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aarthi

@Aarthi_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#651

di plz give next update soon na... its getting very interesting...

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#652

Lovely Update 😳

I'll kill dis Sameera 😡

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#653

part 11
my maanu realized he lv her
oye maanu jyada mat soch yes u reallr lv her😆
maanu confessed his doing infront of veer n
veer punched him
hawww me 😭😭
bt lv geets' possessiveness for maanu n geet kya jawaab diya veer ko
oye veer me hope teri vja se geet ko akal aaye n manu ko sab bta de😃

part 12

maanu ,mission manao geet
bt wo toh kbi rothi hi nhi babaji
n maanu wow kya bolti band ki uss paruli
n maaneet romance bt ye sam kha se aa gyi babaji
kick her out hate her
precap- waiting

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lehr

@lehr

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#654

awesome update dear.

sam 😡😡😡😡😡😡.

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#655

loved the update

love the way maan was expressing himself and defending her

uff chudail vaapis aa gayi..shoo shoo go away

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#656

Superb update. Ye dono car me hi shuru ho gye. Driver tb kya kr rha tha.

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#657

Tu na is sameera ka khoon kar de... Meri Angel ko nukrani keh rahi bhootni grrr
awsome update... Bechare mere Maaneet us b**** ki wajhse mill b nahi pa rahe hai

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#658

gr8888 prt ...hate this sameera...updt sooon

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seher

@love4all

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#659

awesome part dear

i loved it

ye sam be na please do one thing

this time let maan stand by geet's side

let maan teach sam a gooodd lesson

to not mess with Mr&Mrs khurrana

pleaseee pleeaassseee

thanks for pm

cont sooon

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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#660

Lov dis ff n d way story is moving.

Maan's gesture n care fr geet ws haaye!!!

Bt maaneet scene n convo in car n his cabin ws as if its writtn in a hurry n in short n in such way dat it seemed many lines in between hav been missd while writing. Plz take care of dis nxt time coz frankly speaking maaneet ka ye part behadd pyara tha pr achha nahi lga padhke. Thr ws so much missing... N i mean incomplete romance n convo n intimacy all included.
Sry if u felt offended.

So sam is back.
Her story in mumbai ws also writtn in a rush dear.

She is such a loser n arrogant fool.

Wanna see maan's reaction wen he'll see her.

Also y maan is still havng sam's pic in his wallet????

Conti soon.

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