VENOMOUS DESIRE-THREAD 01

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Which kinda person u r dear.How u can write such wonderful works.When I was reading IZK last day I was shocked patta nahi mujhe kya hua now such a sensuous work.Hav u done masters on this.U r too good awesome.I always got amazed when I found warning +18 on ur works.I think no need itna to sabhi pad he letay hai .why u always wanna tag ur work adult.Ur works r beautiful any one can read.Its true.I always wait for u.

Lov

Jass Nagra

Quote

amrutavjoshi

@amrutavjoshi

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Amazing update...
Just Love...
So keep writing 😊

Love
Amruta

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

nats0101

@nats0101

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

well..

u really know hw to get d temperatures soaring, dont u?

a hawt one..

bt d fb seems to indicate a painful past..

way 2 go..

do continue soon..

Edited by nats0101 - 13 years ago

Quote

Guzara Waqt

@Mango_Melody

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Wow!!!! That was too hot
and painful
waiting for next

Quote

aarthi

@Aarthi_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

ahem ahem loved the update di

Quote

GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

awesome n hot present...but past seems to b horrible

Quote

maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

NOTE

Guys please tell me honestly r u feeling uncomfortable reading d Venomous Desire?????Please i want an honest answer as some people r feeling uncomfortable reading and i have noticed it if u feel uncomfortable then do let me know i will stop it right away...pls i dont want make u guys feel uncomfortable..so pls give me honest answer...i want ur opionion now only guys if u feel it is wrong then i'll stop it right away...

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

Quote

Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Super sensuous update buddy,but sensuous hone ke saath saath emotional bhi tha...Why did maan wanted to gift geet wid all his love??? Has he smthng wrong wid her in d past,is geet really maan's wife???? And abt maan's mother...how much pain she mst have gone thru to hv an abusive husband like maan's father...And lil maan,wat mst hv gone thru him to see his mother at dat devastating state thad too daily ...,.d update was really superb,complete in all sences but yet incomlete...

Quote

Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Reply to note----If u ask me its a thumbs up story,its different,serious & yes seems dark.But thats d beauty of d story,i'm completely loving d story.But if ppl r not comfortable & they express dat to u,den its ur call.But i wud've luved u to continue.