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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Miss.Mars

@Tia: Woh Fattie nahi hottie hai
My hottie Bestie

wow latest information😆😆😆
my hottieee devil angel...😆

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

hawww mel
sara kissa badal diya

maanu is dating anu hawww

mujko kisi ne btaya nhi

n that fb omg mel u r such a devil
schi how can u shout at my maanu

he is so hot n sexy yes yes...😆😆😆😆😆

n maanu also confessed
he is dating anu n marriage Tia thud😆😆😆
🤢mishty
ya there is no geet na so anu is mishty

n whom prafulla called
let me guess
SARA 😆😆😆😆

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: tiakashyap
hawww mel
sara kissa badal diya

maanu is dating anu hawww

mujko kisi ne btaya nhi

n that fb omg mel u r such a devil
schi how can u shout at my maanu

he is so hot n sexy yes yes...😆😆😆😆😆

n maanu also confessed
he is dating anu n marriage Tia thud😆😆😆
🤢mishty
ya there is no geet na so anu is mishty

n whom prafulla called
let me guess
SARA 😆😆😆😆

I hope you didn' t mind givingen me maanu to anu just in this ss 😊

nope she didn't call sara her patner is her real life friends whom she calls patner😆

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lazy-sleeper

@lazy-sleeper

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: PariNain
ok Marsi I am going to edit my commnet
but first want to clear something
THIS COMMENT IS FOR MEL. yes u get it right I am editing this comment for Mel and not for u
I knw u r pouting and stamping ur foot on the groung and giving me angry glares
but nothing cant b done with it
evil me
ok back to surprise
first I have told u earlier that I love all of u
Marsi, Mel, Ruhs, Nishu, Farankie and sara
I like ur frndshp a lot
so u r playing truth and dare
and Mel's choice is truth
gud going mel
ooye Marsi she is saying na koi nai hy tu koi nahi hoga na
but how my Marsi can leave Mel easily and here comes the Dare
Oops Dangerous dare by Marsi
flirt with a stranger that too for 15 min
gud going Marsi
oops I mean how can u Marsi
poor mel
dont look at me like this
its Mel who is giving me glares
dont worry Mel I will pray for a handsome for u 😉
ooye meri duaayen pori ho gaye
MSK hayeee
Marsi I am imagning your face now 😆

nice update marsi
loved it
next part plzzz

😡
😡

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Faiza Ghafoor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

hahahahahahaha
me laughing like hell now
oops rolling on the floor
what Shld I call this????
Nehlay pe dehla
this is called
Mel's revenge
ooye hooye
ballay ballay
Chooron ko moor
Nai ooye
ok this is first time I am reading mel and I really like ur writing Mel
nicely Written
Marsi ki tu band baja di
ooye Marsi panga is not changa yaar
ok back to Update
hey Everything Upside down
me still confused
who dared whom???
Who has to flirt????
who got MSK as BF???
well ok ok calm down ho jaaye ga sweet
aagay parh
ooye Partner tu yahan kaya kar rahi hy
oho so Marsi is telling u abt Maan
gud ooye but wait Mel is dating Maan
oops no Marsi is dating Maan
no mel is
no no Marsi is
arggghhh me confused
koi to bataoo na who is dating whom???????
ok Mel I am trusting u sweet so its Ananya dating Maan
Oye Marsi did not tell me huh
aur partner ko bataya woh bhi mel ka name le k
theik hy what do u think partner will not tell me
you wish
look she is calling me hahahahahahahaha
Ohho Mel gave us flashback
jhooti Marsi
dating Maan Ooye hooye
Mel loved ur surprise yaar
very well written
loved it

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: PariNain
hahahahahahaha
me laughing like hell now
oops rolling on the floor
what Shld I call this????
Nehlay pe dehla
this is called
Mel's revenge
ooye hooye
ballay ballay
Chooron ko moor
Nai ooye
ok this is first time I am reading mel and I really like ur writing Mel
nicely Written
Marsi ki tu band baja di
ooye Marsi panga is not changa yaar
ok back to Update
hey Everything Upside down
me still confused
who dared whom???
Who has to flirt????
who got MSK as BF???
well ok ok calm down ho jaaye ga sweet
aagay parh
ooye Partner tu yahan kaya kar rahi hy
oho so Marsi is telling u abt Maan
gud ooye but wait Mel is dating Maan
oops no Marsi is dating Maan
no mel is
no no Marsi is
arggghhh me confused
koi to bataoo na who is dating whom???????
ok Mel I am trusting u sweet so its Ananya dating Maan
Oye Marsi did not tell me huh
aur partner ko bataya woh bhi mel ka name le k
theik hy what do u think partner will not tell me
you wish
look she is calling me hahahahahahahaha
Ohho Mel gave us flashback
jhooti Marsi
dating Maan Ooye hooye
Mel loved ur surprise yaar
very well written
loved it

😆 thank you sweets

aww how sweet me blushing with your comments

😆see marsi fooled us all chori chori maan ko date kar rhi hai

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: mel420

I hope you didn' t mind givingen me maanu to anu just in this ss 😊
nope she didn't call sara her patner is her real life friends whom she calls patner😆

hawww babaji y should i mind

i already have one maanu na..😆😆😆
kk partner kk 😆😆😆😆

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JeevanaP

@JeevanaP

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: PariNain
hahahahahahaha
me laughing like hell now
oops rolling on the floor
what Shld I call this????
Nehlay pe dehla
this is called
Mel's revenge
ooye hooye
ballay ballay
Chooron ko moor
Nai ooye
ok this is first time I am reading mel and I really like ur writing Mel
nicely Written
Marsi ki tu band baja di
ooye Marsi panga is not changa yaar
ok back to Update
hey Everything Upside down
me still confused
who dared whom???
Who has to flirt????
who got MSK as BF???
well ok ok calm down ho jaaye ga sweet
aagay parh
ooye Partner tu yahan kaya kar rahi hy
oho so Marsi is telling u abt Maan
gud ooye but wait Mel is dating Maan
oops no Marsi is dating Maan
no mel is
no no Marsi is
arggghhh me confused
koi to bataoo na who is dating whom???????
ok Mel I am trusting u sweet so its Ananya dating Maan
Oye Marsi did not tell me huh
aur partner ko bataya woh bhi mel ka name le k
theik hy what do u think partner will not tell me
you wish
look she is calling me hahahahahahahaha
Ohho Mel gave us flashback
jhooti Marsi
dating Maan Ooye hooye
Mel loved ur surprise yaar
very well written
loved it

Partner is dehk kar marsi thuje pe barsegi...

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lazy-sleeper

@lazy-sleeper

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Maan and Ananya went away hand in hand after Mel literally grilled them out along with both twin partners. As soon as they were out of their sight, Ananya smacked Maan's head.
"Itni over acting karne ki kya zaroorat thi????" Ananya querried with her typical one eyebrow raised.
"I got nervous Marsi!!" Maan said guiltily.
"Haan haan Teri toh bolti band ho gayi hai after listening her talks!!" Ananya teased as Maan gave a dreamy look going into flashback mode.
::::::::Flashback::::::::
Maan had gone with an intention to flirt with Ananya.
He ttok a rose and went near her.
"Madam!"
Ananya turned towards him.
"Go away!!"
"I like you!"
"Chappal se maroon kya!!"
Maan was scared and he went away.
Suddenly an accident was about to occur when Mel saved him.
He was shocked at first to see her shouting at him.

M:Oye are you blind didn' t you see the car

Maan:Thanks for saving my life

M:yeah whatever

Just then Ananya came.

A:Mel how can you yell like that to such a hottie

M:Oye sharam kar

Maan:Kyu if I am hot why can' t she say so

A:Hayyyeee

Mel:Yuck you guys ar disguting me

A:Whatever so called miss shareef then leave from here na agar itni sharam aarhi hai
Throughout the conversation Maan was staring dreamily at Mel oops his lady love Mel.

"Gadhey!! Suar ki aulaad uss pagal ke muh kyun lag rahe ho Kaminey!!" Ananya screamed on that loafer Maan.
"She is dreamy" Maan said dazed.
"WHAT???" Ananya shouted.
"Eh noo no thing!!" Maan said breaking his trance and began to leave when Ananya grabbed his collar and said "Kya bola bey tuney????"
"Ruk baccheee tujhe acha sabak seekhati hoon taaki kisi ladki ke aas paas bhi nazar nahi aayega. And also a right lesson for Mel for teasing me!!" Ananya thought smirking evilly.
End of Flashback.
"Oye!!" Ananya smacked his head again.
"Chal Practice karni hai!! TUjhe Mel ka dream man jaise ban na hai ya nahi???" Ananya said.
"Chaliye!!" Maan said again with a dreamy smile only for Mel.
This made him remember his first practice session for grooming for Mel.
Flashback
"Wear your specs. Geek waley!" Ananya ordered.
"Kyun!" Maan made a yucky face.
A:"Mel ko aise hi pasand hai. Abb iss mai mai kya kar sakti hoon!!"
A:"Chalo shukar hai pehen to liya Phew! Abb Cactus pakad!"
M:"Kya????? Roses kyun nahi!!"
A:"Mel ko saarey flowers se allergy hai So Cactus se usko propose karna!"
A:"Abbb chalna shuru kar."
He straight way walked.
A: Abey oyyee aise kaise chal raha hai. Catwalk kar. Mel ko catwalk karne waley bohot pasand hain.
M: Are you sure?
A: Tujhe mere uske bestie honey pe shak hai?
M: Umm shayad...
A:Kya bola tuney!!
M: Nahi nahi bilkul nahi!!
A: Abb catwalk kar.
Maan wore the geeky glasses and held the cactus plant with a handkerchief in his hand and catwalked back to front and then back.
A; Good!
End of flashback.
Maan practiced once again finally ready to propose Mel.
In the evening he went towards Mel who was waiting for Ananya in a restaurant.
He started his catwalk towards Mel with a bowl in one hand and a cactus plant in the other.
All the customers were staring wierdly in her direction. Mel was staring at him too wierdly.
"What the hell is this Lover Boy doing?" She thought.
"What are you doing????? Standing on one leg? Cactus? Bowl? Geek specs??? Wierdo!!" Mel said
"Proposing!!" Maan replied.
He came and stood on one leg and said "Mel You are so cute so innocent , I like you!" And thrusted the bowl towards her mouth and she forcefully drank but suddenly spitted out on Maan's face.
"Bittergourd Juice!" She screamed.
"Ananya told so you like it! You hate chocolates!!" Maan said innocently with a sad smile disappointed and heartbroken.
"ERRRGGGHHH ANANYA!! I am gonna kill you!!" She screamed in a huff.
Ananya smirked evilly hiding behind a tree.
"Abb aaye dono oont pahad ke neeche!!" She said .
Next your turn Mel.

Edited by Miss.Mars - 13 years ago