MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 8 - Page 17

Originally posted by: ajenn

WoW!!!! Marvellous!!! You made me go emotional!!!😭

I was expecting Maaneet's cute moments in this update!! But you made me speechless!! Now am blank, what should I write. I would I justify your update!!

This is fully about Maan and his feelings. I could literally felt each and every word by Maan. It was heart-stirring. I love the way how their date started. Maan open up with Geet by telling whole about his life. It is very important part for Geet to know what Maan went through and how is was hiding behind to taste the love of life.

I was truly touched with the part Maan was very in love with Dev and pamper him. He made Dev his priority.

I am looking forward for the next update of this date session!! This is going to be exciting.

Originally posted by: Mehek25

Ritzy tu kya karna chahati hai yaar...Tune toh mujhe rula hi diya aaj...

I literally had tears pouring from my eyes while I was reading Maan's part...😭

Awesome update dear...👏...I know I am sounding repetitive as I seem to be saying that in every comment after reading every part...But u are an awesome writer...Ur writing skills are growing with every update u write...👍🏼...Please take it up professionally...(If u are not already doing so)...

Waiting for next part...For date to continue and for Geet-Maan interaction again...

Thanx for pm...🤗

Originally posted by: gudmeet

that was truly emotional and mind blowing dear.

i really really liked it.

I hink this is the usp of ur work

taking care to describe the emotional part so well

wow maan sharing his deepest feelings with his geet

all these sharing are the foundation of a long lasting relationship rt

when the hearts unite than only the union of bodies will give true bliss

amazing update

Originally posted by: hermoso

O woman! lovely woman! Nature made thee
To temper man: we had been brutes without you.
Angels are painted fair, to look like you:
There's in you all that we believe of heaven,'
Amazing brightness, purity, and truth,
Eternal joy, and everlasting love.

(Thomas Otway )

Minblowing update and emotional one . Actually ritzy any word to describe this update is less to say . kuch cheezon ko shabdon se bayaan nahi kar sakte hai use mehsoos kar sakte hai . . It was escatic feeling , serene feeling and a contended feeling . It had taken some moments to sink in d truth .

Cant remember now d sanskrit stanza which describes the women power and importance in man's life . But will explain d meaning what i read a very long ago . kehta hai ki woman ek aise sutradhaar hai ek aadmi ki zindagi mein jiske bina ek aadmi ka astitva hi nahi . Woh use ek aise sutra se bandhe rakthi jiske bina aadmi bikhar jata hai .we all know woman plays so many roles in man's life .

The mother who makes her son a man of strong wills to face the world . She plays an anchor in his life and supports him through in all tough tyms unconditionally

Her presence is what made all of us stable. Suddenly we were bunch of people who were like floating islands' lost and without any support. Daadima, Dev, Meera and even me. We huddled together but we missed the string that attached all of us to our roots.

thats what happens once man loses his mother . beautifully written 👏

The girl who enters man's life shows him the path of freindship , makes him to feel the beautiful emotions related man and woman and takes him to another world of ecstasy and becum d source of his family making . She becumes undispensible part of his life, plays various role in his life . She becumes mother when he is low , a friend and a guide when he needs to face the ruthless world and a mother of his children and makes him complete.yes she is another anchor in his life who holds him throughout in his journey .

Desire to have someone who could actually bind us together again. Someone, who could make our house a "home".

yes , without woman ,a house cant b a home . so , truly written ritzy . loved it .

Without woman cant b complete vice versa but yes woman has that power to change the heartless person to a loving person .

But'love and emotions are not controlled. I didn't even realize when but your love, care, innocence, optimism, smile, laughter'everything'your whole being became part of me. I fell for your essence and it became part of me.

So that what we witnessed here .The man who was scared to fall down again ,throwed himself in darkness shell is been given life by woman unconditionally ,became source of light and again became d anchor of his life 👏👏👏👏👏👏

What to say ritzy , yeh apne aap hi mein pura hai .❤️ loved it . couldn't stopped myself to write all this . PEEERFECT update .

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

This update was just brilliant...

i just loved the whole sequence... and i too feel this was very important coz, Geet needs to know the reason behind maan not moving forward and his fears...

I just loved the whole confession of past and incidents that led to the current MSK...

Thanks for the update ritzy...

eagerly waiting for the next...

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

so madamji is busy replying today???? well let me tell u one thing a reply from u makes me feel on seven sky!!!

but seeing u online also makes my greedier mind to demand for an update!😆

so atleast tell na when u r going to update next????

ps: wrote the whole story??? plss dont plan this to end anywhere near... am just enjoying it and am sure a lots too in my group...