maan said acting like he just remembered that. Annie made an innocent face and asked "What about Geet bhai?" First time that it was hard for Maan to talk to his sister about something. No, Someone. "Oh, i just wanted to ask you, Generally" he tried to make it casual. "That from how long you are friends with her?" Annie hide the smile behind the magazine, she was reading while laying on the couch. "3 years" She said straight to the point and went back to read her magazine. Maan felt irritated. There he was trying to talk to her about something important, and she is busy reading the damn magazine, but he again acted to not show his eagerness. "I never saw her coming to our home or you mentioning about her?" "Bhai, she just used to come for combine studies at our home and at that time, my room door used to be close. So may be thats why you haven't saw here coming here before." Maan nodded but Annie now stand up and put her hand on her brother's shoulder. "Waise bhai, why are you so interested in knowing about her?" Maan baffled and shrugged her hand "No, just casually. I just thought that i should know a little about my sister. In which company she use to sit" Maan said moving back while Annie now smiled widely and move forward and hold him from his hands. "You liked her Bhai" She came straight to the point. She was excited. First time, her brother ever show any interest in a girl. On Maan slight nod, she started shouting. "Oh my God! Oh My God!!" she twirled him around a little while now Maan was laughing. "Hold on Sis" he said trying to make her stop". "I am so Happy..." Annie said but Maan asked "Annie, do you know if there is someone in her life?". Annie saw? his brother serious, yet worried face and smiled, poking his face, making him smile too. "No bhai. She is a very simple girl. And as far as i know, she has given all the reins of her marriage to her parents. You know she is so simple that she don't even use mobile phone. Being from a middle class family, she knows and follows all the tradition and lead a very normal life." And Annie explained to him about all her family background and Maan found himself getting more attracted to her.

Maan was in an important meeting that day when he was getting continuous calls from Annie. Getting irritated by seeing the reaction of his associates, he switched off the phone for the time. It was an important meeting and first time ever, he was getting the whole charge of a project. He don't want to make any mistake. Later in the night, he arrived late at home, only to find a tensed Annie. On seeing him, she quickly reached to him and said "Bhai, where were you? I was calling you the whole day" She said in a go as Maan approached the sofa and took a seat after removing his coat. "Annie, i had a very important meeting Sis. Sorry i wasn't able to receive that" He explained and then look at her sister. "So, what was the news?" He asked. Annie jumped infront of him and said. "Bhai, Geet called me today. Her parents got a proposal for her" And that was enough to make Maan jump from the sofa. "No Annie, that can't happen" but seeing the serious look on Annie face, he realized that he is about to loose? the most beautiful dream of his life.

Mohabbat jise baksh de Zindagaani
Nahi maut par khatam usaki kahaani

Maan wasn't able to sleep till mid-night with the thought that Geet, the girl he like is going to be someone's else. "She isn't" he told himself again and again "She just got the proposal and nothing is confirm till now" but he knew, anything can be get confirmed if he didn't take an action as quickly as possible. "First thing in the morning" he promised himself laying down on the bed. If it had been a normal day, he would never have been able to drift to sleep, but his tiring limbs made that possible.

Maan silently smiled in the car as he remembered how shocked he was the next morning hearing the chaos. His mother was busy in instructing maids with arranging the things and thaals covered with duppata already resting on the huge table. "Mom, i need to talk to you" Maan said not getting at all what's happening around but he was neither interested in knowing till Juhi turn around with that bright smile and pat his cheek. "My son grow up so fast...I can't believe that" Juhi said being emotional. "Mom just listen to me" Right then Rahul too joined Juhi and asked "What happened Beta?" Maan take a long breath and said "Mom, Dad...there is someone, i like" He said in a low voice and look up to see his parents smiling at eachother. "What?" He asked being confused. "What do you think is going around Maan?" Rahul asked with a smirk as Juhi pat Maan's shoulder as he shrugged them. "We know about that, and also about that girl...and Beta, We love your Choice" Juhi said with a bright smile and hugged Maan as Maan hugged her back, still puzzled "But how you guys know about it?" and right then he heard a loud voice from behind "Say thanks to me Bhai" Annie said entering with the shopping bags and came and give them to Juhi "Mom, here is shagun chunari and Bhai, i have already told about it to Mom and Dad yesterday and they agreed and today we are going to Geet house with the proposal" Maan smiled and just look proudly at his sister. "But atleast you should have let me tell Mom and Dad" Maan complained just from above, inside he was more than glad that Annie did that. It would have been pretty difficult for him to tell that to his parents. "Bhai, it was hard for you to tell me, and seeing that, if i had waited for you to go on with your current speed...i would even have been back from Geet's wedding when you must have been telling them" Maan playfully hit her and she shout "Oww...Dad see, instead of being thankful, he is hitting me" She rubbed her shoulder a little where Maan hit. Maan just smiled widely at her sister and engulfed her in a teddy bear hug "Thank You" He said slowly into her ears.

And then, everything move with a jet speed. The marriage proposal was made for Geet and after a lot of convincing from Annie and his parents, Geet parents Sudhir and Amrit agreed. What more they can ask for. A settled good looking boy, a nice family, financially stable, well known and well respected and above that Annie was friend with Geet. Rahul and Juhi did the Roka right on the same day. Maan tensed waited for them at home. Many thoughts run through his mind as he paced from one corner to another in the living room. Later Juhi, Rahul and Annie entered with dull faces. Maan heart sank seeing the look but still he got enough courage to ask "What happened Dad?? Mom???" He said trying his best to make his voice not shiver. Juhi and Rahul approach him and Rahul put his hand on his shoulder. "Beta, they just...just..." he stammered that make Maan more depressed. "Juhi you tell him" Rahul moved forward stoping hard to laugh out loud. Maan just look down on the floor preparing himself for the heart-break when Juhi said "Stop teasing him Rahul...Bad plan Annie..." Maan look up at a smiling Juhi and she said "They agreed...Geet is going to be your's beta" Maan smile widely at the news as he hugged his mom not believing his luck. He break the hug and hugged Rahul saying "Dad, you scared me" Rahul laugh at his son and said "That was all Annie's plan...she worked so hard to convince Geet's parents that she wanted a pay back and we can't help but agree to her" Maan narrowed eyes with his lips twitched looking at a laughing Annie who run away knowing what exactly coming her way as Maan followed her saying "Escape as much as you can Annie...i am not gonna leave you for playing such a prank on me"


Later, Geet parents came to do Maan's Roka and the engagement day got fixed right away. Maan's was on the moon that day. He just saw a dream and it was about to be fulfilled. But? somewhere, deep inside he wanted to know what Geet think about him. Is she ready to accept him as her life partner? Her husband? Maan know that for her, her parent's decision will be her decision but he wanted to know what she feels. And for that, right before the day of engagement, Maan brought a Mobile Phone for her and asked Annie to give it to her in person alone when she will go with her engagement dress to her house. And Annie did. Late in the night, Maan fumbled with his mobile, arguing with his mind if he should call her or not for a long time. Finally he decided to send a message.

"Hi" he wrote.

"Hi" he got a reply a few seconds later that put a smile on his face.

"You are still up? Not feeling sleepy" He typed

"Hmmm...i was just kind of...Why you send me this mobile? I didn't needed one"

"But i needed you to have one" he said frankly

"Thank you for the gift :)" Geet smiley made him smile too as he turn to lay on his stomach on his bed and typed again

"I need to ask you something very important. Can I?" Maan said holding his heart

"Yes, sure"

"Are you happy with this relationship? Or is it forced on you?" Maan's hands trembled while typing this

And he when he didn't got a reply till 5 minutes, his heart felt depressed. She must be forced. or taking it as her parents decision she must have agreed to it. Maan thought as he put his head on the pillow, trying to bear the pain that took place. A tear rolled down his cheek when he heard the BEEP sound of his mobile and he looked up to see her name flashing on screen. He read the message

"I am not forced at all. My parents took the decision and i am happy with it. They will not think wrong for me ever. I know Annie and as much as she told me about you now, i pretty much respect you for the person you are. Its true we never talked in person and i was extremely shocked to know that Annie came with her brother's proposal for me. But she is a great friend of mine and hopefully, i think, we will also become friends soon. Sorry, i am not used with the mobile so my typing speed is slow :(" and Maan laughed at the last line as he read the message with teary eyes. So sweet and innocent she was. He saw himself falling deeper with her.

"Thank you for accepting to be a part of my life and giving me a chance. I promise, you will never regret it. and as far as our friendship is concerned, so i am asking you now, will you be my friend? Hi, i am Maan" Maan typed wiping away his tears

And that night they became friends. It was easier to chat for them on mobile. The engagement took place and that day Maan saw how lucky he got looking at Geet's angelic face. She was looking so gorgeous in her peach-sea-green combo lehnga. Her hairs were left open like he liked before and dupatta was set on one shoulder. The exchange the rings and were officially fiance of? eachother. And the beautiful period of there life started. Geet still had a year to complete her masters, so it was decided that marriage will took place after an year. Maan though was not happy with the news, but for Geet, he agreed. They keep chatting on the mobile but talked less.? They usually found themselves lost at words over the calls but Maan somehow love the silence too. The rarely met 7-8 times the whole year but that doesn't matter to both of them now as there chats were enough to keep themselves in touch with eachother. They became addicted to eachother now. Wishing morning and nights, telling each other about there likes, dislikes, favorites, things they hate, how great or boring there day went, where they go. everything. and now, Maan just wait for the day, when he don't anymore have to talked to her through mobiles and in person and today, is that auspicious day.

After the whole lot of bhangra performed by his cousins and Annie, He entered the hall after Amrit did his arti and was taken directly to the mandap. Everything was decorated beautifully but Maan was least interested in it as his center of attention stands up there, on the stairs accompanied by her friends and cousins. Slowly, step by step she was coming down in her rust color lehnga having beautiful gold work over it and Maan found her step by step entering his heart. He was in love with her totally. He hasn't confessed it to her but he just hope, she has seen that over the year in his messages that how much he care, adore and love her. After Kanyadan and Phera's, they were announced man and wife. They took the blessings together from the elders for there coming bright life.

Shama ko Pighalne Ka Maan Kyun Hai
Patangay Ko Jalne Ka Maan Kyun Hai
Issi Shouq Ka Imtehan Zindagi Hai
Issi Shouq Ka Imtehan Zindagi Hai

Maan closed the door as he entered the room and turn around to look at his beautiful wife sitting on the bed. He sigh seeing the beauty of the scene. He was overwhelmed by getting the person, he desired. Slowly approaching the bed, he sit down to look at her trembling hands as he took hold of one of them, and slightly caressed it. "Geet" he take her name as softly as he could. Geet looked up at his handsome face. His eyes clouded with desire. His lips smiling. His hands softly caressing hers. There something magical happened inside her body and it was suddenly all warmed up. She lowered her eyes with shyness as he moved forward and placed a light kiss on her blushed cheek. "You were looking so breath-taking. You don't know how hard it was on me to let your hand go after phera's so we can take elder's blessings" Geet's cheeks all turned red with his serene confession. Maan lift up her chin to make her look at him, as she did. "I love you Geet" he said it as he saw a sparkle in her eyes. He cupped her face in his hands and started "I was so attracted to you the first time i saw you at the mall. Later i asked Annie all about you. The day she told me that you got a proposal, i felt myself so weak. I couldn't let you go. You were such a beautiful dream to me then. and when Mom, Dad told me that your parents agreed for our relationship, it was the most beautiful day of my life" Maan wanted to pour out his heart today. Over the year, they talked about many things, but he never told her how he feel about her. But today, he want to just do that. "This whole year, as much as i got to know you, i keep falling in love with you more and more...There is no stop to it nor i want any" Geet look deep into his eyes to find the sincerity with each word he said. She was lost into the depth and love of his eyes when she found his lips touching hers. It was so soft. She hardly can imagine it matched the feeling of any romantic novels she read. His lips runs on her in a rhythm. She stayed still for a moment, trying to adjust herself with the feeling and also, memorizing the immense pleasure she was getting. On feeling no response from her, Maan thought to back away. May be he was pushing himself on her and no matter, how much he want her tonight, he is not going to push her for anything she don't want. But as he was about to move away, he found her hands slowly reaching at his back, caressing it and her lips now responding to his kiss. Smiling inwardly, he keep on kissing her, tasting each of her lips taking his time. She pushed him towards herself as he ripped her lower lip and deepened the kiss. They keep kissing as? Maan made her lay on the bed. Pulling away from her swelling lips, he moved towards her neck as he placed chaste kisses against her jawline and throat. Geet whimpered beneath him, feeling her? body turning to jelly. Maan moved up, helping her unpinning her dupatta. She felt shy as Maan put it aside and for her comfort, he switched off the lights. The moonlight peeking from the window was enough for them. Maan lips again get in contact with her body as he kissed her bare stomach now, sending the waves of excitement through her body. He licked her belly button. Not baring the sweet torture of his mouth, she turned on her back as Maan finger tips explored her back. Making slow circles near the ties, he pulled the open and kissed her back. Geet laid still beneath him as he explored her body, noticing each curve of her crafted body. Her blouse was off her shoulders. He turned her around. He wanted to make her comfortable and he made her look at himself. The smoldering and appreciative look of his eyes made her hold him from his hairs and pulled him up for another hot kiss. Slowly, getting accustomed with each other, they took off there dresses. Maan leave a series of print of his lips on her body as moaned. Slowly, building up the passion, he finally took her to a whole new world of love. Geet's nailed dig in his shoulder as he leave a love-bite on her shoulder. Later laying in the warmth of eachother embrace, "I love you Geet" he said placing a kiss softly on her forehead. "I love you too" she said as they both drift to a peaceful sleep.

Tose Naina Lagay Mili Roshni
Tose Maan Jo Laga Milli Zindagi

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NOW I NEED LONG COMMENTS...NOT JUST LIKES PLEASE

it is really sweet
plz continue dont end soon 😛 😛 😃

simply wonderful update.. simple yet very romantic...

loved it completely...just fab...a pure and simple journey full of love..a realisation of a beautiful dream

Beautiful OS. Loveeedd it.
Very Well written.
Soothful story.
Loved how u portrayed their characters.
Geet being the traditional girl. And maan falling for her at first sight :D
Thanks for the pm.

I am at a loss of words..
It was just AMAZING :D

breathtakingly awesum.. a beautiful memory from their first meeting to their marriage..

a beautiful dream which turn into reality

simple and beautiful loved it man such an amazing OS on maaneet...the attraction, the bonding and finally the confessing of their love awesome 😊

Taking long breath of sigh still under spell of them .