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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys i am back with part 25
thanks all for your support



PART 25

This update is for my sweet friends….

The valentine day idea is given by one of my friend DHRUV ….

And thank you SNEH AND HEENA for pics…..

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MAAN AND ARJUN

Chhaaya hai jo dil pe kya nasha hai
Aisa lag raha hai pyaar ho raha hai

AROHI AND GEET


Hm, beqaraari mein bhi kitna maza hai
Aisa lag raha hai pyaar ho raha hai
Aisa lag raha hai, aisa lag raha hai
Aisa lag raha hai pyaar ho raha ha

At last they didn't change there partners it was mutual… the song and the beautiful and sensous dance had lead all to a dreamland of the fantasy..where two princess were dancing with there prince charming……the dance ended with maan having geet close in his embrace she could clearly clearly in his chocolate brown eyes which were having a different expression of contentment in his eyes….his heart knows that the feeling he is encountering the moment he holded her hand was something that he could relate….. but not able to recognize…..

Arjun was still looking at arohi and she too was still in the feel of the song his words…and her feelings…..she has fallen for this guy at whom she shouted who called her WIFY… at their first meet…. She had heard him clearly when he was following her quickly and in a haste called her wify…she was in a very bad mood that day but now it feels like he is the one who could make her feel this way..

His proximity …. His actions and gestures peak more than his words…. His one smile is enough for her to make her day blesses with happiness….

The hall was filled all kinds of applause …including a wide hooting……

This time the audience literally enjoyed the dance and the feel of the song…… but as there are always some people who are just meant to get jealous…..

Tanvi and her group was amongst them…..

Tanvi was shooting daggers on geet for dancing with maan …till now she was the only girl who managed to dance with the angry young maan….but now geet was in his arms like owning him…..that jealousy made her look an angry and old witch who is always ready for her revenge…..and here her so called friends her company is also responsible for her rude behaviour …her spoilt image and making her work at their wishes…she acts in anger and makes herself responsible for all the things that occur in her life…..

The host of the night shweta brought them all from their fantasy land…..

Shweta: so what say guys that was a perfect romantic dance for the valentine's night….and congrats to you that you fulfilled the condition very well…… a perfect blend of dance with perfection and rhythm……

Maan left geet in order not to make her feel awkward….

Now he know her name…but didn't asked her anything…how can he ask her …. She was looking very shy ….but when he heard her giggled looking at arjun…he didn't know but why he didn't like her communication with arjun….. he knew that he shouldn't have felt that but ignored the feel….

Not to mention the other girl who danced with his bhai was also no less….infact she was like more apt and suitable for him…..

( hehe maan clear your way….arohi is only arjun's….)

The girls came..arohi was still looking at arjun from the corner of her eyes….and arjun he was blushing… looking at his lady love openly drooling on him…..

Parul , dhruv … cheered them……

Parul: ohh look at the lover boys…. Guys you rocked the dance floor warna uss tanvi ne toh maza kharab hi kar diya tha…..

Dhruv: hey arjun do tell me which one is your partner from those two ….. jiske tum mentor the…..

Arjun looked at dhruv with angry red eyes like what are you trying to say ..both the girls are most important in my life…..

Arjun: tujhe kya karna… hai….

Dhruv looking at his arngry side left the idea of asking him…..

Dhruv: are nothing yaar……waise are their any proposals tonight afterall valentine night and no propose…..

Maan: don't know yaar…. Kyun tu nahi kar raha kisis ko…we all want to meet your beloved jo tujhe sudhare….

Parul laughed when a voice caught their attention……

It was a girl from engineering last year ….she told her feelings to the boy of her class actually her best friend….

The teachers and students were looking and cheering the girl….

Girl: zindagi ki rahon me

Is dil ki panahon me

Chaha hai sirf tujhko

Aaj bayaan ki hai dil ki baat

Chaho toh apna lena warna khwab samaj ke bhul jaana…..

The girl used shayarana andaaz…..

The boy gladly accepted while answering her the same…..

While tanvi was just continuously looking in the direction where geet and her group were standing…..

Tanvi: how dare that girl to dance with maan …that too do baar….. and maan he seems

to be too reserved

A guy standing near her …her so called group having all the selfish friends answered….

Anchit: dekha tanvi he ignores you and dances with that girl….. that too twice…. Sabak sikha do uss ladki ko …dekho kaise has rahi hai….

The others supported her

Tanvi: what's her name…..

Someone said "GEET HANDA"

Tanvi straightly went from there…..

After some time as per arjun has planned…. The lights of the hall were dimmed ..arohi was standing somewhere in a corder beautifully decorated with orchids and balloons…..she was holding a bunch of red roses beautifully grouped like someone specially did for her…..



She was lost in the fragrance of the flowers…when someone started…..

Arjun: "pyaar..ek aisa shabd…jiska matlab main kabhi nahi samaj pata ….ek aisa anchuha ehsaas jiska ehsaas duniya ki har khusi de deta hai….uski ek hasi ek chuhan..choti choti baton par gussa karna…..mere upar haq jatana….. sab acha lagta hai…..

Wo hare k lamha….wo hare k pal uski yaad dilate hai …jo humne saath bitaya hai…..

Uska aana jindagi ko pura kar deta hai….

Pyaar me usne mujhe badal diya….

Meri zindagi me ek khwab bangai hai wo…. Kya wo mera saath degi iss khwab ko pura karna me…..

The lights were bright ….

All were looking at arjun bending on his knees raising his hand towards her and looking at her with love filled eyes…..

Some were looking at them with a beautiful bright smile …and maan was looking with a shock….. his bhai is proposing a girl…. And he didn''t knew…..

Arohi was equally in her same shock..arjun was asking her to be his…. Arjun's face was filled with tension what if she says NO….his face was pleading to her like saying NOT TO SHOUT AT ME……

Arohi who had also acknowledged her feelings…..

Gave him a wide smaile and gave him her hand…he sweetly slipped the ring…now this was something new no one ever proposed like that…..

Arjun: will you marry me arohi…..

Arohi looked at arjun with love filled eyes and said "YES " mutely…..

This was the perfect event of the night…..

Geet came and hugged both and even maan hugged arjun…..

All the teachers and students congratulated them…..

Arjun introduced her to maan….

Arjun: arohi , he is my brother maan…..

Arohi: hii maan nice to meet you….

Maan also found arohi nice…he couldn't believe that he danced with his future sister in law….

They left the love couple alone…..

Tanvi asked the host and started her plan….

Tanvi: hey…congrats arjun… she gave a dirty smile…making them feel disgust….

Well why don't we celebrate our farewell now……this is our last time…. So I thought to complete this competition which was started with my performance….

Here is a bowl containing names of all the girls except the seniors…. A name will be selected and lets watch a mirchi and hot performance by our juniors and let our batch mates join the girl…..

All were looking at tanvi like what she I splanning…shweta picked up the name and tanvi asked her to bring to the girl in dressing room….the bowl only contained of geet's name…

Tanvi was waiting for them..geet came with arohi and her group….

Tanvi: so you are selected geet I hope you will dance for us ….. she gave a cheezy smile and left ….

Shweta gave her the dress and song….. it was Chamma chamma…geet was looking at the dress…when gaurav spoke….

Gaurav: I am going to to meet the principal …how can geet dance on this song…the song is kind of bold…and we all know geet….

Divya and disha supported him..when arjun came…and he came to know about dance he too was furious how can he let his sister dance on such item song….when arohi took all of them out of the room……

Arjun didn't looked at srohi but he sent dhruv knowing who were the guys whow were about to dance with geet…. atleast dhruv will be able to shove them off her….

There was a complete silence………

The beat started …. a girl came with her back towards all…

all the lights were focused on her….she took a sensous yet naughty move with the beat…..

she was moving her ankelets as it was in the beat….t

The song started …


(here is the song link guys do read and enjoy listening with this


https://youtu.be/uR_ESYb1ypE

)

Dekha Dekhi Dil Mera Jud Gaya Re

Leke Pardesi Dil Ud Gaya Re

Dekha Dekhi Dil Mera Jud Gaya Re

Leke Pardesi Dil Ud Gaya Re

Her face was half covered with veil… a peach and brown colour outfit which was complementing her milky white skin….. she was adorned with accessories….. a nose ring …. Broad ankets … bangles ..maang teeka….

She turned her face making her dupatta fall on the fall…. …

and the lyrics started….

Chhamma Chhamma Re Chhamma Chhamma



Her face which was covered was now exposed to all….

Arohi looked at arjun and said…..




hows the shock MR ARJUN SINGH KHURANA…..geet was extremely grateful in her every move there was not a single step she was not doing with the charm of the song….

Chhamma Chhamma Baaje Re Meri Paejaniyaan

Tere Paas Aaun Teri Saanson Mein Samaun Raja

Unknowingly she came making her move towards maan's direction and did the actions….and quickly moved when she saw group of boys coming wearing a kurta and jeans with a scarf round their necks…..

Teri Neenden Uda Doon

Chhamma Chhamma...

she made her move half twirling … making the cham cham sound with her anklets….

All were looking at her in awe except one who was seething in rage and fury ….tanvi's plan was seeming like back fired …geet was collecting all type of compliments from the students and teachers…..

Chhamma Chhamma...

Chhamma Chhamma...

She smiled seeing them and they surrounded her…still danced making her moves like teasing them….. it was full too fun for all….

Not disgusting at all fun filled …..

Yeh Mera Lehenga, Bada Hai Mehenga

Ise Na Haath Laga

She was walking and guys were following her one of them tried to touch her when she shoved his hand and gave him a glare…. Making arjun smile….

Dila Doon Bangla, Dila Doon Gaadi

Deewani Paas To Aa

One by one the guys came…the first one came …then second then third as per the lyrics….

Meri Baali Hai Umar Mujhe Lagta Hai Dar

Na Kar Beimaani

Chhamma Chhamma...

But she made a move like ignored all and danced in rythm…

Now they were following her and she was dancing in between making the perfect moves with her payal…..

Hila Doon U P, Hila Doon M P

Jo Maarun Maein Thumka

She said in attitude like addressing that they are nothing in front of her…

She didn't danced as a mature girl but as a fifteen year old teenager who follows her mum's instructions at each step…..

Tere Thumke Pe, Haarun Bhai Patna

Maein Haarun Calcutta



When dhruv saw the other four guys coming around her …he came around her and danced with her winking at her…she knows his intentions that were obviously to save them as the guys were literally ready to pounce over her….

Finally he bowed down in front of her when the lyrics were haarun Calcutta making geet giggle……

Meri Patli Kamar Meri Tirchhi Nazar

Meri Chadhti Jawaani

Chhamma Chhamma..



Maan was looking at her wide wide eyes…he couldn't believe that the girl who was scared and always raise her voice out of fear was dancing on the sensous number…but her naughty geastures and her eye expressions were making him smile… the girl is indeed a mystry….. but he didn't know that he will be the one who will solve this mystry……



Dekha Dekhi Dil Mera Jud Gaya Re

Leke Pardesi Dil Ud Gaya Re

Chhamma Chhamma Re Chhamma Chhamma

The song ended with the dance when geet left the stage making all the guys fall down….and it was like they were imagining her all the time……

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
first of all di
thank u so much for adding my name
n me first yiiipppieee
well its all coz of u
cming back to the update
it was amazing as usual
maan n arjun lost in their partners
arohi knew that arjun clled her wify 😉
god tanvi n her group can never change
arjun blushes also 😃
but in a second he turned from blushy boy to angry young man
dhruv bechara bach gaya warna aaj arjun usse hospital pahuncha deta 😆
waah waah di kya shayari thi
god anchit was so stupid
arjun's propsing andaaz was the highlight of the update
the way he proposed was just wow
i was gaping at how wonderfully he did that
maan shocked as arjun dint even tell him
n sidha proposing pe aagaya
yes maan babu u danced with ur future sister in law
n well ur future wife also but u dnt know that yet
tanvi ka plan toh backfire hogaya
geet dance was amazing
i thought she was the shy reserve type
but geet toh tikhi mirchi nikli
aur sabki bolti hi band kardi humari geet ne toh
luved the update di
it had everything fun romance jokes everything
a blender of all
update soon di
waiting eagerly
luvvv yaaa


Edited by maanluver - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow this is too good arjun proposed arohi and she accepted it and moreover geet on item song...
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Posted: 12 years ago
not only did they dance togehter
arjun has finally proposed to arohi good
but he was so afriad naa that she might say no or hit him perhaps but she said yes woohoo
and then the chamma chamma song by our very own geet
hello was that sensous or what
even we are shocked maan that she danced like that
in your face tanvi
stupid girl what does she think of herself
cheers for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
As always great update dear.Your work is turning to be more and more interesting. Loving much.Update next part soon dear


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Posted: 12 years ago
wow
it was awesome
too good
superb yaar
lvd it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow di what an update just loved geet 😳👏⭐️
👏

she did amazing wrk poor maan babu cant even take off his eyes😆


loved arjun arohi part 😃😛


arjun was just to good😉


akhir maan babu ko pta chal hi gya that he was dancing with his future bhabhi 😳


kash usa yeh bhi pta hota that he is dancing with his future biwi🤣


loved arjun expressions when he saw geet dancing ⭐️👏😃
😃👏

awww dhruv was such a cutie pie😊


tanvi never try that again😡




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Posted: 12 years ago
part 25
awesome part...
cont soon dear...
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Oh god,...
it was such an awesome update dear,...
very nice,...
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