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ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Cyberlife
Ritzy:

Sorry! Writing this through a fog of tears! But these are cathartic, tears of happiness. This was probably the most emotional and BEAUTIFUL part in this entire story. I can't even begin to express how deeply affected and moved I was by it.

Remember -- I have told you many times to trust your instincts ans writing skills. You will never go wrong.

Thank you dear...I don't think I could have written this the way I did without your support. You have been a big influence in every step of Vivah and thanks for being my bouncing board.

Get well soon and come back...i will miss you.

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ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai
First of all congo 4 the new thread di...
i too expected a simple date...
but that would b so deep..that was unexpected..
Nw i understand maan's behaviour when geet entered his life..
Those last few lines to geet was so touching...
now i dont think geet need any further explanation like what she means to him...
So beautiful one..
Happy Krishnashtami in advance..

Thanks Dear...even I felt geet's one line said it all but not many people commented on it...thanks for understanding it

btw Janmashtami is over but thanks for your wishes dear...

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ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: sweetysaran
loved it...
awesome awesome awesome di...

i liked this update as it shows how maan needs geet... it is really different date because usually they show dinner, dance etc..

but i liked it when you decided to show maan and his life...

beautifully written...

waiting for the next update di...

Thanks Dear...I always think that what matter more are the emotions behind the dinenr and dance...so in that sense it was a date only...

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ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: mishtiritu
Ab dil humesha ke liye unka hua
Is Vivah ka sahi mayino me shubharambh hua...

First words escaped from my mouth after reading update were this...

It was actually a DATE... Sahi mayino me... To understand each other...

And I loved the Song u selected.. It really gave that feel...

I was having a small tear in my eyes after maan's confession...

Dil ki baato ko alfaaz mil gaye

Tadapte dil ko aaj sukun mil gaye...

Meri zindagi bankar aaye ho tum

Yuhi saath nibhana har pal tum...

It was superbly written di... I have no words to describe it...

Lovely update...

And Oops Forgot to Say... CONGRATS For NEW Thread...

Thanks dear for the lovely poem...I am glad you liked the update

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Rituja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Thanks dear for the lovely poem...I am glad you liked the update

U r welcome di... and Aap FF likhte hi aise ho ke everyone will fall for it...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Hi dear..congrats on the new thread! Thanks 4 da pm n emotional update! Beatifully written! Maan n Geet talk! Maan opens up to Geet abt his family, his life and his feelings ! Maan had tto grow up wen his parents die n had to handle everything incl Dev! He did have dadi ! Dev n Meer agt married very young as she was pregnant! Meera was very emotional n did nt have an abortion! The family was held by Poonam! Bt Maan says tht Geet has done tht! He felt something wen he first met her n her parents! Geet is his everything! Maan was alone bt nw she is here! Geet assures him! Sorry 4 late likes n comments! update soon