TANHA HEN HUM...updated part 13 pg 53 - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
maan wished geet first i think
nice part
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Posted: 12 years ago
I hope UV not punch Maan..
waiting for next part..
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He just wanted to grab her and take hr away .

She was looking beautiful as well as cute , holding a big chocolate and nibling it like a school girl.

They came down and shivam instantly holds hr from hr waist in a protecting way , tagging hr to hmself and giving silent warning through hs looks to each and every boy or men to stay away from hs angel.

While maan's whole body was in fire looking someone else touching hr like that.

He just wanted to rip the hand touching hr .

Maan st: how dare he touch hr . She is mine and only mine . Only i can touch hr.

Steev: sir u can see ,the girl in the coat there she is the princess and the boy holding hr is shivam raizada hr BROTHER

Maan st: thank god geet ka bhai he warna pata nahi me kya kar beth ta.

Maan u have gone totly insane.

U r here to wish hr 1st. Think something

Geet and friends were standing near the cafe and shivam had gone to complete the formalaties .

A waiter was passing by having a cup of coffe in hand and accidently he triped and the coffe fell on geet's coat.

Geet: oh no

Waiter scared: i m so sorry mam wo a triped

Geet: its ok hota he

Hr guards came and grab hm

One of the Guard asked: mam r u ok

Geet: i m fine and leave hm it was just an accident.

Guard: but mam

Geet cuts hm : i said na let hm go

Manager also came: sorry mam . This idiot waiter

Geet: no ,its ok

Sia: geet go and wash it

Geet: ok i'll be back in a minute

She went towards the ladies room so guards didn't follow hr .

Maan watched hr going alone and get the parfect chance. He followed hr .

It was 11:55 only 5 mintes was remaining.

Uv was restless so he decided to go in .

Shivam came back

Shivam: shriya ye geet kahan he ?

Shriya: wo os k coad par coffe gir gai thi tu wo ladies room gai he.

Shivam st: lagta he aj geet k babaji b mere sath hen . Jitna late ho ga utna achha he .

Uv came there: where is geet ?

Shivam saw hm and thought: oh no babaji phir se dhoka de diya.

Ab tu pakka dada hi wish karen ge .

Sia: wo ladies room gai he. Bas ati hi ho gi.

In the ladies room

Luckly no one was there accept geet.

She was trying to remove the stain but it was getting more worse

She thinks something and then desided to remove the coat.

She was engrosed in hr coat and didn' saw that maan came in and look the door behind .

He was staring at hr but she was to busy to notice anything.

He called hr

Maan: geet

Geet suddenly stop . Not beleaving hr ears.

She looks at the mirror and saw maan standing there .

She was shocked beyond limits just can't beleave hr eyes .

She slowly touch the mirror but stop suddenly when she remember hs words .

She diverted hr gaze and try to leave but maan holds hr hand .

She snapped and said angrily : don't touch me and who r u?

Maan expected hr to slap hm but here hs geet is not even recognizing hm.

This pained hs heart but he is also the MSK , who don't know the meaning of loosing.

She tried to go again but this time he pined hr against the wall with hs whole body pressing on her's and hs breath was faning on hr lips as they were mere inches apart.

She wriggled and try to move: leave me , what r u doing just let me go .

Maan: u wanted to know na who am i ? I m just answering u

The name is Maan Singh Khurana

And pack hr lips lightly .

The feeling was so good that he closed hs eyes to let the feel enter in hs soule and stay there forever.

She was shocked at hs act. Maan open hs eyes and saw hr shocked face .

She try to move again : mr khurana stay in ur limits and let me go .

Maan : it's maan for u dear .

Geet : i don't have any right to call u by name

Maan: yes u have .

Geet: mr khurana

Maan cuts hr in betweem

He was angry at hr for calling hm mr khurana again and again

Maan: geet call me maan

Geet: mr khurana

Maan: geet i m warning u for the last time call me maan or else

Geet: i m also warning u mr khu...

But hr words left in the mid as he smashed hs M shaped lips on hr petal ones

Her eyes pop out . She tried to push hm but he pined hr both hands above hr head and let hs whole body rest on hers.

He wanted to taste hr but she was not leting hm enter so finding no other option he slightly bite the corner of hr lips

She gasped and he got the chance and enter hr mouth tasting hr sweet flavour and relishing it.

Her protesting was getting week after all she loved hm once and she still loves hm but didn't want to admit it.

She didn't respond ,after all she was to shocked and surprise to respond.

He left hr totly breathless and look at hr closed eyes .

He saw the time it was 12:15

Hs lips move towards her ear

Maan:Happy Birhtday geet

And bite her ear lobe lightly .

He started to open the button of her coat and threw it away .

Hs breath cought in hs throught looking at her .

Maan: u look beautiful geet

Suddenly geet feels a cold metal touching hr ring finger .

Maan said nuzling hr neck : this is ur gift . I know my geet like simple things thats why i bought this ring for u.

Geet was having goosebums feeling hs breath on hr delicate skin and the way he was touching her left hr breathless.

Maan: now i have to go but i promis will meet u again and plz jaan don't miss me to much .

He said teasingly and kiss on hr nose and left before anyone can see them togather

Geet was still standing against the wall don't know what to do ?

Was maan really here or she was imagineing hm ?

If he is here then what he wants ? Why he came here ? Did he came for hr? If yes then why ? He was the one to threw her out of hs life then what he wants now?

She was busy in hr thoughts and didn't notice the time.

On the other hand amy vicky and veer also came inside

Uv become tensed cause geet didn't return till yet. So he send shriya to check on hr.

Shriya came to rest room and saw hr lost .

Shriya: lo gi ye madam tu yahan khoi hoi hen or wahan sab preshan ho rai hen . Geet chal yar late ho rai hen tu kar kya rai he.

Geet came back to hr senses: wo han ye daag ja hi nai raha tha tu isliye late ho gai chal chalte hen

She pick the coat which was thrown by maan and move out

Geet st: geet why r u thinking about hm. Just leave hm and enjoy ur life . U r happy without hm and u don't need hm.

Geet still loves hm but didn't want to accept it. She is afraid. Yes afraid , what if he hurts hr again . She lost the trust in love , on hr love . She wants to forgot the pain . She thought that if she forgot maan she can also get rid of the pain given by hm but she didn't know that it will cause hr more pain . Only maan can take hr pain away because the person who have the ability to hurts u also have the ability to make u happy and only that person can take ur pain away who lives in ur heart. And maan still leaves in hr heart.

Uv and brothers saw hr coming they ran towards her but a loud voice stop them in there track

Voice: happy birthday geet

every one was rotted at there place and were fuming in anger seeing hm, just wanted

to kill hm write then and there

UV become angryand came towards hm and punch hm

hard in hs stomach

UV: RISHI today i will kill u

and start hitting hm and rishi starts runing

or nahi mile ga

my exams are starting from next month

will try to update in between

and plz pray for my exams

Edited by ylaraib - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
so as i expected masn wished her 1st.maaneet meeting in this way was a surprise.how maan kissed her making her weak...gifting her metal ring wer so sweet.geet is confused bcz of her past experience.waiting 4 d next maaneet meeting.last scene has suspense.plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
as expected maan wished her 1st
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul


so as i expected masn wished her 1st.maaneet meeting in this way was a surprise.how maan kissed her making her weak...gifting her metal ring wer so sweet.geet is confused bcz of her past experience.waiting 4 d next maaneet meeting.last scene has suspense.plz update soon


There is no suspense dear just see the CS u will come to know who is this rishi or rishab is
Edited by ylaraib - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan wished her first..
i thought maan has been caught by uv
thank god its not him
w8ing 4 maneet scenes more
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
wow maan wish her first
yeeppiii
nd now who the hell is rishi
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Posted: 12 years ago
update maan wished her first geet hasitation maan trying uv beating rishi



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