MG OS:Heart-take By My House-Mate

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Dei_Gratia

@Dei_Gratia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

nyc ending
Really loved it
Finally geet realised that she loves maan...

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Diva7

@Diva7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

aww vry sweet os

i really lyk dis soft, romantic, mushy maan, he is too cute n a vry gud frnd

she tore his ticket, well gud fr both... at last geet confessed her feelings🥳

n i simply luv d song u chose fr d os... jst beautiful n perfect fr d story

well dear i only read dis os of urs, n i totally luved it so obviously my vote goes to

MG OS:Heart-take By My House-Mate

thnk u sooo much fr writing such a luvly OS on maaneet

n thnx fr pm dear😊

Edited by Diva7 - 12 years ago

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

really beautiful soft...all things...whole maans POV ... n then th line loved the most...my favourite ..."but this was it...Either this moment or never"...n their first kiss...so beautiful... n the last line most...i have just one confusion...ek ladka aur ek ladki ek hi ghar me akeli 4 saal rahi aur uske family ya relative ya friend ya sociaety koi prob nehi hui kya...ok it happens always in abroad bt India me... may b duniya bohut age chal chuki hain...nywy really loved it...

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fatema_007

@fatema_007

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

This is 1 of my favorite song nd i always wished that sum1 would write sumday portraying maaneet on it :D nd u made my wish cum true..thank u for that :D
nd da update was just fantastic

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

very shweet and cute! keep up the good work :D

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

oho ho...atlast geet confessed her love fr maan...usne ticket phandke phenk di...pagal ladki...abb dekhte hai kya hota hai...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u sooo much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

Edited by love2_soma - 12 years ago

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mounacuty

@mounacuty

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

wow amazing os i loved d end line thumps up!!!!!!!

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

loved the update...it was awesome and thank God...train min ticket nahi thi...LOL

next time, Maan's mom calls he should say "Mom dulhan ko saath leke aaunga"

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QuintessentialI

@QuintessentialI

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Awww ! that was a sweet OS .

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nishnal

@nishnal

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Awe dear it wasnt boring bt was xpectng much mre than ths ajt glad tht it had an happy nd lovd n lykd ths os alot plz do add me n pm me ur stories...plz n ln u send the page lgnk in whch al ur stories r thr... 😊