MG SS: A Path To Reach You..!! Part 13: Pg 141 - Page 55

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Originally posted by: -Priya01

Part 8 is fab...love Maneet first meeting n Maan's confidence to reach Geet heart...thxs for the pm U r doing a great job wahi👏👏..tc...love u 🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago

First of all, I would like to thank you all for your wonderful response to this SS via comments ad likes. I love reading your comments and I have replied to every single one.

Please feel free to tell me if I have made any mistakes, errors in the update and also if you would like any specific scenes, I'll try and incorporate them in.

Part 9

The Sharma's were busy arranging everything for the Khurana's arrival. Everybody was truly happy that Geet decided to give this proposal a chance, and they all somewhere felt that this proposal will be successful.

After setting everything up downstairs, Gayatri and Simi made their way up to Geet's room, where Payal and Priya were getting Geet ready.

Geet wore a simple light pink saree with minimum make up, and a simple chain with matching small earrings.

Gayatri: Geet you're looking really beautiful, kisi ki nazar na lage.

She took some kajal from Geet's eye and applied it behind her ear.

Simi did not say anything and left the room. Geet was gonna go after her but Payal stopped her and said she will go and see her.

Priya (playfully): Geet today Maan will lose all his sense seeing you.

Geet wacked her on her arm.

The Khuaran's had arrived with Raj and were welcomed by Rajeev and Gayatri.

Rajeev: please come.

Dadima: Gayatri what was the need to do all these arrangements?

Gayatri: this is nothing Maa ji.

Rajeev: Geet ke liye hum kuch bhi kar sak te hai

The gents started to talk about sports, business and men's stuff, and on the other had the ladies were chatting. Simi and Ahana were playing.

Although Maan was talking with the rest of the guys, his eyes were searching Geet, Raj noticed him and could not stop himself from pulling Maan's leg, as this opportunity doesn't come often.

Raj (quietly): Maan, control dude control..she's on her way.

Maan (quietly): shut up man.

Anwesha: aunty Geet Bhabhi, I mean call Geet please..

Naintara: yes aunty please, we are all dying to meet her.

Gayatri: of course, Payal beta go and Geet.

Payal went to collect Geet. Geet was in the kitchen with Priya preparing the snacks onto trays. Her hands were shaking.

Geet: Priya, please stand right beside me, just look at my hands they're shaking too much, I don't wanna make a fool of myself and drop the trays in front of everyone.

Priya: Geet, why are you getting scared? You have already met Maan and as far as you told me, you had a nice meeting. And Dadima is already impressed with you.

Geet: ahh you won't understand.

Priya: yeah yeah.

Priya was pouring tea into the cups when Geet stopped her from filling in the last cup.

Priya: what happened?

Geet: woh, umm he doesn't have tea. He prefers black coffee with no sugar.

Priya (playfully): ahaan acha..

Payal walked into the kitchen.

Payal: come one Geet, they are all waiting for you.

Geet was nervous, she felt like her legs were stuck to the ground.

Payal: Geet, don't get worried, just calm down and relax. Everything will go well.

Geet: Bhabhi, woh Simi...

Payal: it's nothing, you know her mood swings.

Priya: haan Geet. Just be yourself.

Payal, Priya walked either side of Geet. All three were holding trays filled with snacks. They placed the trays o the table and Geet greeted everyone.

Dev, Anwesha and Naintara who were meeting Geet for the first time were impressed with Maan's and Dadima's choice.

Maan was once again lost. Raj had to bring him back. Geet served the snacks to everyone and gave Maan his black coffee. He smiled when he saw the black coffee.

Maan (thinking): she remembered.

Geet (thinking): your likes are unique, how could I have forgotten.

They all enjoyed the snacks, and chatted. Dev, Naintara and Anwesha mingled with Geet easily. Priya was there by her side when she got nervous.

Naintara: wow these snacks are delicious

Payal: Geet had made those.

Naintara: really, wow

Anwesha: if all goes well, then I'll be getting another awesome Bhabhi who cooks so well.

They all smiled.

Dadima: umm Gayatri if you have no objections then can Maan and Geet get some time alone to talk?

Gayatri: why not. (to Geet) beta take him to your room.

Geet nodded. Maan followed her like a gentleman. They got to Geet's room Maan was impressed with what he saw. Her room was sweet and simple just like her. There were pictures on the wall capturing the happy moments.

And then he noticed the flowers he gave Geet yesterday nicely arranged in a vase by her dressing table. He smiled to himself.

Geet: please sit

Maan: thanks, umm you have a nice room

Geet: thank you.

Maan (thinking): what else should I say? No I'll wait for her to say something. Yeah.

Geet (thinking) why aint he saying something? No wait I'm I supposed to ask question? No he's the guy he should start. Yeah.

There was silence. They both can read the nervousness written on each other faces. Just when Maan was about to say something they heard a knock. Simi and Ahana came running in.

Ahana: Chachu, have you met my new friend? This is Simi.

Maan: hello Simi, come here.

Maan placed her on his other leg, so he had Ahana on one side and Simi on the other side. Maan noticed Simi was a little hesitant. Geet just watched them in awe.

Maan: Simi, will you be my friend too?

Simi: yes but you have to promise something.

Maan (nodded): I promise.

Simi: okay, if you and Geet chachi get married you will have to bring her to our house everyday to meet me. Promise?

Maan and Geet had an eye lock. Nothing was decided yet, and here Simi has already made plans for the future. Only Maan knows how he is dying to hear Geet agree for the marriage. Geet got a little emotional.

Maan: beta I promise, if your chachi agrees to marry me then I will always let her come here. In fact I'll always come and take you to our house, how's that idea?

Simi (excited): will you? that would be amazing. Right Ahana..?

Ahana: yesh

She gave him a hug and Maan hugged her back. Geet had a smile on her face. She was so impressed with Maan, in just a few minutes he made Simi smile, where as she had been hiding her sorrow of Geet going away ever since her marriage talks were on with Maan.

Geet knew what was going on In Simi's mind, she been acting odd since morning. But seeing her smile again made Geet smile, which made Maan smile.

Everyone was in the hall, apart from Geet, Simi and Ahana. They were in Geet's room.

Dadima: well we are ready for this marriage and want to take Geet along with us as soon as possible. But what is important is what Geet thinks.

Gayatri: Priya beta..

Priya: ji aunty, I'll go speak to her.

Maan nervously sat down, eagerly waiting for Geet's decision. Dadima came to his side and placed her hand on his. He smiled slightly.

There was silence in the hall. After a few minutes Priya walked down the stairs. Everyone stood up and waited to hear Geet's decision. Priya face was blank, no one could make out what was Geet's decision.

Precap: Geet's decision.

Sorry for leaving you on a cliff hanger, but you all know Geet's decision. I just wanted to add up the curiosity till the next update.

Edited by MaanGeet_GurTi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woohooo..finally m first😉😆

Awesome..superb update Wahul partner🤗

luvd it totally..😳

i m sure geet will say yes than also can't wait to knw geet's decision..update soon😳

Luv ya🤗❤️
Edited by ..tanya.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
geet feeling nervous
nd all r happy wid geet
decision ka wait
update jaldi
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting 4 next part 2 update & interesting precap.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it =D

UPDATE SOON =D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome yaar Wahi!
I'm sure Geet's decision would be a yes :P

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