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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys i am back with part 24
thanks all for your support



PART 24


Daadima was pleased seeing arohi and even geet….somewhere seeing geet made her to buy two rings….may be one day maan will ask her to accompany her to buy her for her second granddaughter in law…..

The bond that she saw between geet and arohi made her feel light…arohi is the girl who will not let her down she will be a girl who can be a wife and a daughter in law of khurana's in true sense…..

May be it needs time for her …after all she is still a girl studing and is living her life in her parents protection…..

The innocence and childlike attitude in geet made her special in daadi's eyes….the way arohi reacted when she said PIZZA….. they had lied to buy the gifts for for their parents anniversary….. geet's face …a sweet baby like appearance when she said Diii…..

Somewhere for maan daadi has selected geet…knowing maan's reserved attitude and geet's nave nature but nothing Is in her hands ….she doesn't even know whether both are familiar with each other or not …..and she was glad that arjun's sister for whom her grandson cares is non other than geet…..

Whereas on the other side both the girls reached home they were having gift packs and dresses and accessories that geet buyied for both of them…. They had ordered a special cake for the night and planned the surprise along with their veerji….

Arjun was on the cloud nine after his daadi's approval for arohi …..but somewhere geets tears made him gloomy…. He didn't even in his thoughts can think that geet is an orphan… and she is arohi's sister…..

It was the day of the farewell and valentines day…..

Maan and arjun were going to step up in their life …. One phase a beautiful and cheerful phase of there life has ended ……somethings have changed ….time has made them realize the importance of things ….they came across many situations and even if they failed they learnt to move on….

It was Saturday….. both the boys were in jim….doing there regular exercise ….. maan was fulley into his tai chi ..while arjun was sweating out of fear if arohi rejects him…..

Maan saw tension lines on arjun's face….

Maan: bhai are you fine….he asked sensing some tension in his brother's attitude…..

Arjun who was busy in his self introspection ….. didn't hear him….

Now maan was sure that something is going on his his bhai's life and he is hiding it from him…. From there childhood they haven't had any secrets between them….

Maan was now getting frustrated seeing arjun's constant changing expressions….

He looked around and found a bottle …having cold water ..it was chilled as he kept for himself…. Without even wasting a second he emptied the bottle on arjun…. Poor arjun he was made to come out of his arohi's dreamland …… he was first flabbergast ….but on seeing maan smirking he yelled at him…..it was early morning five….

Maan ran for his life …knowing his bhai won't leave him….both were in there tracks running…..

Arjun: MAAN…..stop right there ….i will not leave you…..

Maan: bhai what I have done…..MOM!!!!! he shouted looking for his mother …. He wanted to tell his mother about his brother getting lost and having somefun…..

Maan was runninng they were in the garden….

Finally arjun was panting …. Maan looked at him with his amused and naughty eyes…full of mischive…..

Maan: kya hua bhai…. Where are you lost now…… mujhe toh laga….. you will be wide awake …..

When maan shouted …all the family members including servents …looked at see what is going on…. Naina who literally ran to see what both of them are doing right now…. And shouting…..

Naina was shocked seeing arjun drenched and fuming at maan….

Arjun: mom..aapke ladle bte ne mujhe bhiga diya…. I am not going to spare him…. He was about to run….when naina shouted….

Naina: bacho ki tarah ladh rahe ho dono…..chup karo….. kaun kahega yeh college khatam kar chuke hai…

They both look at puppy face at their mom…. Maan came behind her and hugged from behind winking at arjun…..

Maan: mom…you know aaj valentines day hai….so I am thinking to plan a date….. so will you be my valentine….he asked comng infront of her…..

Before his mom could answer …arjun saw their dad coming….

Arjun:mom agar aap maan ki valentine ban gayi toh dad kya hoga…..maan plan a date for mom and dad…. Come I will find a valentine for you….

Before there parents could catch a hold of them both went away……

Naina: ( to raj) dekha aapne…. Kaisi baatein kar rahe the dono…

While raj was also in a romantic mood listensing to his sons….

Raj taking his wife in his arms……

Raj: sahi toh ahi naina….aaj valentine day hai…. So why not to plan a date….

Naina slightly blushed at her husband…..

Later in the evening

The college auditorium was beautifully decated with red and white ballons…white orchids…. After all it's a double celebration…. DJ was set…..students were coming dressed elegantly…. Acoording to the theme that was RED WHITE AND BLACK

Arohi and geet entered wearing beautiful designer suits…. Geet in red and white and arohi in black and white combination….. they were looking absolute beauties …. .. students were coming from all years ….teachers were invited as it was farewell as well….maan came in black tuxedo and arjun in white and black combination….

The party started with the titles… the seniors were given titles …..first title was MR.

PERFECT AND MISS PERFECT…

It was to guess….the juniors were calculating who will get the title ….

Geet: aru who do you will get the title…. She was looking at the seniors she knew including arjun….

Arohi: mujhe kya pata … I don't know any…. But lets it not be tanvi….

Divya: I think its MAAN…

Arohi: maan… there was a question mark on her face

Gaurav: don't make such faces arohi , he is Mr PERFECTIONIST….. he does all the things with perfection…. Ohho arohi don't make afces….you know the guy who danced with geet in the play ….

Now arohi's bulb flashed some light……

The title goes to maan and sneha …. Sneha was a girl from engineering department…..

Next was MR AND MISS SOFT SPOKEN….

This was given to ARJUN and TANVI……

The juniors cracked up listening to tanvi…..even some of the teachers but what si odne is done know….

The night was in full swing ….. there comes the group of students who were responsible for the valentine day along with farewell they have planned something that will make the last day to be imprinted in the memory of students….

For this they have specially taken the permission from the college director and principal…. And explained what they are going to do….since it is an institution where the child will group up according to the society so they have given the permission giving a warning for no ill mannered event …..

A guy who was the head of the management came…..

He greeted the students and techers

Maan arjun were stnding with there group… arjun's eyes were on arohi ….and his hand in his pocket…. He had taken the ring from daadi last night …..

Guy ( krish): so as we all know that we are celebrating valentine's day here ….. so now let's see what we have to entertain you all.…..

Shweta is krish's partner in hosting…..

Shweta: so krish….this is the day of our seniors….we will not be able to see them here daily …. So why not we see what's our seniors possess….

Krish: you are right sweta…. Okk… so let us call MISS TANVI MADAAN …. Here welcome her with the group of young freshers…..

Shweta: so lets see whether the seniors or freshers will show there talent or our seniors….

Tanvi was given a dress ….. it was a short but not revealing dress tanvi made her self look for the dance she is going to perform…..

The songs that were planned were choosen in strict in accordance with college atmosphere ….slight fun is not a harm but it will be in a certain check…..

Tanvi came in the dress ….. she was looking terrible ….she would have shine if used some less make up……

The song started…..

Ahhaa…
Oho o
Oho o
Oho o
Oho o
Oho o
Oho o
Oho o
Oho o

Tanvi started dancing …she was swinging giving the looks which she knew were according to the songs…..

Sss..
Chutki joh
Tune kati hai
Jori se kati hai
Yahan wahan..

Ruthi hoon
Main tujhse ruthi hoon
Mujhe mana le na
O jane jaan

She was dancing round the boys….. like seducing them…..

Chedenge..
Hum tujhko
Ladki tu hai
Badi bombaard
Aha aha aha aha

Ooh la la…
Ooh la la…
Ooh la la…
Ooh la la…
Tu hai meri fantasy..

The song changed to the boys …. They were dancing with tanvi….in the centre…. The boys were doing a decent job… compared to her….

Choo na na
Choo na na
Choo na na
Choo na na
Ab main jawan ho gayi..

The teachers and students were looking some were looking disgusted and some boys were eyeing lustfully……

Arey arey arey
Ooh la la…
Ooh la la…
Tu hai meri fantasy..

Han choo na na
Choo na na
Ab main jawan ho gayi…

Ahhaa…
Ahhaa…
Ahhaa…
Ahhaa…

The song was kind of bold that the students selected but they knew somewhere that the dancers will do justice to it…..

Haa..
Chuaa joh
Tune toh
Dil ne maari seeti

She was dancing with one of the boys ….and quickly changing the other…..

De de in gaalon pe
Ek pappi
Meethi meethi

Ho chuaa joh
Tune toh
Dil ne maari seeti

De de de de in galon pe
Ek pappi
Meethi meethi

One of the fresher winked at her giving her a light kiss on her cheek…. Arjun and dhruv laughed looking at tanvi…..

Yauwan tera
Sawan bhara
Bheeg gaya
Dil yeh mera..

Aaha tune hi
Barsaat karayi
Kya kare
Yeh yauwan
Bechara bechara bechara

Ooh la la…
Ooh la la…
Tu hai meri fantasy..
Hey hey

Na na na na
Choo na na
Choo na na
Ab main jawan ho gayi..

The song ended ….. the students had to give her appreciation even if was looking pathetic…

Shweta murmered in krish ear…..

Shweta: mam will kill us for using this song…and selecting her….. now do something ….

Krish: don't worry lets make it romantic…..

Krish: so here the senior and freshers were equal what say guys…..

The croud almost hooted….

Shweta: okk so now lets make it slightly romantic….after all its valentines day…..

Krish: yup shweta…. So let me tell you about this small competition….betwen the final years and rest of the students…means there juniors….

Shweta: there will be a spot light on four students…. Two from final year and two juniors …. This is a couple dance…. And that to on the romantic theme…..

Krish: let's have spot light…..

The light fall on maan , geet , arjun , arohi four were standing in extreme corners…..

Shweta: so here are the four competitors…..here Is the rule…. You have to dance with your partners but as soon as the singer will change the partner will change…. I hope you understand….

Let's have the music…..

The soft romantic music started….

Arjun saw arohi under spot light and moved towards her…..

While geet was standing when maan came and forwarded his hand towards her ….. he gently lead her to the dance floor … from one side and arjun with arohi on the other….

Geet was looking at him… a calm face…with so much composure….

Geet holded him from shoulders and

MAAN:

Chhaaya hai jo dil pe kya nasha hai
Aisa lag raha hai pyaar ho raha hai

From the other side arjun started dancing with arohi…..

ARJUN:

Ho, chhaaya hai jo dil pe kya nasha hai
Aisa lag raha hai pyaar ho raha hai



the singer changed maan quickly twirled geet …and arjun extended his hand and gave arohi to maan and arjun twirled geet …..

Arohi was smiling…. And maan in return smiled to her..

AROHI:

Beqaraari mein bhi kitna maza hai
Aisa lag raha hai pyaar ho raha hai


Again the partners changed …maan had geet in his embrace they were dancing ….


MAAN:

Apni palkon mein mujhko chhupaaya hai
Ek chehre ne mera chain churaaya hai


arohi came back to maan….

They were enjoying this

AROHI:

Har taraf shokh mausam ka saaya hai
In hawaaon ne mera aanchal udaaya hai


geet came to maan they were now dancing lost in each other's eyes….maan was looking at her angelic face…glowing…. So beautiful he whispered….

Again ….maan left her…. Arjun and geet were now dancing with matching steps …

ARJUN:

Dil mein jo chhupi hai ek dilruba hai
Aisa lag raha hai pyaar ho raha hai
Beqaraari mein bhi kitna maza hai
Aisa lag raha hai pyaar ho raha hai


arjun's lines made geet giggle…. Arohi saw both of them…she murmerred…"ye geet bhi na…."

Maan looked at arohi….

Maan: you dance really well……

Maan: turn….

When arohi turn arjun pulled her towards him….and maan held his hand for geet

AROHI:

Main to deewaani teri hone lagi
Ajnabi khayaalon mein khone lagi

Arohi when singed the lines she was looking at arjun….making arjun slightly blush but he didn't let it appear on his face…..

MAAN:


Kuch khabar hui na mujhko teri kasam
Kab aur kahan yeh chaahat hui sanam


Now geet was with arjun…when maan sang remembering those beautiful eyes…. And he was looking at geet from corner of his eyes….

GEET:

Dard hai chubhan hai haya hai
Aisa lag raha hai pyaar ho raha hai


Geet again came in her maan's arms…maan gently twirted her…and make her sway in the music…. The lines geet sing were deep affecting maan…. It was the perfect dance… the couples were dancing with perfection…

Maan gently dipped her and lifted her in her arms….

Some girls were jealous of arohi and geet dancing with the hotties of the college…

MAAN AND ARJUN

Chhaaya hai jo dil pe kya nasha hai
Aisa lag raha hai pyaar ho raha hai


AROHI AND GEET


Hm, beqaraari mein bhi kitna maza hai
Aisa lag raha hai pyaar ho raha hai
Aisa lag raha hai, aisa lag raha hai
Aisa lag raha hai pyaar ho raha ha

At last they didn't change there partners it was mutual… the song and the beautiful and sensous dance had lead all to a dreamland of the fantasy..where two princess were dancing with there prince charming……

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NEXT : the night continues

Chhamma Chhamma Re Chhamma Chhamma

Chhamma Chhamma Baaje Re Meri Paejaniyaan

Tere Paas Aaun Teri Saanson Mein Samaun Raja

Teri Neenden Uda Doon

Chhamma Chhamma...

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yuppiieee ...🥳

me first ..

hayeee

me still in my dreamland ..

kya song selection hai ..
n what dance ..☺️
i must say ..the pic added was an extra effect to this one ..n much needed one ..⭐️

i just loved the song ..⭐️
n the lyrics went too well ..



hayee ankhon hi ankon mien yeh kya hugaya ..😉😆
dil jo humara tha abb tumhara hugaya ...😳

hmm arjun arohi ko propose karne wala hai ..😳
aur yahan maan sahab abb bhi arabian girl ko nahi pehchaan rahe ...

kya huga ...
waise u said it right with the 1st song ..
the dancer could defo do justice with the song ..😛

but u see no one can ever match Maaneet ...n here i am loving Arjohi equally ...😃

that was a magically beautiful one ..👏

plzzz do update next soon ..
me waiting ..

Luv Ya
Sobia ..😊



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Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome. ab to Maan aur Geet ko i ntroduce kara do kab tak aankhen dekh kar kaam chalaayenge?
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
yeh kya ho gaya maan apni arabian girl ko hi nahi pehchaan paaya
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Posted: 12 years ago
oyye hoyye what a way to meet naa
the dance the song all perfect for these two couples
dont worry dadi your grandsons will get the right girls as your grandaughters in law
so he is gonna propose arohi and soon huh cool
and poor arjun maan threw ice cold water on him when he was lost in arohi thoughts bless him
man that was sucha cute update and what a way to end the update our lovely couple dancing with each other cool naa
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the part a lot..
a diff valentines day..perfect!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayee ankhon hi ankon mien yeh kya hugaya ..😉😆
dil jo humara tha abb tumhara hugaya ...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
just awesome...waiting for chamma chamma..ur fav song..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome

nice song of selection

continue soon

bye

take care

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