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RECAP

When i was leading my life with my newly wed husband then i was about to be kicked out of my college where i was studying Architecture in bachelor's degree'..chachiji refused to pay my fees due to the fiasco as she thought am responsible for all this fiasco'she had the habit of blaming me for every bad happenings'and am used to it'but chachiji's one remark made me decide that to not to become dependent on anyone'.so i started searching for the job so that i can pay my debts and live in this world with proud by earning my food'.but job hunting is not so easy'.but which hurted me most was when i was accused by Maan that i was trying to gain entry into his company to get hold of his company when he dint know that am the owner of 1000 crores shares in Singhania and major stake holder of the company'..time plays its tricks'.i am the richest person in this whole country still i was never recognised by that'but am happy with that as i was myself in this world'.

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PART 10

Geet was moving her hand on the floor from the bed when she got something to her.Geet opened her almond eyes and saw what is it when she saw Maan's wallet which was thrown away when they were sharing the passionate moments.Geet took the wallet and was about to keep then she saw someone's lips and it was a photo where the wallet's upper part had closed the photo till the lips.Geet wanted to know who it is and opened it slowly slowly and saw the wallet pouch where a girl's photo was there.Geet saw the photo and was shocked..it was the photo of Sameera which was kept lovingly inside his wallet.Geet thought that the ground which she was standing is gonna slip and she thought that the earth burst and swallow her.Tears poured down from her almond eyes seeing the photo and remembered Sam's and her convo in past.



FLASHBACK''''''->

Sameera said laughing sarcastically,"Geet'no one can love you'.because this generation of boys like only girls like me not like you'did you see your face in the mirror'.u look like a witch'..!"Geet was totally hurted by her words and cries while Sameera laughed at Geet's crying face and went from there.Geet ran to her room which was seen like store room and took her diary from her bed side table and started writing the poem'.everytime she felt something or experienced she would write that in her diary..if it is happy event or sad event'..


FLASHBACK ENDS''''''>






Geet still was seeing the photo of Sameera with shock..many questions started to swoop in her mind and main ones was what Sam di's pic is doing inside Maan's wallet?He hates her to the core'.but is it only illusion?Did i came in between Sam di and Maan?Then why he get intimated with me'?From the day one i saw some spark in Maan's eyes seeing me..is it only attraction?Do am the one who is tempting him to be attracted?And Maan was engaged with di but got married due to that circumstances'is he trying to revenge on me due to the betrayal?Is that the truth?Is he still in love with Sam di and i came between them?Geet dint know what is right and wrong and she got up from Maan's grip slowly wrapping herself from the blanket.









Geet started crying silently seeing the room's state and thought,"Kal raat ko humaare beech jo kuch bhi huva woh sab kuch sirf ek attraction tha?Kya mein itni badnaseeb hoon ki mujhe yeh sukh bhi nahin mila'.!"Geet started to walk backwards crying silently and banged her back to the table where she keeps her files and the drawer opened to reveal a red file.Geet had forgotten everything about the file and opened it and read it once again.When she read the last line of the file then she was totally broken down from inside and she collapsed to the floor holding the file and started crying silently.Her eyes were not becoming dry and her sorrows were never gonna end.She had sat there crying silently and her heart had broken'.she recalled back the marraige day when Maan was about to become her jiju'.






FLASHBACK'''->


Sam getting ready to escape from the marraige when Geet saw this and asked shockingly,"Di'aap kya kar rahi hai aapne apna kapde kyun badal rakha hai kuch hi der mein aapki shaadi hone waali hai aur aap kapde badaldiya'di aisa kaunsi pareshaani thi ki aap kapde badal daala'!"Sameera immediately closed Geet's mouth and told,"Zyaada chilaane ki koi zaroorat nahin'.mujhe abhi abhi Manish Malhothra ne khud phone kiya tha aur kaha ki unke fashion show mein top model ho sakti hon agar aaj raat tak mein apni profile na doo toh'.!"Geet said shockingly pulling Sam's palm from her mouth,"Di'.aapki shaadi hai abhi panditji aapko madap mein bulaayenge saare rasme ke liye aur aap is waqt iske baare mein soch rahi hai shaadi ke baad dekha jaayega filhaal abhi ke liye aap yeh shaadi ka jpoda pehniye'.!"Sameera said bossily,"Mujhe mat sikha mujhe kya karna hai kya nahin'filhaal abhi tum meri baat sun..tum meri kapde pehenkar mandap mein baith jaa tab tak mein Manish Malhothra ko meet karke aajaavongi'.yeh toh mera achcha mauka hai unki dil jeet neka'.!Aur haan agar shaadi hojaaye toh bhi tum uski patni nahin ho meine sab sochke rakha hai'.!"Sameera gave a red file and said,"Ispe tum sign kardo'.uske baad tum sirf us time ke liye Maan ki patni ho jab tak mein nahin aajaati uske baad tumhe mere haatho Maan saupkar tumhe chale jaana hoga'..!"














Geet was shocked and opposed,"Nahin mein ispe sign nahin karoongi'.di please aap meri jasbaathon ko samjhiye'.agar is time mein aapki jagah baith gayi toh dharam se mein unki patni ho jaavoongi'please di aap kyun aisa kar rahi hai aap Maan se shaadi kar leejiye phir Maan ke influence se Manish Malhothra toh kya Amitabh Bachchan ji bhi aajaayenge aapko support karne ke liye..please di'!"But Sameera was no way listening to her and shouted,"Tum apni behen ki baat nahin sunaa chaahthi'.toh theek hai'!"Sameera went inside the washroom and came back with kerosene can and poured herself and try to lit herself.Geet was shocked seeing Sameera like that and told,"Di..yeh aap kya kar rahi hai'please usse chodiye'.!"Sameera try to strike the match box and told pouring crocodile tears,"Agar mere khwaab pure nahin huve toh mujhe zinda rehne ka kya matlab'.!"Geet was shocked and said,"Nahin di yeh bewakoofi mat keejiye..please di'!"Geet pleaded Sameera but she dint budge so she have to sign on the papers and wore Sam's wedding attire and went to mandap when she was called.But Geet was so hurted with the incidents and tears never stopped.Geet had killed her inner soul and had married him.

FLASHBACK ENDS'''''>











Geet tried to suppress her feelings but it was becoming difficult these days to control.Geet's inner desires and her soul were getting alive seeing Maan's closed proximity and she was drowning herself in the passion.Geet's tears were pouring so much that she dint had the time to wipe it for herself.On that time she heard the stirring of Maan.Geet saw Maan moving feeling lack of her warmth and once again she cried silently and immediately hid the file inside the drawer and got up with difficulty as she was so devastated and the love making passion making her so weak.Maan turned towards his right side and saw Geet standing up holding the drawer and was thoughtful,"Ye wahan kya kar rahi thi'.?"But he was shocked when he saw her half closed curves and her milky white skin.Maan stared her hungrily he was so aroused seeing her beauty''he pulled his tracks getting up and walked towards Geet in half bare.Geet tried to avoid him but couldnt as he was looking more adorable and hot.Geet couldnt control her inner desires and tears poured down from her almond eyes.










Maan was shocked seeing Geet's state and was abt to keep his palm on her soft shoulder when she immediately moved out of his reach.Maan was shocked seeing her changed beahviour as he remembered how she give in yesterday to his passion and he saw some spark in her hazel almond eyes which made him drown himself inside her passionate eyes.Maan asked,"What happened?"Geet dint answer him and she moved towards the washroom.Maan saw her struggle and asked,"Geet'kal raat humaare beech jo kuch bhi huva usme teri marzi nahin thi kya?"Geet frozen to the spot not able to answer his question and she tried strongly to control her feelings and she walked with difficulty towards the washroom.Maan asked her once again,"Geet'.tum mujhe pasand nahin karti kya?"












Geet couldnt answer any of his questions and walking with enormous difficulty and her leg slipped due to the pain between her thighs and fell downwards but not anymore as she was captured by two muscular hands and her heart throbbed rapidly feeling his skin against her.Maan captivated Geet inside his arms while Geet suppressed her pain and said,"Aapke aur mere beech mein kal raat kuch bhi nahin huva tha'.!"Maan said immediately lifting her soft chin roughly,"Jhoot mat bolo Geet'mujhe sab kuch yaad hai'bhale hi mein neshe ki haalat mein tha fir bhi'.mujhe sab kuch yaad hai jo kuch bhi kal raat humaare beech mein huva'sab kuch'.!"Geet stared at Maan while Maan left her and held her kunckles and said,"Geet'..kya hum humaare zindagi nayi tareeke se shuru nahin kar sakte'.!!!"Geet's eyes welled up and tears poured down from her almond eyes and was abt to say yes when her vision fell upon the table drawer''.her eyes popped open with shock seeing the drawer.







Geet helplessly nodded no to him as Maan was shocked and dipped his head with guilt and remembered Veer's words''

Veer said to Maan immediately,"Samay sabko badal deta hai Maan..ab woh is rishtey se khush nahin hai toh usse us rishte se azaadi lene ka poora haq hai aur kaanoon bhi iski madat karegi'.!!!!"







Maan thought still holding Geet inside his embrace,"Kya Geet mere saath khush nahin hai'Sameera ne toh usse zabardasti mandap mein bithaaya tha'toh fir woh sab kuch humaare beech mein huva humaare pehli raat ko..woh bhi toh zabardasti tha'.aur kal raat ko bhi mein nashe ki haalat mein woh sab kuch kar baitha'lekin us waqt meine toh uske saath ek nayi zindagi shuru karna chaatha tha'shaayad yeh sab kuch Geet ko manzoor nahin tha..lekin Geet ne bhi kal raat mujhe mana nahin kiya'.kyun yeh ladki paheli banti jaa rahi hai'.kya yeh sach mein mujhse pyaar nahin karti ya fir jhoot bol rahi hai''!"On that time Geet was struggling herself to suppress her feelings and was trying to free herself from his grip when he saw her almond eyes then he immediately understood that she was feeling helpless and have to give her time to adjust with him.Maan left her immediately while Geet was shocked and saw him questioning'.Maan exactly understood seeing the longing in her eyes..and the turmoil when he left her abruptly made her to see his chocolate brown eyes.











Maan left for washroom leaving baffled Geet.Geet who was supressing her feelings stood there totally baffled.But after sometime she felt her ground has been slipped when she came to present world and saw Maan lifting her and heading towards the washroom.Geet was shocked and saw what he's gonna do further as her heart anticipated fast and many naughty thoughts came to her mind which made her so restless.But Maan made her to enter the tub filled warm water taking off her blanket and said,"Geet..mujhe apne feelings ko express karna nahin aata aur mein yeh bhi nahin kahoonga ki tum meri patni ho aur tumhe choone ka haq hai'agar tum is rishte se khush nahin ho toh tumhe mujhse door jaane ka utna hi haq hai jitna mein aaj kal tha'.mein is rishte ko ek mauka dena chaatha tha toh meine tumhe apna kal raat ko banaaya'meri sirf ek galati thi ki mujhe tumse poochna chaahiye tha ki kya tum khush ho ya nahin is rishte se'..Geet mein koi dabaav nahin daalna chaahta tere upar'..isiliye sochkar mujhe jawaab dena kal..agar tum is rishte se khush nahin ho toh kal hi mein lawyer ko bulaadoonga aur hu dono ki divorce ho jaayegi'..socho Geet'.tumhaare har faisle par mein tumhaare saath hoon'.!"








Precap-Maan moved his sleek fingers on Geet's bare waist and started making patterns while Geet moaned his name which drove him insane.Maan immediately hovered on her and was about to take her petal like lips when someone clapped sarcastically'..Maaneet looked up to see who is it when they both got the shock of their life.There stood Sameera spitting fire on Geet and clapping sarcastically''.

How was the precap am sure u guys are gonna throw jooti and chappal at me but some facts have to be revealed please leave the feedback and please give long comments and likes'..

Target is 150+ likes..and 15 pages of comments'..so get on with the work girls'.or else no update till then'..




Previous Part 09-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3160342/venomous-desire-thread-01




Next Part 11-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3160342/venomous-desire-thread-01
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely painful update kutty.. te way geet saw sam's photo in my maan's wallet and sam ki paper, oh god, wen a girl is orphan every one are playing with her emotions, but i know my maan wont leave his geet..te way my maan said tat he want to give they relation a chance and geet is denying making her heart as stone was so painful... now wat will be geet ki answer.. i love te update kutty.. precap remembers me a telugu movie...
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Posted: 12 years ago

nice one

but sameera too much and geet again sacrifising
hope maneet realise their love and live with and for each pther
Edited by tabbymittal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeh sameera she is a b**** yaar

hw cheap she is

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