VENOMOUS DESIRE-THREAD 01 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start dear!!!!... Loved it veryy much...
Plzzz cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dear m nt at all uncomfortable wid dis story!!!!!
Plzz cont it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It is dark and passionate story
But ffs an emotional touch to it as maan witnessed the abusive behavior of his d dad
I would love to read further
Now it is your call
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i am not uncomfortable while reading
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Awesome update
loved it
lovely start
cont.soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update...
maans past seems painful m sad...
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don't know about others... but i m NOT at all uncomfortable...:)
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i m not uncomfortable ... others i dont know... looking frwrd fr nxt updt...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me hit the like button sweets!!

Loving the different type of FF!!!

Though Maan's past is sad!!

Commented in detail on FB already as you know!! he he!!

But yahan bhi comment karna aur like karna banta tha na!!!
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PART 02


Desires how very beautiful word from dictionary...desires always makes man weak from every possible way...desires gives dawn to d new man which have d bad behaviour...these desires makes d man uncontrollable...when these desires towers inside d man's mind then he wont sleep peacefully till he satisfies his desires...desires have many types...some has d desires to control d whole world..some has desires to control their mental stability..some has d desires to achieve something..then some has d desires to reach d goal completely...physically,mentally,biologically,man is surrounded by desires...man can be alive if he wont have any desires though it can be positive desires or negative desires or we cant say dat person as man..but a stone...











These desires dawns in each human which can be shown d right pathway by d family..friends or even this society..then only man can become man and can stopped by becoming an animal.But for me...i dont hv any family...i was d silent spectator of d violence which was done by my father Nishanth Singh Khurana for my mother Sahana Singh Khurana...my mother who was d calm person just like her name Sahana...was d epitome of beauty...she was d epitome of beauty and perfect wife for my father but for my father...she was d use nd throw thing...when he want to fulfill his desires then he would come to her and fulfill his desires and hurt her and throw her to d corner and went fm there leaving my mother in grief..in pain...











I was d silent spectator as i dint understood abt this type of actions but when my mind matured then i came to know dat how my father was cruel to my mother.My father in his dominance hurted my mother so much till she was sold to his friends in gambling.My father in his ego..dominance he sold my mother in d gambling in order to get rid of her fm his life becoz of another woman.Pammi Singhania d love interest of my father who had left him due dat he's poor and not able to fulfill her pocket money dat she had played with his heart and went fm his life then only my mother Sahana came into his life.











My mother gave my father everything...money...status...name...and property and herself but he wasnt satisfied with d way of d life...he wanted to go back to his love interest...he wanted to lead d life with d woman whom he loved truly.or is it d mere attraction...my mother also loved my father truly...but what she got in return...just only pain fm my father...is it d result we get for d person whom love them unconditionally...is it d result which we hv to face when we love and concern for d man unconditionally...













Life is so complicated and d relationships r too complicated...but this life is full of sorrow...and happiness...cruel and pity...cheat and trust...just we have to choose it rightfully..becoz life give every oppurtunity to man to overcome it...today also i remember my mother crying and dragged by those thugs and i cant do anything on that time as myself was oblivious to these facts but one thing i felt when they dragged and dat was d departure fm my mother..which was so painful...and dat was d last i saw my mother...and dat was last i saw my father too...as next morning when he went to his love interest...he was cheated...he was cheated by his beloved...he thot her as his life and left his life partner..dint even saved her fm those thugs whom he had promised to take care during d wedding but was cheated when he saw his beloved marrying a rich guy for money..where he was thrown out fm d place when he got to know d real truth.











This is d life which gives everything and it also snatches away everything in single second.My father repented his sins for he committed on my mother but till today i dont know where my mother is but till now becoz of this mentality dat my father confined himself inside d four walls of d house.Then only my grandmother came to me and took d charge of KC and KM and i was left in d care of my grandmother.My grandmother also taught me everything but i was once again cheated by woman but also blessed by a girl who loved me unconditionally and she was Geet Singhania.But i dint recognise her love till d end..till she was in deathbed..till she was nearing her death...and i was d one who was ignorant to her love..oblivious to her love becoz of d cheat with made me stone heart...but ...














...Geet made my stone heart melt and mould it to love her...her cute antics...her lovely adorable face...her pouting lips...it was blissful to see her cute antics but i dint see her in dat way told her dat i wont love her but d desires always made her to have her near her love her...possess her..but i thot this as d lust..which made me think abt her like dat but she never complained to me when i was satisfying my desires with her she only gave in just out of love..she loved me unconditionally..but i crushed her love..made her stone heart and made suicide herself in front of me with my harsh words and behaviour...

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After 21 years...Mumbai







A girl sat there wearing d wedding attire with a glow in her face.She had round black eyes,long white nose,slightly flattened red tinged lips,with long chin.She was looking beautiful and this was Sameera Singhania...Geet's cousin and Geet's uncle's daughter whom i was abt to marry.She was a struggling model and her father had brought alliance to my house and had gave d hand of Sameera to me...i liked d girl too...she was chirpy bubbly and non stop chatter box and she was attracted by my handsomeness seeing my bisceps and well toned chest...which i had maintained it for my health...but she was so much attracted dat she was so forward having S** with me...










I refused it as it was wrong before their marriage..but she was so excited and seducing girl dat i have to slap her for make her to come into senses..and then only she had vowed to not to marry me...but i liked her...may be it was only attraction but when i met Geet who was so soft...chirpy,bubbly and non stop chatter box too...i was mesmerised with her beauty...and my desires tolled over to have her...love her...(Guys dont think it wrongly am only explaining Maan's mental state..how a man can change seeing anything in front of him if it is d persons or it is d thing...everytime his minds wanders off to see new things and new people and when he sees that then he thinks of grabbing it and having it as their possession)










I was mesmerised with her beauty and felt a magnetic pull towards her..she was innocent and cute dat i cant believe myself dat i was attracted towards her.She was studying d first year of graduation in Architecture and wanted a guide for this subject as it was d toughest subject and i had done masters in dat and was running my KC and have made d company to stand in No.1 position.Geet asked d help fm me and i was glad to give her d help but some magnetic pull i felt towards her..her hazel brown eyes..long white nose..baby pink lush lips...and soft dimple chin..and her perfect statur made him invited to kiss her...love her and devour her..but i had d barrier dat i was d would be brother-in law of her..but still her cuteness made me look so much pully towards her.











Panditji called d bride to come to d mandap but on dat time Sameera got a call to her mobile and d agent who was struggling with her profile in fashion world told her to come to Delhi tonight now to give her first profile details to d fashion designer Manish Malhotra who had came to d city for some work.Sameera was excited to hear d news and in haste made Geet to sit on d mandap forcefully in full ghoongat and ran to give her first interview to Delhi.Geet refused abt this but Sameera made her to sit on d mandap forcefully and ran.No one knew abt this arrangement except Geet who sat beside Maan in ghoongat and was crying inside d ghoongat becoz all d rituals went on..Maan wore mangalsutra to Geet and put over d sindhoor to her fm d ghoongat Maan dint see d person for a single second too and Geet sat there crying at their marraige was complete.










When Maan opened d ghoongat then he got d shock of his life as it wasnt Sameera but Geet who was crying silently in front of him.Somewhere in his corner of his heart he was feeling rejoiced but major part was he was cheated and Maan was angry on Sameera's parents who cheated him and his family.Dadimaa was shocked and she brutally had a row with Singhania family and went fm there taking Geet with her as she some where accepted Geet as her daughter-in-law.But Maan never accepted Geet but he was always attracted towards her and he also disowned her and dint gave his name to her also.



Precap-Maaneet's first kiss...



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Note-Is there any confusions then do let me know

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago

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