MG OS:'Kehna Hi Kya'Pt 3/New Note Pg 49/69/24th March

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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

beautiful os

even without any words exchanged between maaneet it was such a beautiful love story

plz do update another part

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shiela

@dreams-reality

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

awesome os ,, loved how u expressed their feellings so well

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NH1971

@NH1971

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

its awesome please continue thankyou

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crazydream

@crazydream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Wow an OS n thst too a beautiful one.
At first I was a bit sad that u have written
an OS as i desperately wanted an update first for
Life starts Where it ends. I simply wanted that
First as I can't wait for Maan n Seher moments.
But after reading it I don't have any complaints.
U made me speechless. But I want an update for
That ff next. I know I m greedy but wat to do u
Write such beautiful ffs.

Now coming to OS. Geet's fantasy is becoming
Reality. Every scene she has thought is happening
Wid her. Hawww. She blushing.

The way she met him, staring at him, geting lost
Everything was dreamy.
She has fallen for Champ. Their every meeting
Holds something important in their life.

Widout conversing verbally they fall in luv.
That's the best thing I liked. It actually they
Were speaking thru eyes, thru their hearts.
Love don't need words.

"And then by the end of this wedding I might will fell irrecoverably in Love with him nd one more saga of Love will embed in the history of Love "
Loved this line.

Now I also want an epilogue for this.
N thanks for dedicating this to us.

Continue soon.

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

just awesome dear...it was jst wonerful and the song...it was tough to say that \os was written for song or son for OS

and thanks for the dedication...u r a brilliant writer dear...

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

love the way you beautifully described each and every moment

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Geet has fallen in love...

but please give it end...

why he said that anklet will be with him whole life...

is he not planning to marry her...

this adha adhura OS I don't like yaar...

please give it ending...

waise it was very beautifully written...

kuch yaadien wapas aa gayi...

thanx for pm...

waiting for next part...

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MonaSWrites

@MonaSWrites

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

very lovely
just loved it .. so beautifully written .. i lost while reading it

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Oh! That Was Beautiful OS
Loved It Alot
Loved The Description n Song
Beautifully Written
Geet Fallen In Love With Stranger
Hyee So Dreamy
Want Epi Plz
Thankx For Pm n Sharing The Amazing Story With Us :)

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piyasingh

@piyasingh

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

I WANT ANOTHER PART..NOOO.NO..I WANT MANYYY PARTS... ND WANT 2 SEE MAANEET MARRIAGE TO..PLZZZ.DONT SEPARATE DEM LYK DIS.🥺..4 OR 5 PARTS DE HI DO NA... IT WS SUPERB OS, 👍🏼I 🥺FELT SOO GUD AFTER READING 👏BT DIL HAI KI MAANTA NAHI... I WANT MORREEE...PPLLLZZZ...