VENOMOUS DESIRE-THREAD 01 - Page 28

interesting teaser...

loved it...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Nice teaser
Waiting for update

awesome teaser

oyeee yeh kya teasing teaser diya hai...dekho ache bache aisa nahi karte...chalo jaldi se update do😳

Hey darling, i just came to give my 'not so amazing' comment. Reading aur 'like'ing toh mein bahut phele kar chuki hu. Me also known for my besharam nature apart from my dhamkis. As right now, i am on my phone's web browser isliye buddy rqst tujhe send karni hogi. I am not at all good in expressing my feeling through words isliye you can find this as well future comments to be not satisfied. And a piece of advice, *starting mey hi bol dala Sara* do use MicroSoft Word and Mozilla Firefox for the spells.

One thing nagging in my mind right from starting, i love this hawt and wild Maan Singh Khurana. What, i told you na that i am besharam. I am being genuine to you just like i am with my gang of writers. The desire is still on. I know that he was rude and angry but it was the circumstances and well, it was past *as the prologue says*. Moreover, he is known for his short temper and he did felt guilty *not to forget that he asked sorry*. Geet, the pure angel and epitome of beauty. Glad to see my teddybear 'dadima' ever ready for help. The so-called family of her was total jerk, galti khud ki aur saza meri Geet ko. His desire mixed with anger, take a toll on him but easy there my untamed animal. What could have happened that she tried to sucide over his harsh words? Maan ka past was also so painful. In 2 kaminiyo ne toh kuch nahi kiya tha na? Of course, i am talking about sam and shasha. Aur yeh armaan is making my beast out of control. Teaser was like *thud*. Overall, it is still smoking here. Other than THEM, Sara choose to ignore.

Do cont soon and do PM me.

will update tomorrow guys

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

o meri treaser queen maan ja chhodo bhi ye alas pana jara update deke bata😭 me crying until u updated

i know teri frnd list me sabse kam value mera hai lekin itni si req maan le plsss i beg u

yaar aise Q soch rahi hai..paagal...derahi hoon baba...