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sridevi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

awesome update. maan opened his heart infront of geet.

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

that was truly emotional and mind blowing dear.

i really really liked it.

I hink this is the usp of ur work

taking care to describe the emotional part so well

wow maan sharing his deepest feelings with his geet

all these sharing are the foundation of a long lasting relationship rt

when the hearts unite than only the union of bodies will give true bliss

amazing update

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

lovely awesomly written emotional update yar loved it a lot

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amrutavjoshi

@amrutavjoshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Nice One...
Maan Emotional turmoil is well written

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

beautiful update

dis update explain d reason y maan doesnt want her to be in his life nd y he kept his distance...

well written by u di

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priyanka

@doublecross

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

superb update
all fell into place!
loved it completely!
waiting for more

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

O woman! lovely woman! Nature made thee
To temper man: we had been brutes without you.
Angels are painted fair, to look like you:
There's in you all that we believe of heaven,'
Amazing brightness, purity, and truth,
Eternal joy, and everlasting love.

(Thomas Otway )

Minblowing update and emotional one . Actually ritzy any word to describe this update is less to say . kuch cheezon ko shabdon se bayaan nahi kar sakte hai use mehsoos kar sakte hai . . It was escatic feeling , serene feeling and a contended feeling . It had taken some moments to sink in d truth .

Cant remember now d sanskrit stanza which describes the women power and importance in man's life . But will explain d meaning what i read a very long ago . kehta hai ki woman ek aise sutradhaar hai ek aadmi ki zindagi mein jiske bina ek aadmi ka astitva hi nahi . Woh use ek aise sutra se bandhe rakthi jiske bina aadmi bikhar jata hai .we all know woman plays so many roles in man's life .

The mother who makes her son a man of strong wills to face the world . She plays an anchor in his life and supports him through in all tough tyms unconditionally

Her presence is what made all of us stable. Suddenly we were bunch of people who were like floating islands' lost and without any support. Daadima, Dev, Meera and even me. We huddled together but we missed the string that attached all of us to our roots.

thats what happens once man loses his mother . beautifully written 👏

The girl who enters man's life shows him the path of freindship , makes him to feel the beautiful emotions related man and woman and takes him to another world of ecstasy and becum d source of his family making . She becumes undispensible part of his life, plays various role in his life . She becumes mother when he is low , a friend and a guide when he needs to face the ruthless world and a mother of his children and makes him complete.yes she is another anchor in his life who holds him throughout in his journey .

Desire to have someone who could actually bind us together again. Someone, who could make our house a "home".

yes , without woman ,a house cant b a home . so , truly written ritzy . loved it .

Without woman cant b complete vice versa but yes woman has that power to change the heartless person to a loving person .

But'love and emotions are not controlled. I didn't even realize when but your love, care, innocence, optimism, smile, laughter'everything'your whole being became part of me. I fell for your essence and it became part of me.

So that what we witnessed here .The man who was scared to fall down again ,throwed himself in darkness shell is been given life by woman unconditionally ,became source of light and again became d anchor of his life 👏👏👏👏👏👏

What to say ritzy , yeh apne aap hi mein pura hai .❤️ loved it . couldn't stopped myself to write all this . PEEERFECT update .

Edited by hermoso - 13 years ago

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Cynthia

@CiaMaaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

I have no words 2 express abt d updt...

Simply awsm!!!👍🏼

U dnt need 2 apologize 4 dis updt...😒

I felt dis (Maan's POV) wz better dan any romantic talks...!!!😳

"You are my life partner…meri humsafar. You are my life Geet. Meri Jaan. Sahi mayine mein. Jaanta hoon bahut dil dukhaya hai tumhaara par sach kehta hoon ki tum meri zindagi ho. Mera parivaar ho. You are not just part of it but you it. Ho sake toh yehi haq ek baar mujhe bhi de do. Baaki sab ko toh apna hi liya hai tumne…ek baar mujhe bhi apna lo." dis wz d show stopper... Ooops updt stopper!! Made my eyes teary...!!!😭

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

This update was just brilliant...

i just loved the whole sequence... and i too feel this was very important coz, Geet needs to know the reason behind maan not moving forward and his fears...

I just loved the whole confession of past and incidents that led to the current MSK...

Thanks for the update ritzy...

eagerly waiting for the next...

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
first of all let me enjoy my first place! it feels gr8 to be first dear just below ur post!😉

coming to the part i have to say i too had thought of simple and lovely one but ur part have just surpassed my expectations! cutey updates tho tum waise bhi bahuth dene waali ho in future na😉😆 but for now maans talk was just mind blowing!

ithne dinon se jo humlog use tubelite and gadha keh rahe the ( even he too confirmed it), now am able to know what he was really going through!!! and am sure by this geet will love him more and their bond will become stronger too!

i loved the way he told her that he can only tell her all this... giving her such an important place in his life!
"You are not just part of it but you it."... i just loved this line yaar!!!!

LOL...pressure..haan...well cutie pata nahi but naughty updates zaroor milne wale hain...

I know tubelight...gadha...I just loved writing this part. Got teary as well but enjoyed it myself as a writer..actually abhi aage jitne bhi updates hain na...I am very excited about them. I have already typed drafts except for epilogue...

and line - You are not just part of it but you it - initally it was in Hindi. I changed it to english becuase feel nahi aa rahi thi but forgot to put "are" in it...english translation is correct though😆...but I am sure you caught that one...

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