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FLAMES OF DESIRE

(BEFORE STARTING WITH ANY THING...WANA THANK PREETI ALBERT FROM BOTTOM OF MY HEART)
PART-36
(please stay tuned, as the FLAMES OF DESIRE begins now😳)
"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness."
"maan" geet screamed in terror, looking at the scene infront...she was highly petrified looking at maan killing someone like this...She hated being the reason of someones death...Why all this is happening with her, what was her fault that she has to face this...She collapsed on ground crying bitterly...
"maan please dont kill him" she whimpered, hiding her face...getting scared sitting in the pool of blood...

Maan rushed towards her, throwing that rod away in frustration...He so much wanted to smash him to death...But geet's one scream jerked him back to reality...Geet was shivering in fear,tightly holding herself close...and prem's painfull screams where not helping though...What has she landed herself into, she thought...Her mental condition has got verse, almost reaching to the level of nervous break down...The scars and nail marks on her body where giving her that disgusting feeling of prem's touch...And involuntarily she started rubbing herself inorder to get rid of it...Her painfull bruises started bleeding, still in her trance she didn't stop her act..."maan" she screamed in irritation, again calling for him...

Maan stood there frozen, looking at the horrifying site infront...Was this his mishty, who use to faint at the sight of blood...and now is sitting there in the pool of it...
"maan dekhiye na yeh ja nahi raha" she cried again jerking him out of his reveries...
he started walking towards her with heavy steps...still unsure, how will he handle her...will she blame me? even if she did then i wont backout, he thought...
He stood infront of her, and gently bend down and pulled her up...She was still lost in rubbing herself...and with this sudden pull she only looked at maan with those fearful hazels...
Maan wiped her tears away and took her hands in his to stop her movements...He gestured her not to do that...but still could not fathom the guts to take her in arms...and squeez her till she is assured of being safe...
"aap ro kyu rahe ho" she pulled her hand up to wipe his tears...and that is when she saw her own hands soaked with blood...her eyes widen in fear...as she looked at it with panic and then at maan...She tried to say something, but her tears gave away...
Geet started rubbing her hands on her lehnga...her trembling lips, her shivering form, gave away the mental trauma she is going through...Maan felt helpless looking at her, he felt choked with the lump forming in his throat...Without delaying any further, he just crushed her shaky figure in his arms...Geet closed her eyes shut, letting the tears to spill away...her mind, her body had worked up beyond its limit...she just lifelessly stayed in his arms, controlling her painful hiccups...
Maan could feel her not responding to his hug...he just crushed her more into himself, almost choking her with its pressure..."i am sorry...i really tried to reach here on time"...he cried with agony...madly caressing her back, kissing all over her face..."please look at me geet" he whimpered, looking at her closed eyes...he licked her spilling tears..."please dont cry, i wont be able to control myself geet"...maan gently kissed her on her lips..."please jaan...dont do this to me" he pleaded for her one look...then screamed voilently, pushing her away..."i wont leave this bas***d now"
Geet harshly fell on the ground in her half conscious state...she looked at maan walking away..."maan" she whispered...trying to stop him...But maan in his fury could not think straight...he madly searched for the rod...and later finding it, he turned around looking for prem...
"maan please dont do this" geet whimpered and finally maan looked at her..."please dont" maan closed his eyes, feeling helpless infront of her...He ran towards her and in one swift took her in his arms...and started walking out of that place...
It was completely dark by now, with no scope of any light...Maan looked here and there, thinking which way to go...He felt kind of lost, as when he came here, it was in the day light...but now it was quite difficult to find any way...He looked at geet in his arms, and gave a faint smile...He knew it was no use asking her for direction in this mental state...Deciding something by himself, he started walking, safely cocooning her in his arms...He kept walking, still confused with the directions...
"maan hum kaha ja rahe hai???" he heard geet speaking after a long time...he looked at her smiling then kept her on her feet...Geet looked down and slightly got closer to him..."dar lag raha hai????" maan asked, gently taking her in his arms...He knew she is afraid of darkness...
"ummm thoda sa" she meekly said and maan hugged her tightly with a smile forming on his face...
"i think we are lost" he finally blurted out...and geet with reflex clinged to him more...
"itna kyu dar rahi ho...mai hu na tumhare saath" he caressed her back, then slightly pulled her away...admiring her face in moon light...
"hum delhi wapas kab jayenge" geet asked innocently...as maan cupped her face in his palms..."bas aaj ki raat...he hugged her again...aur kal hum delhi mai honge" geet smiled hugging him back...Her pettite figure perfectly blended in his strong arms...Maan closed his eyes, softly caressing her bare back...feeling her getting alive under his soft touch...Geet clutched his shirt more carnally pushing herself more into him...Maan could feel her softness pressing on his hard form...How much he craved for her touch all this days...But now when she is so close, he just felt this urge to hold her safely in his arms without getting wild with his own desire...
After some time maan softly pulled away, feeling her shivering in his arms...he looked at her and found her hugging herself feeling cold...
"thand lag rahi hai" maan asked and started to undo his shirt buttons...Geet looked at his hands and then at his face making a baby scared face..."babaji mujhe thand lag rahi hai aur inko dekho kapde utar rahe hai" she murmured and the next moment felt something warm surrounding her body...She looked at him, while maan was adjusting his shirt around her...
"maan" she whispered with tears forming in her hazels...What was she thinking before blindly accusing him for lust...She looked down in guilt, thinking he can never be wrong...It was she who was at fault...
"i am sorry" she meekly breathed out...looking down, not meeting his gaze...While maan just folded his hands, giving her his amusing look...He knew she is thinking something out of context...so he just waited for her to calm down...
Maan then cupped her face and gave a loving peck on her cheek...Both of them stood deeply looking into each others eyes...He gently placed a loose strand of curls behind her ear and touched her face softly...They were standing so close together facing each other feeling the warmth of their togetherness after such a long time...He gazed into her eyes craving to love her madly but feared the pain she must be going through...He leaned closer gazing her numb hazels, and gently pecked her forehead...Geet involuntarily raised her head to the kissing position, putting her arms around him...both where breathing heavily with geet's head resting on his shoulders...His hands wandered on her back, craving to feel her as much as possible...Geet moved a bit tighter with her lower limbs, and heaved a huge sigh, feeling his hard thrombing manhood...She parted away, biting her lips, feeling weird with that touch...
Maan could feel her getting uncomfortable...He so much wanted to feel her more erotically, but only when she is ready for it...He moved away from her, walking few steps and noticed a broken hut in the mid of dense bushes...He smiled and moved back towards blushing geet...and without any warning, he took her in his arms and started walking towards the shelter...Geet snacked her arms around his neck and cuddled more closer to his chest...
They entered through the broken doors...the hut looked quite messy, with dry hay spread around the place...Maan gently placed her down and closed the door...It was completely dark, with just moonlight penetrating through the window...Geet tried to hold him in fear...but panicked finding him no where..."maan" she called and the next moment felt him hugging her from back...
"bolo" he spoke nuzzling his face in the curve of her neck...
"cant we go back to haveli" she asked...hugging his arms...
Maan flinched with her suggestion...now he so much hated this place and those people..."hum haveli kabhi nahi jayenge" he ordered...hugging her more carnally...
"maan" she whispered...feeling his hold getting tightened around her...almost hurting her..."toh hum delhi chale" she tried calming him...
"maine kaha na kal chalenge" he was about to shout but then controlled his anger, moving away from her...Why can't she understand what this people have done with her...How can brij and darji be so careless in sending geet away, so late with that idiot rajji...What was brij doing all this days...can't he control his own sister...Maan can't even imagine what he would have done with rajji and that pervert rohan, if anything would have happen with geet...
Geet shivered with his stern voice...she looked at his back, and knew he is angry..."aap gussa mat karo...mujhe dar lagta hai" she slowly whispered, hugging him from back...Maan closed his eyes in guilt, and turned around taking her in his..."i am sorry...i can never be angry on you" he assured caressing her back...
"sachi" she innocently asked...putting her fingers in his hair, softly caressing it...while her other hand roamed on his back, pulling him closer...
"ummm" he could feel himself getting turned on, with her mere touch...and here she is sensuously touching him all around...
Even if she is doing it naively...but what about the havoc her innocent act is creating in him...He suddenly pulled out, and moved litle away, creating a comfortable gap between them...
"woh tum bohat thak gayi hogi...i will find something for you to sleep" saying this he looked for something, then pulled out the bunch of dried grass, which was placed at the corner...He spread it on the ground, making a some what fulffy bed for her...He looked for some cloth to just cover it, but then couldn't find it...He looked at geet who was looking at him without blinking her lashes...He gestured her to come close to him...Geet walked towards him in trance...she was drooling over his flexing muscles, his taut body...Involuntarily her gaze locked on his sweaty chest...which looked lot more alluring under the moon light...Geet shivered has her thoughts went to the scene she saw on terrace that night...where rajji and rohan where making out...She so much wanted to ask maan, clarify her doubts...but knew this was not the right time..."mai baad mai puchungi...hai na babaji" she said looking up...and that is when maan turned around and smiled amusingly looking at her antics...He walked towards her and abruptly picked her in his arms..."ho gayi babaji se baate" he asked, smiling naughtily looking at a shocked geet...
"mai toh bas avaiyii hi" geet pouted, twisting her lips...while maan smirked...He gently laid her on grass...and sat besides her pulling off the shirt which he kept around her...
"yeh aap kya kar rahe ho" she maintained her pout...
"just putting it as spread for you to sleep" he moved back..."now sleep"
"aur aap"
"i will be sitting here...aur waise bhi mujhe neend nahi aa rahi" he walked to the far end, and sat there...
"par mujhe aapke pas..." she couldn't finish her words as maan shouted..."geet just sleep now"
"ummm" she moaned gently laying on that grass, looking at him expectantly that he will join...but maan looked away, ignoring her puppy face...He knew, he will loose himself if he stayed that close to her...her bare back, that curve of her waist looked lot more tempting to ignore...He just closed his eyes feeling disgust with his thoughts...
Geet closed her eyes and tried sleeping knowing how stubborn he is...
"why can't he sleep with me...mai kya kha jaungi unhe" she cribbed again looking at him...
"geet" came his stern voice commanding her to sleep...
"dekho mai toh so rahi hu" she said with her closed eyes...while maan laughed at her antics...
"ya i can see that...but for a change try sleeping for real" he teased and geet with her cute anger turned around showing him her back...
Maan's eyes grew bigger looking at her bare back...What was he thinking before pulling off that shirt from her body...He bit his lips, slowly cursing himself...he looked away trying not to think wild...
Sleep was far away from geet's hazels, she just cribbed her heart out...Not getting this fact of him sleeping so far away from her..."yaha sone mai kya problem hai...har wakt gussa karte hai" she slowly turned around and found him looking away..."meri taraf dekh bhi nahi rahe hai" now she slept facing him...fixing her hazels on his taut back...
Suddenly it started raining heavily with loud thunderstroms...geet jerked sitting up, getting scared with the loud noise...She looked at maan, gulping her sailiva...and went towards him, sitting close...Maan flinched with the touch of her skin...He looked at her, asking what happen, but geet just hugged him tightly...Maan got worried, cocooning her trembling form in his arms...
"kya hua geet" he asked in concern...
"woh barish...mujhe dar lag raha hai...please mujhe aapke paas rehne do" she hugged him more tightly, fearing he will again push her away...
Maan tried getting up, but geet didn't budge...she made her hold more strong around his neck...
"geet mujhe marne ka irada hai kya" he asked pulling her hands away...feeling choked with her strong hold...Then shook his head looking at her baby face...He stood up and picked her in his arms and started walking towards the dry grass bed...Geet made a crying face, thinking he will again leave her and go...But maan slowly laid her down and leaned over her..."i am not going anywhere jaan...atleast now lossen your hold" he chukled but then his expression changed as geet looked at him with more desire...
He leaned over her, softly balancing his weight...Geet didnt left her hold, but made it more carnal pulling him on her..."geet" he whispered drowning in her hazels...He brushed the loose strand of hair, off her cheek as it slides ever so lightly past her ear...His thumb rubbing softly caressing her earlobe...while his fingers supporting the back of her head...
He leaned in and firmly yet seductively place there lips together...Maan could feel her quickly inhale, pulling the air from his own lungs...Their lips were moist with desire...Maan pulled her body closer and embraced her holding her tightly against him...Geet stared deep into his eyes, suddenly seeing the future she really wanted...Maan sensuously snacked his arms around her curvy waist, and pulled her more tightly against him...There lips where just glued on each other...just getting the feel of their togetherness after such a long time..."i missed you" geet whispered between their lips...while maan cocooned her more closely, sleeping besides her...Their hug turned passionate, as geet moved her leg between his...Their bodies where entangled, hungrily rubbing on eachother...
The room seemed to spin around as maan took her lower lip in between his...he sucked on it more passionately...sucking her flesh lavishly...the saliva was dripping out from the corner of her lips, as maan took her upper lips, sucking, nibling, giving it his equal attention...gosh her lips felt buttery smooth against his rough ones...The feel of his beard harshly scratching her soft cheeks, just added that zeal to their passion, turning it more erotic...
Geet closed her eyes, trying to returned the kiss with similar fervour...But just failed, as maan overpowered her with more demands...The urgency in his kiss was unbearable, like he wanted to own every parts on her hot warm mouth...His body pressed her down, as geet could see firework, with the ecstacy he filled her with...
His tongue finally probed in her mouth, searching for hers...then sucked on it pulling it in his mouth...Their tongue danced, pleasuring eachother beyond their limit...while their hands could not stop searching for ways to please more...
He finally pulled away a litle, still licking her lips with his dripping saliva...Then again captured them in his mouth, sucking, nibbling, licking it more hungrily...Geet shivered with the tingling sensation all over her body...She just pressed herself more into him, not knowing what else to do...Maan panted pulling away, he just laid on her, breathing on her face...still nibbling on her lips...Her now pulm lips tasted honey, as maan could not stop himself from quenching his thirst...
Finally maan pulled away, sleeping besides her...his lips where trembling with the aftermath of their wild act...he took her in his arms and slept closing his eyes...Geet could feel his thudding heart, telling the story of the effect she has on him...She slept on him feeling more contented with whatever they shared...
It was quite afternoon when maan woke up from his sleep...he looked around and found geet still clinging on his chest...He smiled kissing on her forehead, then softly laid her on other side...He got up brushing his cloths, removing the dry grass...he remembered there last night passion, and a blush formed on his cheeks...he looked at his angel sleeping there now cuddling herself close...She looked so cute but highly wornout...maan felt guilty for his wild act...But then it was there wish, she too demanded it...He pacified himself and moved out of the hut...He looked at the burning sun, then at his watch..."gosh we slept so much" he thought, then went in for waking her up...
"geet...utho jaan...we need to go" he sat besides her gently waking her up...but geet just pouted twisting her body other way...
"jaan please...i promise i will let you sleep in the car" he again tried to pacify her...
"hato mujhe sona hai" geet moaned in her half sleep...
"but we are getting late jaan"
"ummm"
"geet you wont listen right" he threatened...
"ummm" she just moaned showing her denial...and maan with out delaying any further, took her in his arms, and started walking out of the house...
Geet hugged him and slept...while maan started walking finding his way, to get out from this jungle as soon as possible...He walked for quite some time...Completely tired bearing geet in his arms all the way...Finally giving up he gently kept her down...panting for some fresh air...Geet looked at him with her drowsy hazels sitting there on ground...She pulled her hands up cutely asking him to take her in his arms again...
"no" he said still panting...
"please" she made a baby face...
"gosh geet kitni bhari ho tum" he complained...then again bend down to take her in his arms...geet smiled showing off her grin...
"you will kill me some day" he shook his head, cribbing...while geet just pecked his cheek, giving her angelic smile...
After walking for several hours, they reached handa haveli...Even if maan didn't wanted them to go there...but their luggage and geet's cloths where still there...So any how he had to visit them for the last time...and he will make sure it will be the last time...
It was evening by now, and the whole house sparkled with beautiful lightning...Maan could guess, brij has moved on with his marriage...What kind of brother he is, he thought...not even bothered about his sister's where about, and just got married like nothing must have happened...Rage took over him as he made his fist more tight, then hugged geet sideways...They entered in the main hall, and found everyone sitting there with sad faces...Geet shook maan's arm, asking him what happened...then looked at brij and darji, whoose faces where lowered in shame...She pulled herself away from maan's hold and started walking towards darji...
"wahi ruk ja geet" darji spoked sternly, halting her steps...
"darji...aap aise kyu keh rahe hai" geet cried feeling reluctance in their eyes...
"didnt you felt ashamed of your act, before coming here" he accused, feeling shame to call her his own grandchild...
"darji yeh aap kya keh rahe ho" brij intervened...
"chup ho ja brij...dont you know what she has done" darji shouted...making geet flinch back in fear...She ran towards maan, and hugged him..."maan darji mujhe kyu daant rahe hai...maine kya kiya" she cried...
"kya yahi sanskar hai aapke darji...dekhiye kaise iss ladke ke gale lag rahi hai sabke samne" spoke one of the villager with disgust...while other villagers spoke slang words about geet, abusing her...
"pehale toh mere bache ko waha apne husn ke jaal mai phisala kar le gayi, aur phir apne premi se pitawaya" cried prem's mother, cursing geet...
"kaisi ladki nikali yeh...rano and mohinder ka naam meethi mai mila diya iss ladki ne" one of the elder lady said...
Maan could guess what must have happened by now...he looked at prem's friends sitting there with broken bones...
"bas...ek shabd aur nahi meri geet ke baare mai" maan shouted his lungs out...and pushed geet slightly away, walking towards prem's friends...he grabbed one of the guy, and smacked his face with a hard blow...then picked the other one, and smashed his face on the near by wall...Everyone panicked around him and rushed towards him, to pull him back...
"maan geet is at fault...she herself took prem with her" brij tried calming him...but maan leaving that guy aside, just pounced on brij, holding his collar...
"bhai bolata hai khud ko" he punched brij in his guts..."shame on you...can't you see her innocence" maan screamed feeling ashamed to call him geet's brother...
"maan yeh hamare ghar ka mamala hai...tumhe bich mai aane ki jarurat nahi...tumhara aur geet ka koi rishata nahi" darji said sternly, pulling geet with himself...and started walking into the house...
Geet cried screaming for maan...she was petrified with the turns of events...And now darji taking her away, felt like a near death...She looked at maan and found him marching towards them...And with a harsh pull he took geet in his arms, giving a deadly look to darji...Maan dragged geet towards the mandap, which was placed in the mid of the hall...and the next moment filled her forehead with sindoor, marking her his...
"ab hui yeh maan ki geet"
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Precap:- Back to delhi😃...and facing the family😲
hello guys...i am really sorry for making you wait so much...please belive me i dont plan on it...it just took me time to reach this ending...as i wanted to get over with this final twist with this update only...
so guys kaisa laga mera dhamaka twist...i dont know what i have written, just went with the flow...and now i want big comments, as it was my most awaited twist...
A BIG THANKS TO PREETI ALBERT...becoz she suggested me to get them married in hp...thank u so much sweety for the idea...this part is specially dedicated to you...love u so much...
and one request guys pls read the note on page one...just below the teaser...that one is specially for all of you...
once again a big thanks for 313 likes...man dats huge n i want it to continue in future too...so pls press the like button and comment...
love u lots,
varsha😊
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will comment after reading...!!
main if-dazzler bn gai mele ko wish b ni kiya...

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dat was really a major twist...!!!

d way she was trying to get free from dat disgusting toch of dat bas*** prem...i was really feeling sad...wat dat rasc** had to my sweet innocent geet...maan was dying wid his own guilt...he wasn't able to even take geet in his arms n sooth her pain...*i was feeling lyk burning dat prem alive*
d behaviour of geet had already told us dat she didn't had slightest idea of wat prem wanted to do...she is so naive n innocent lyk first drop of dew...she was being herself wid maan dat too after dat horrible incident...jst luv'd deir understanding love n caring...!!!
one tym was dere when maan want to feel her in everyway...bt being her dis close dere was only one thing in his mind...n dat was her safety...d pure love..."babaji mujhe thand lag rahi hai aur inko dekho kapde utar rahe hai"...gosh after reading dis i really want to pull geet's cheeks...she is so much adorable...!!!

dey spend deir night in a hut...😳...when geet asked maan..."cant we go back to haveli"...i was lyk.....how could she even think of anything lyk dat...*bt den i remember she is our jhalli geet...full of innosence*
d dark night maaneet in deserted place...all alone...in hut...d rain was pouring outside...wat a perfect atmosphere for deir romance...hayeee...n deir passion is something which always left me speechless...same wid dis nyt too...a single night dat changed deir relation...n lyf too...*hayeee...dreamy*

hmmm...now dey are going back delhi..bt dey do have to go to dat haveli...my my...d whole scenario was changed dere...dey all are blaming geet...how could dey...even her own family too...brij how could he...her loves her so much den too...how could he...i hate him n daarji too...dey r accusing geet...gosh dey can't even control dat bit** rajji n dey ......*i want to burn whole hoshiyaarpur...grrr...*

dis whole drama was really unbearable to maan..."maan yeh hamare ghar ka mamala hai...tumhe bich mai aane ki jarurat nahi...tumhara aur geet ka koi rishata nahi"...how could daarji ask dis question to maan...dis guy really need a doze from msk..."ab hui yeh maan ki geet"...dis was d best part of d update...atlast dey becum maaneet...i luv'd it...awesum twist...!!!

d update was indeed awesum amazing lovely superbly fantastically fabulous...!!!
i luv'd it...u r such a sweet n adorable...muuaaahhh...!!!!


well i had already crossed my finger for future update... https://kaushikh29.edublogs.org/files/2011/05/fingerscrossed-fingers-crossed-goodluck-smiley-emoticon-000674-large-1e7fyrk.gif


for update don't stress urself...don't u dare to skip ur sleep...dare u wake till late nyt...we can wait for update bt ur health comes first...so u better take care of urself...cauz u r very precious to us...!!!



Edited by deepali1022 - 13 years ago
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👏ale wah...me

also...!!!

right now me off to bed...half comment was dere in above post...rest will comment in dis post bt tomorrow...till den take care...!!!

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ok to i know ki i m little late for my rest of d comment bt kya karti i wasn't well...

chalo now about my feelings about update n specially dose villans...

"i read whole update bt dere wasn't any punishment to culprits...i know u will punish dem in nxt update bt kya karu dil hai ki manta nai...😆 ...
how could brij do dat i mean i had thought dat brij really loves geet n will always trust her watever condition will b...bt i was totally wrong...jst bcauz of some outsider's story he believed dem...😡...when maan punched him i was really happy...👏...bt only one..😕...not fair...!!!
daarji ahhh...i thought k though he was strict...little bit orthodox...bt den too she is his grand-daughter...n really knows her...how innocent she is...den to he mis-understand her...😭...and he was so much blind dat he even questioned maan...i so hate him...😡
oh babaji...i so hate dat bit** rajji...dis much happen in such tym span n she didn't even try to clear dose mis-understandings...😡...wat kind of woman she is...she don't have any self-respect...she even had put her dignity on stake...n now dere is no humanity left in her...gosh dis girl is such a...🤬"

prem n rohan had got wat dey deserve...still dey were outsider...bt wat about dose who were always near geet...n dey show-off deir love to her...!!!

update was totally jhakkas...n i am flat...wid twist...!!!
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waiting waiting ...!!

waiting waiting ...!!

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waiting waiting ...!!

waiting waiting ...!!

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waiting waiting ...!!

waiting waiting ...!!

waiting waiting ...!!

waiting waiting ...!!

waiting waiting ...!!
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how are u feeling now?
apna khyal rkha kariye...aap...
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Originally posted by: deepali1022

how are u feeling now?

apna khyal rkha kariye...aap...

really dont wid this cold...mera voice itna hoarse ho gaya hai ki pucho mat...abhi wil pm n sleep

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