TANHA HEN HUM...updated part 13 pg 53 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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aowkizz so most of the past revealed now geet is with his chachu who apperently have been disowned by his family but he was in contact with his brother and being a father of 5 son *trust me fathers always have a special soft corner for their daughter*LoLz n we take full faida of it* hehe so he loves her more than his own sons and also Geet's parents ohkiz sounds cute yaar!!

N these brothers I tell you sab bhai ek jaise hote hai...NIKAMME...USELESS...HOPELESS!!

2 ladko ko death bed k face of karwa dia just coz they wanted to talk...I mean hight of insanity it is. But all brothers will leave their sanity when cums to their sisters grrr I can feel Geet's pity yaar... LoLz

and final end...now Maan ko pata hai uski Geet kaha hai n also he know Geet ko kaise dhundna hai ab Mr Khurana shaanti se thoda na baithenge waiting Geet khud wapis aaye ab to he will make world upside down to bring her back

woop woop waiting for Maaneet now!!

N fighting...aie le or kis karan Geet k peeche hi ladh re hone
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
awsem maan saw geet pic and going to paris



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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
So mr. khurana got her princess' news finally,now he' ll definitely do her best to bring her back.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
maan found geet..
loved it..
w8ing 4 maneet meet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
it was so sweet
now maan apne pyaar ko hasil karne ja raha hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Family history is almost out.nice.Maan touching Geet's new pic 2 feel her soft skin.beautiful.Maan is going 2 meet Geet.wow!Excited 4 their meeting.cant wait.plz update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
nice update
finally maan found his geet


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Posted: 12 years ago
#78


TANHA HEN HUM. . . . Part 6


Geet was sitting on the sofa with grumpy face ,folding her legs . She was not talking with anyone and was making bad and funny faces 4m past one hour. Shivam was looking at her while her friends have gone to bed not wanted to hear her cribing and cursing.
Geet: grrr i hate this weather , i hate that stuped plane i also hate that pilot . Khota . Ulu ka patha . Stuped . Idiot . He can't even fly a plane Dekhna babaji os ki kabhi bhali nai karen ge .
Shivam was looking at his cuty pai and feeling pity for that pour pilot . God knows how many more curses geet is going to give hm.
Then geet look up : babaji me apse b bohot naraz hon . U know na how much i was missing dada , champ , mom, dad , bhai and what u did . U spoil the weather and we stuck here in Maruitious ab or kitna intizar karna pare ga .
Then she throw the pilow which she was holding and it landed directly on shivam's face.
Shivam cribe while looking up and making baby face: geet k babaji bacha lena plz aj zaror koi marne wala he.
Then after almost gud 3 hours of cursing and cribing , geet finally retired to bed.
Shivam thought to check hs mail box before goging to sleep so he take hs lapy and started to check hs mails , there he saw so many mails 4m UV . He open them and read
Mail 4m Uv: call me or else i will kill u for sure.
Shivam gulp hard and switch on hs phone imadiately and call Uv.

Here in Paris UV is sitting in hs study and trying to contact shivam 4m past 3 hours . He knows that he will not pick hs calls in next 24 hours, so he sent mails knowing very well that he has a habbit to check hs mails before going to sleep.
Then he saw a call 4m shivam.
He took it imadiatly and start yelling
Uv : where the hell were u and why were u not picking up my calls . I know what r u trying to do but i swear i will kill u if u did that. I want u and every one here before midnight
Shivam wanted to give some excuse
Shivam: but dada
Uv stop hm: and dare u make any lam excuse
And with that he cut the call.
Shivam: ab kya karon jana tu pare ga wapas but dada this time i will win or is bar tu babaji b mere sath hen.
With that he went to sleep after conferming there flight 4 Paris which is after some hours and they r staying in a hotel near the air port so it will take only few minutes to reach there.

Here in Paris after threatining shivam Uv went for some meeting ( i don't know the time gape between Delhi, Paris and Mauritious so it will all depends upone my imagination or the need of the story so in Mauritious it's nearly 4 am . And in Paris it's 1 pm and in Delhi it's almost 10 am. Remember guyz it's my imagination only.) but he didn't know that some one was listening hs talk with shivam and that is none other then vicky.
After Uv left vicky ran to hs room where amy was waiting 4 hm .
In the room
Amy :did u got any info
Vicky: yes i herd dada talking to bro and he was saying to come back before midnight
Amy: that's gud news . Hamara ada kam tu ho gaya princess midnight se pehle yahan ho gi bas ab kisi b tarhan ose wish karna he wo b dada, bhai or bro se pehle after all it's her birthday.
Vicky: par amy what if dada wish her before us and wins like always.
Amy: no chance champ . This time we will win .

Precape: maan saw geet on the airport
Brothers wishing geet but who will wish 1st socho socho
Edited by ylaraib - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read i really enjoy reading this story of your
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Awesome



What if maan wish her first????


That would be total shock for EVERYONE 😆

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