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Ratna

@--Ratna--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

I was so excited u updated i reserved a post and commented in another 😆...sorry 😛...this should show how eagerly i was waiting for the update 😳 ...awesome story my dear 👍🏼

Edited by --Ratna-- - 12 years ago

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Anusha

@..AnushaGeet..

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Part 1 :

Loved the first part Di...

Dev's and Geet marriage was something very different...and the way Geet was Infatuated with Dev was absolutely stunning...😆

Its really amazing to read about the characters in a completely different sense and world...

Loved the Marriage part...Not the fact that its Done by our Maan...😭

Penguins and Peacocks was hilarious. 🤣🤣

Love the cranky and Stubborn Geet 😛 Poor baby...😳

Part 2 :

Cute Puppy...

Di...you have given such a positibe character sketch of Brij...hard to imagine...😆

Dirty Stable boy...🤣

Geet's excitement reg dev is 😭😭

But I am sure you have something further for us..

Part 3 :

Geet so excited about Dev... 😭 Where is our Munda..?

Wish Munda Comes soon..

Part 4 :

Aww..Poor geet darling...

As usual...the devil Dev didnt leave any chance to leave her shattered...

She must be heartbroken...😭

Waiting Waiting for Maaneet 😃

Part 5 :

Finally MSK and his anger and support for our darling Geet 😳

Feeling bad for Geet Di...poor her...😭

Ahhh.!!!!! ** HUG ** ** HUG ** 😳

Part 6 :

Awww...finally poor Girl realized that she loved the wrong man...

And she ready to move on with her Yet to be New Prince Charming 😳

PS : Di...you have developed Brij's character amazingly...👏

Part 7 :

Glad she forgot that Dev...

Marriage Huh...

Di...Maan kahan hai..?? 😆

Part 8:

Lovely description of the prospective brides...Ramlal and Shyam Lal 🤣🤣

Awww...Cutie Pie Maanu...He is so sweet...loving his character... 😳 And loving Brij as well 😊

Di...you are right...MSK is a hazardous person for all the females...😆

He kills with every move of his..

Maaneet Dance..?/ 😳😳 Wish they Do... 😃

Loving every bit of Maaneet's characters...

Part 9 :

Awesome connection Di...

Maaneet First dance had rahul's presence...and So does this one...This is picture perfect...😃

" Go away Chopra " 🤣

Ahhh...angry MSK...Haaye...😳

Awww...he is so caring...Loving heir bond...Come on Maaneet...fall in love fast...

But alas...this is in Di's Hand...😆

** HOT ** ⭐️

What one earth is our Hottie upto..?? 😆

Part 10 :

Just one thing to say..

** HOT UPDATE ** 😳😳

Loving their characters very much..!!

Part 11 :

Confused a bit...

Who is the girl all are drooling on..??Hope not Geet...

And what about the kiss..?/ Hope its Maan taking his mishty away...

Waiting..!! 😃

Lovely SS Di...

Finally Managed to read the whole thing today...

Waiting for your next update...

Thank you so much for such a beautiful SS...!! 🤗🤗

Edited by aanappin - 12 years ago

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Priti 🤗...thank u for the awesome update...made me all 😃...Dev is already bored with NT...good 😈...that is what he deserves for hurting our angel...men were flocking around our Mishty ...Dev, the idiot 😡 still did not recognise her and is wondering why she turned away ...hoping that was Maan at the end and in the precap ...plz cotinue...love u...TC 😊

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Deepa

@harshdb

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

nice ss. the title is very nice and fresh.. liked it. u r the first one to dedicate the update for silent readers... which made me come out from my silent mode..😆 😉 all the writers either bash or demand (of course they have a right) to comment.. u have a unique way to make them comment i like it.. 😉

p.s. continue soon.. waiting for the next update... i have a request... pls dont make geet weak infront of dev... make geet very strong to face the reality.

Edited by harshdb - 12 years ago

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

why so short?

and that selfish dev...keep him away from geet

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375400

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Hi omg ye sab kya horaha hai kiss kisko no dev nahii plzzz...aur ye dev ko ky hua ab geet k piche oh no kahi ye dev maaneet k bech toh nhi ayega na aisa nhi hona chahiye...mai dev ko mar dalungi...w8 for d next part plz plz upd soon

Edited by Deepanwita - 12 years ago

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mardej

@marde

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

nice one update soon... surely maan should be the one who kiss our geet...
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Krupa

@idunno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

confused confused Maan, Geet and brij are in London Dev is in India than how can it is possible that lady is Geet?the way you wrote it sounds like she is Geet and she is surrounded by all possible betchlar now who is kissing her?

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

has the game begun ! dev is getting bored with tara ! now is he going after geet ? he was thinking geet as kid till now ! ab ayega mazaa but please geet should not get hurt much. hope maan comes for rescue !