Maaneet FF Envious Romance THREAD 3

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

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i'll read and comment

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omg omg awesome mindblowing ff yar loved it a lot 😃thanks a lot for PM

eagerly waiting for next update do PM me 😃

Edited by sona-rai - 12 years ago

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Guzara Waqt

@Mango_Melody

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Today is going to finish but where are you dear??

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RaDMG25

@RaDMG25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

just read the whole story after your PM and it is awesome you now have to PM me as well for updates as i wana know what happens when they reach delhi...poor geet maan feel so sorry for her and maan in a way 😕

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Congrats 4 da new thread
Awsum teaser luvd it x

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Hi just read ur story its awesome ...thnx for the pm...keep on writting

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Thanx for the PM

Read whole FF jus nw

Maan is mad n ruthless

He needs to understand her but here he goes more possessive n obssessive abt her

Felt bad for Geet but feel lik she shuld try n understand him then plan sumthg😉

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lehr

@lehr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

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P0K0

@P0K0

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

.today my friend has recommended me some ffs with...my ff !!!!...she doesn't even know that i am a member here and it's my ff...she praised a lot about it and narrated the whole story to me...when i acted to be least interested she got offended and told me that i am a 'dull head' !!🤣

And my new readers...thank u very much for commenting buddies...if u want pms regarding updates...then plz add Zahran. regarding updates...

ENJOY!!!!!

Maan jerked her shoulder with force...''LOOK AT ME GEET...!...I WILL NEVER LET ANYTHING HAPPEN TO U...!!!''

He unlocked her hand cuff...made her sit on the jeep beside him...locked the seat belt and started to drive for delhi...

On the road...geet was holding the seat belt as if her life depends on it...her eyes were tightly closed and tears were continuously flowing...

Maan looked at her and aggressively pushed the break...making her curled up in fear...!

''Stop it geet...don't make those expressions while i'm driving...''maan scolded geet cutely.

saying this maan again used the key to start the engine...but this time it didn't start...

''damn it...''he banged the steering making geet jump in fear.

Maan said...''dekho na...ye jeep kharab ho gaya...on this god forsaken highway...geet dekho toh koi tool box hai ki nehi jeep pe...mein engine check karta hoon..''saying this maan went down from the jeep.

Geet slowly came down and went behind the car...there wasn't any tool box.

she went to maan...he was checking something in engine...he looked at her...''kuch mila...??''

She nodded her head no.

Maan dipped his head in rage and disappointment...he so wanted to go to their new home...

He again started to fix it without the help of the tools...

Meanwhile...geet looked around...they r sanding in a highway...it's between a jungle.she started to think if she escapes...then which direction should she choose...

Unconsciously her legs started moving to the jungle...

Suddenly a metallic sound clicked and maan said ''Not so fast...''

Geet looked back and found herself again tied with the hand cuff...but this time with the jeep.

''Uff...always have to keep an eye on u...now sit here... and don't disturb me with hide and seek games...i am in no mood to play again...'' maan said picking her up by waist and making her sit on the seat...and again went back to the engine...

Geet quietly sat there...the jeep broke down...what does is mean God...???kya mujhe ek aur mauka dia jaa rahi hai...taaki mein aapni zindegi bachaa paaun...???she has to do something...she can't get weak now...

Maan tried to fix it...but it couldn't be fixed without tools...so...they had to spend the night here...till his other cars come...till morning...

Maan called them and confirmed the vehicles to reach in the morning...as soon as possible...

''Geet we have to spend the night here...highway pe to possible nehi...we have to camp in the jungle...''he said locking the jeep.

Geet was in deep thoughts...

Maan sighs...came behind her and bit her cheek...geet jumped up from her thoughts...and looked at him with fear.

''Achcha to madam abb daar rahi hain...taab kahan tha tumhari daar jaab tum ye hide and seek khel rahi thi...ha...abb batao...mujhe bhi sunna hai...''

Geet dipped her head down and rubbed the place cutely where maan bit her.

Maan looked at her amused...

''see...this is what i'm talking about...that's why i love u...u'r cho chweet...''maan said pulling her cheeks.

geet looked at him...

Maan said,''chalo...we have to camp in the jungle so lets go...''he unlocked the cuff and again locked it with his hand...using key and put it back on his pocket...geet's eyes quickly followed where he put the key...

Maan said...''geet wo camping kit uthao...mein tent leti hoon.''

They carried the stuffs to a suitable place in the jungle...from where the jeep can be seen.

Geet was very afraid of the jungle...she was continuously wriggling to free herself from that hand cuff...

''Stop doing it...can't u see i can't make the tent...?achcha jao...''maan unlocked the cuff and made her sit on a large rock in front of him...and the resumed his work...geet tried to move a bit...

''don't even think about moving an inch geet...''he said engrossed in putting up the tent...that too when his back was facing her.

he put up a tent...made a fire...and finally came and sat beside geet on that rock.

''You know...i love camping...when i want to be alone or concentrate on something i come for camping...being alone i felt peace...and more focused on my aim...my goal...''

But geet didn't react...she kept looking at the fire...

''...but now i crave for u'r company geet...without u...i can't focus on anything...everything seems so dull...gloomy...colorless...i don't know what the feeling is called...but all i know that i don't want to feel that again...ever in my life...''

Geet didn't make any motion...as if she didn't hear anything...

''...kya hum saab kuch bhulake ek fresh start nehi le saaqte geet...''maan said after a long time looking at the fire...getting no respose from geet.

''...just give me a chance geet...i'll be a good husband...tumhe shikayat ka koi mauka nehi dunga...i promise geet...if u want physical distance that badly then i'm ready to give that geet...but plz don't leave me geet...be with me...''but when he looked at her he saw geet sleeping peacefully...supported by a tree.

Maan's lips curved into a small smile...she was looking lovely...in a white saari...hairs open...dancing with the mild wind blow...disturbing maan's view...but he loved it...this disturbance itself is creating a celestial sight with the help of fire hue...

Maan slowly picked her in his arms and made her lay on the sheet...he too slept beside her hugging her from back and put his other arm under her head...as a pillow.

After a long time...

...Geet's eyes snapped open...no...she wasn't sleeping at all...

the sound of midnight's owl and the
crickets made her heart beat ten times
faster to attempt this terrifying
risk...this is a deep jungle...they are tied
with a handcuff...and she's got to free
herself from this personification of evil who seems to be in a deep slumber...
tightly hugging her from her back.so
this is her chance...

It's now or never...

being on that position...not moving a
bit she very slowly and carefully slipped
her hand in his pant's pocket... finding nothing she went in
deeper...and...her palm slightly brushed with
his manhood over the barrier..

Hearing a groan...in a second she finds herself under his
monstrous structure and his scorching
hot mouth on her curves over her dress.

Her gasp...her protests...didn't seems to draw this new discovered predator's attention who's only and only hunt is now lying beneath him.

His palm tightly gripped her fists and pushed them down on the ground...as his hungry mouth started kissing her soft assets...desperately...forcing his hungry mouth down on them...

...all his thinking blurred...only the soft feeling matters...only she matters...her heavy breathing...making him more aggressive...with overflowing carnal passion...

...which only seems to increase with each second...

His lips got disturbed with constant wriggling of her chest...

He slowly opens his eyes...and looked up to meet her face...

Her constant crying...clearly showed how humiliated she has felt by his act...her eyes...tightly shut...not wanting to consume the sight...of him...

He immediately got up from her...He was panting...he looked at her with repenting eyes...geet curled up in a sitting position and tried to hug herself tightly...but couldn't...as their hands were tied...

Maan slowly opened the hand cuff and threw it away...

''I'm sorry...it won't happen again...''saying this he went out of the tent.

Geet hid her face in her palms...she felt so helpless beneath him...she couldn't forget the touch...his touch...it made her weak...helpless...she wanted to remove the feeling...

But she was unable to do that...

Like it's made a place in her...

...Heart...????

She shook her head...not wanting to think about twice...suddenly realized she is alone...

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Maan came out from the tent...and started walking as fast as he could...

His body was aching to touch her...to feel her...and the emotion for her he felt...which is rushing into his vain...can not be calmed down...

Not in this life time...

He wasn't feeling guilty...in fact he was feeling like a teenager who has just experienced his first kiss...blushing like a fool...and grinning like an idiot...he never felt like this even when he was a teenager...

''stop it...maan...!''he said out loud not being able to control more...!

Suddenly he realized he was far from the tent...

No thanks to his foolish teenager-ness...

''shit...''maan cursed himself and started running back to his lady love...

He reached there and saw the place empty...

All his new found feelings went away in a snap...

He desperately started to look around...

but she wasn't there...

He ran to the deep jungle to find her...

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Her fear of loosing her way made her legs halt...

She looked around desperately...

Bloody hell !!!...she has lost her way...

She started to panic now...

What if something comes up...

She around in panic...

''...Geet...!''suddenly maan shouted from somewhere far...

She smiled happily hearing maan...but suddenly stopped herself from going to him...a wolf seems to be a better option than him.

Getting some courage she slowly started to move away...

Geet was slowly walking backwards...what if he caught her..???...but a little part of her wants maan to find her.

...But a sudden blow on her head with a brunch by a person made her faint on that very spot...

Being a doctor the person knows very well where to hit to make a person faint then and there without protesting...!

the dawn arrived slowly and the first morning ray fell on the person's face...

Dev lovingly picked her up in his arms...kissing her forehead...he quickly took her to his car and placing her in the back seat lovingly...he drove away...

Precape : What do u think???????

PLz...ComMeNt

Edited by Temporary99 - 12 years ago

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anmirza

@anmirza

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

It was a nice update until Dev came into the pic but I guess Geet would he happy that way coz she just doesn't seem to forgive Maan for whatever that he has done and we don't seem to know yet!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

cant decide whether to hate dev coming or love his coming
oyi did you just hit her on the head and take her away
were you following them dude man this is sad
you know why because she doesnt want to be with either of them
okay not true i think she has started to feel something for him too
lekin dev yahan pahuncha kaise
uff now what
dev or maan who toc hoose from
well in the end it will have to be maan because it about them not dev

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