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Posted: 13 years ago

#991

@no suhaana i don't pm...
as i upd. from my mob. so i have asked everyone to bookmark the thread...of both my ff's...& i upd. daily...so u can keep checking & spamming for daily upd.

suhaana can u come on d new thread plz...as dis is finished...

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#992

Originally posted by: -Priti11-
@no suhaana i don't pm...
as i upd. from my mob. so i have asked everyone to bookmark the thread...of both my ff's...& i upd. daily...so u can keep checking & spamming for daily upd.

suhaana can u come on d new thread plz...as dis is finished...

kkk...welll ye toh aur bhi acha hai...

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#993

Just awesome...loved the whole plot

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362035

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Posted: 13 years ago

#994

Originally posted by: -dia-
Just awesome...loved the whole plot

thanx a lot...😊

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Bobby Ghosh

@bobby13rocks

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#995

PRITI..😃

Khubh valo laglo tomar story...🤗

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362035

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Posted: 13 years ago

#996

Originally posted by: bobby13rocks
PRITI..😃

Khubh valo laglo tomar story...🤗

thanky bobby...🤗

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Bobby Ghosh

@bobby13rocks

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#997

Originally posted by: -Priti11-
thanky bobby...🤗

U r welcome dear..🤗

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#998

I have read the whole thread one of this story in one go{except last few parts}..and now my back and neck are aching like hell..

But all this pain is worth as i enjoyed this story so much..There were many things i wanted to mention but as i read chapter after chapter,i actually forgot those..but still i remember some gem "lines" from geet..like"my large intestine would have small intestine for dinner today"..

"I have a buffalo named naintara who has very big a**"..."🤣,,,

I have never read such "manneet dance" before where geet was threatening maan to take out his eyeballs...😆 woah..your geet have made me laugh alot...!!

phew..you are such a talented writer to make your readers hate{not like} the gentleman "dev" and love the casanova,bad guy "maan"...You have included each and every element in this story whether it was "cuteness" as maan calls geet "pretty" for chocolate cookies or "comedy" with geet mum's blowing nose while mourning after maan's announcement of his engagement with geet...

There were only few lines about maan's past but they were more than capable of struck right chord in reader's heart.. i actually felt like console him..

At last i just loved this story...

would be reading next thread tomorrow..

keep up the good work priti...

Edited by palindrome - 13 years ago