MG SS: A Path To Reach You..!! Part 13: Pg 141 - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Xx-Shama-xX

Woaaah Wahi..!!Bang on plot! <3


Read both the parts in one go! And girl! You're truly talented! Loved it! Muaaah!<3

Love the relation Maan, Raj, and Priya share! They're super-cute! <3

And yes, the mysterious girl out there! Ah! Cant wait for them to meet in true sense!😳

I could really imagine the last scene! That was beautifully penned down! ❤️

And yea, i heard you've some 'behna' thoughts running in your mind! Dont you even think about it.., you knw..the after effect would be too dangerous!😈😛 Infact, Mujhe apni Pyaar ke bandhan mein baandh do..!You knw what i mean!☺️ Tanu bura nahi maanegi!😉 LMAO!

Cont. Soon!🤗 Cant wait to read further! Loveee you!Muaah!<3


thanks a ton Shammy 🤗

and hahahaa about that... 😆 don't worry that was Tani's idea, i had no hand in it what so ever 😛

thanks once again 🤗
love u too..mwahhh
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: najmaDG

Fantastic prologue & sweet 1st prt .😆.plz continue soon ..



thanks a lot 😊 yup will continue soon
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Originally posted by: RaDMG25

awesome update wahi...update soon please 😃


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mjht_ArVi4ever

lovely update di

ohooo so all girls were drooling on maan and mr maan fell for our lovely geet
omg love at first sight
do continue soon di n sorry for the late reply
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aww no worries, i kno ur busy these days
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sarah_kelly

wahi!!!!!!!!!!!

loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Part 2

Maan returned home from the wedding totally dazed out, he could not forget that face, it was flashing in front of him, those lovely eyes which attracted his attention like a magnet. The angelic face, the light pink coloured lips, she weighed light like a feather. Maan could carry her in his strong arms all day, if he had a choice.

He came out the bathroom changed into his black tracks and a black vest and jumped onto his bed. As soon as he closed his eyes, the beautiful face of that angel came in front of him, a smile automatically adorned his lips, which was unusual as Maan Singh Khurana never smiles, and everyone knows that.

Maan (self talk): What magic have you done on me, it's only been a few hours since I saw you but I can't seem to forget that moment you were in my arm.

He lay awake just thinking about that moment and about that girl who seemed to have conquered his mind, his heart, his everything in just a few hours.

...

After putting Simi to sleep, Geet came into her room and sat in front of her dressing table. She took off her earrings and the simple bangles she was wearing. She was combing her hair when one petal fell from her head. She looked at the petal and went back into memory lane of that moment when she bumped into him. She picked up the petal and a faint smile adorned her lips.

Geet (self talk): Geet tu bhi na. You're such a clumsy girl, what must he be thinking of you, you left from there without saying thanks, he saved you from falling and you did not even appreciate that. Anyway next time if we meet, i'll thank him, that moment was too awkward.

The Next Morning:

The Khurana's were sat at the table eating there breakfast, Maan came dressed in his usual office attire. He settled himself down at the table.

Dadima: Maan, how come you are late for breakfast today?

Maan: nothing Dadima, woh I could not sleep last night so woke up a little late than usual.

He did not tell Dadima the real reason, that a girl kept him awake all night, although he kept it from Dadima, she did not believe him but took that for an answer and kept quiet... Dev and Anwesha were also suspicious, Maan Singh Khurana can stay awake for 5nights in a row and still come down for breakfast on time, then what actually happened..

Dev (clearing his throat): Bro aapki tabiyat theek toh haina?

Maan: yeah, what would happen to me?

Anwesha (butting in): nothing bhai, it's just that you look different today.

Maan: whatever

Chachuuu screamed someone from the top of teh stairs, there stood the youngest Khurana, Ahana Khurana. Dev and Naintara's 4year old daughter. Ahana came down dressed for school with Naintara, she ran to Maan and he placed her on his lap.

Maan: hey how's my little princess?

Ahana: good

Dev: Bro, woh i'll be late for offices today, have to take Naintara to the doctors for her check-up, so will you be able to drop Ahana school?

Maan: sure

Maan: ready for school Ahana?

Ahana: yesssh chachu

Maan: then lets gooo

...

At the Sharma's:

Rajeev: Payal, Payal...

Payal: Ji...coming

She came running to the door with her husband's car keys, his wallet and his handkerchief. He bid her good bye and set off to his work place.

Payal: Geet, Simi hurry up breakfast is ready.

Geet: ji Bhabhi coming

...

At the breakfast table:

Gayatri: Priya's parents must be at ease now, getting a daughter married is a huge responsibility.

She looked towards Geet with some hope, although Geet knew that Gayatri was hinting this at her, she ignored and concentrated on Simi.

Gayatri was once again disappointed, for how long will she live like this. She looked towards Payal who also was looking at Geet with tears in her eyes and with a slight smile.

Payal then looked at Gayatri and nodded her head 'no' which meant to drop this matter here, as Geet will not listen to anyone.

Geet: Simi, come one, i'll drop you off to school today as I can go office a little late today.

Geet: Maa I'm going, bye Bhabhi

Simi: bye Dadi, bye Mummy

...

At School:

Maan and Ahana had also reached school, and at around the same time, Geet and Simi also reached.

Geet dropped Simi off to her class and was on her way out when she bumped into Mrs Bhatia, a very good friend of Gayatri.

On the other side, Maan finally got his way around the moms and the lady staffs that were openly drooling over him. He dropped Ahana off and was on his way out when he noticed that same face again, that angelic face, that did not let him sleep, the face that kept appearing in front of his eyes, whether his eyes were open or closed. He only saw her.

Maan was on side of the school and Geet was on the other side talking with Mrs Bhatia. Maan was lost in her beauty once again.

She wore a light pink suit today and her hair was braided and left on her right shoulder. He was totally lost in adoring her, the way she smiled, the way her eyes fluttered, her fringes that were being blown by the wind.

He was so lost in his dream land that he did not realise that Geet had started to move her way out of the school, after getting disturbed by once of the school staff he realised that Geet had left from there, and it looked like he was staring at another woman who is now talking to Mrs Bhatia.

Maan (self talk): what's happening to me? I lose my concentration when I see her, my heart beats increase, I just feel like seeing her all day.. What is all this? Just a brief bump yesterday and I saw her form a distance today and it has this much effect on me. I need to find my answers quickly before I go mental.. because "yeh ladki, mujhe sach main pagal kar degi"..!!!!

Precap: a one month leap, but no difference since then. Maan still in deep thoughts of this Angel.


Please do like and comment. 😊

Edited by MaanGeet_GurTi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update partner😳
Maan is already in love wid geet now lets see how he will realise n accept his feelings 4 her😛
Luvd it..update soon❤️
Edited by ..tanya.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

updated 😊

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