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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys i am back with part 22
thanks all for your support



PART 22



Arohi made geet kept all the things…..geet was looking all the things again and again…when they went home….and kept them safe in her closet……

Geet somewhere liked all the things and that dupatta it was beautiful….. not too flashy but a modern yet having rich texture and colour…. She somewhere didn't feel throwing them after listening to gaurav that the things were there to propose her but it was certainly the unique gifts she never had in her life ….. she kept the red rose secured in the middle of the diary …. And rest of the roses in her different books…..

Whereas on the other side the group was not in a mood to do anything…. There game was incomplete …. Parul cursed the caller on calling at the most crucial time…. She was cribbing….

Parul: yar ye maan ke liye call abhi hi aana tha can't it be after sometime…. It destroyed our game….

Dhruv: seriously parul you are insane…what do you think maan would have gone to the girl and would have said…. "its all for you…. " he would have killed you…. Thanks karo bhagwan ko tumhe bacha liya from MSK's wrath or you would have been dead…..

Arjun st: maan ka toh pata nahi par agar geet ko pata chal jaata ki ye sab kuch mere bhai ne use diya hai …then she would have killed me…pata nahi kya karti wo….she doesn't appreciate all this…. Thank you geet ke babaji ….maan ko sahi time par bhaejne ke liye…..

Days were going on it was now the most romantic month of February….. but last days for maan and arjun…there last day in college …it was college farewell….. but since it was planned two days after valentines day so the college authorities have decided to celebrate valentines day and farewell on the same day…… 14th feb….

Only five days were left…. Arjun has decided somewhere that he won't be late in expressing himself…he can't let arohi go…. He is in love with her and the same emotion he can see in her eyes too….. few day back he can clearly saw her jealously filled angered eyes when he was talking to parul….well parul has a habit of leaning to other to whom she is talking and arohi saw them…. Arjun was amused seeing her expressions….

Now he will propose her …..and rest is upto her that whether she will except him or not….

Arjun went to daadima's room….well for the first time he is nervous… this matter he can't even disclose to maan…he wants him to be surprised on the day itself …and his mom… no…. he can't even think so first his daadima will be the one who he is going to confront…..

Arjun knocked the room and went in…daadima was sitting reading a book…he was hell nervous and straightly went and sat beside her and hold her hand…..

Arjun: dadima …I need your help…..

Daadima looked at arjun with concern….he was tensed about something……

Daadima: boliye…. Kya baat hai….

Arjun was hesitant to tell her but have to speak up if he needs his daadi on his side…..

Arjun: daadima…… I want to buy a ring….

Daadima: ring…she acted all confused but knew for whom must be arjun wants to buy a ring….arjun nodded and daadima continued….

Daadima: ring….rukiye hum dete hai aapko….aapke liye…

Arjun quickly said…. Before daadi could get up…

Arjun: nahi…daadima..wo mere liye nahi…arohi ke liye…..

Daadima notted her eyebrows said ….arohi…..??? wohi….jinhe aapne mentor kiya tha….

Arjun slightly blushed….

Arjun: I love her ……

Daadi was delighted but was also bother about how the girl would be…. Her nature…and would she be correct for her grandson…..

Daadima: did you said to her…..

Arjun denied… No…..

Daadima: then aap direct propose karenge…. Arjun kaisi ladki hai ….family ..all the things do you know….

Arjun tried to convince daadi….

Arjun: daadima…. Believe me arohi is best for me….

Daadima: theek hai….i want to meet her…

Arjun got a mini heart attack …he haven't told her yet and here his daadi is planning to meet her….

Arjun: daadima…meeting….. I haven't even told her….

Daadima: its ok…I wont tell her anything…just a casual meeting…. Or no ring…. And I am going to tell naina….

Arjun knowing how his mom will react ….first he wanted to know arohi's reaction then will let her meet his mom….

Arjun quickly denied…

Arjun: daadima….no..please mom ko nahi…. I promise tomorrow your meeting with arohi… now can we go…. Please he made a baby face…and how can his daadi deny they went …..


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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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PART 23



Arjun to ease the situation….

Arjun: daadima do you know…arohi is the same girl for which you teased me….

Daadima: hamne aisa kab kiya….

Arjun: daadima us yellow kurti girl ko aap bhul gayi….

Daadi remembered how she and maan literally mocked arjun saying his wify….

Daadima: ohhh…toh ye wohi hai…tab kyon nahi bataya….ab toh inse milna padega….

Arjun: tab kuch hota toh batata na….

Between there talks they reached the mall… they reached the jewellary shop…and start

looking for some rings….. but arjun was being fussy with all…

Arjun: nahi daadi its not good….

It happened a couple of times and daadima was getting frustrated….

Daadima: arjun hum thak gaye hai…. Aapko naina ke saath aana chahiye tha….

Arjun looked at her and when his wyes caught something and daadi heared a girl asking to show something to her….

Girl: nahi ye nahi …kuch acha dikaiye…. She said….while a girl sitting beside her said something in her ear…….

Girl 2: aru ye acha toh hai….

Arohi: geetu chup kar ….. tujhe sab acha laga hai jab se hum yahan aaye hai…… kabhi toh apni choice bata….

Arjun suddenly whispered….arohi….and daadi heard him saying….

Daadi: toh ye arohi hai …chaliye abhi mil lete hai …before arjun could do something

daadi went and arjun behind her following daadi being an obedient pota….

Geet was getting bored sitting like that and then she saw arjun….a smile crept upon her lips… arohi saw geet and looked in her direction….

Both of them stand when they saw arjun with a elderly lady coming towards them…..

Daadi was delighted to see her grandson's choice…. But geet or arohi confused…

Arjun was surprised to see geet also….

Arjun: hi..geet…hiii arohi…

Well arohi didn't knew how geet and arjun knew each other ……..

Both the girls greeted him and he introduced his granny to them…..

They touched her feet….. daadi was not having any second doubt in arjun's choice…..

Arjun asked geet….

Arjun: geet how are you here …do you know arohi…..

Arohi answered….

Arohi: offcourse he knew me arjun….geet is my sister….

Arjun literally chocked lisening to her….

Arjun: OMG they are sisters…. And I like arohi….and geet is my sister…

Geet : bhai …. What happened are you alright…..geet asked arjun seein him lost….

Now daadi and arohi came to know who is arjun to geet….

Arohi whispered in her ear……

Arohi: so he is your college brother…she said naughtily….geet pouted….when her cell

ringed ….. her face went black seeing the caller….

Geet: aru mumma…..

Arohi: baat kar ….. she nudged her…..

Geet picked up the call….

Geet: hello mumma….

Rano : geet …where are you two …. Kab aa rahe ho….

Geet looked at arohi for answer she signled two…..

Geet: mumma do hante lagenge….

Rano: kahan par ho….

Geet suddenly remembered that arohi told at home that they are at divya's place…..

Before she could say…..

Rano: divya aai thi….. tumne toh kaha that um wahan par ho…

Geet: wo..haa mumma hum jaa rahe the par haa…. Aru ko na pizza khana tha issliye hum pizza hut aa gaye….. phir aapne kaha than a kuch dresses ke liye toh hum wo le rahe hai…. Geet finally lied

She looked at arohi who was fuming at her

Arohi: PIZZA…..

Geet hurridly cut the call

Arohi glared at her….

Arohi: PIZZA…geetu…. Tu bhul gayi humne mumma ko kaha tha that we are going at divya's place….

Geet made a baby face and said…

Geet: di…. Very softly …but arohi was looking for answer…

Geet: ha… toh aur kya kehti …divya aai thi…

Arohi: kya…. Toh koi problem toh nahi hui…..

Geet: pata nahi…. Aur jaldi karo sirf do ghante hai….

Daadima and arjun were seeing both …looking adorable…. When geet said dii…daadima asked…

Daadima: arohi bte aap badi hain geet se….

Arohi smiled jii daadima….. par its only 15 days….

Daadi smiled knowing very well …..well maan calls arjun bhai being only 1 min elder …and here geet….

Daadima: kya hua aap dono pareshan lag rahi hai…..

Arohi: haan…wo mumma papa ki anniversary hai aur hame gift lena tha but kuch samaj hi nahi aa raha….and geet she is just sitting ….. geetu kuch toh bol haan ya na….

Geet cutely pouted….

Geet: mujhe samaj nahi aata….. me ja rahi hun dresses lene mumma ko kya dihkaungi warna….. when she was going arjun ….told her that he will accompany her….

Where on the other side daadima nd arohi….

Daadima: aap kya lengi …. Jewellary me…. Chaliye hum aapki madad karte hain

Arohi: ji…wo dadima mumma ke liye hum soft aur delicate pendant type with earings soch rahe hai….

Daadima: ye toh bahut acha hai….

Arjun and geet were going when arjun said….

Arjun: geet…I want to share something with you…..can I ….

Geet looked at arjun

Geet: sure bhai..boliye….

Arjun: I love someone….and wanna say this to her…

Geet looked at him shocked…

Geet: you are in love…. And you didn't tell me….

Arjun: are I didn't tell her too…. Aur mujhe nahi pata tha how will you react ….. do you

think I will not tell you…

Geet: no…aisi baat nahi hai…. Tell her your feelings…..

Arjun: do you think she will accept….

Geet: yup if she has something for you then definitely she will accept ……

Arjun tried to tease geet but didn't knew that it will make the situation worse……

Arjun: sach geet….

Geet nodded and slightly blushed …..it was just out of situation…..

Arjun: ohh….looks like you too have someone….geet you didn't tell me….

Geet got startled… she has tears in he eyes….

Geet: sachi bhai…ma papa ki kasam aisa kuch nahi hai….

Even arjun got confused….of her sudden crying

He wiped her tears…

Arjun: geet relax I was not serious…. Aur ro kyun rahi ho ma ..papa ki yaad aa gayi toh ghar jaake mil lena….

Geet: nahi mil sakti bhai…my parents are no more…. Tears escaped her eyes saying this….

Arjun got a real shock….

Arjun: matlab …. I can't understand geet…arohi is not your real sister…

Geet nodded in acceptance…

Geet: she is my cousin….. mere ma papa dies in an accident when I was only two months….. and mumma and papaji …took care of me as their own daughter….

Arjun once hugged geet…

Arjun: sshhh don't cry kisi ko tumhare aansoo ache nahi lagte……aur don't cry your parents are always with you…..

Meanwhile talking to each other they buy some dresses for both…..

When they came back geet showed her …what they shopped…. And arohi and geet took the things and bid a bye to both….when daadi invited them to KM……

And when they were coming

Arjun: daadi….do you approve her….. asked hesitatingly….

Daadima looked at his face and ….answered him….

Daadima: achi hai arohi ….. mana nah karengi aapko….

Arjun suddenly remembered of ring…

Arjun; daadima ring…..

Daadima: jis din propose karenge tab le lijiyega….abhi nahi milegi aapko ….

She said and kept the two rings safe in her closet …….

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely part..
so daadi met her two future daughter-in-law..
i adore the relation shared by arjun and geet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
dadi aproved aarohi
.dadi bought two rings but 4 whome?
For aarohi n arjun or aarohi or geet?b/c our dadi is super dadi na
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Posted: 12 years ago
suhana dear...we really like & enjoy ur work..

dnt think like this...

u r vry much talented...

lots of love
anky
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome

arjun finally know that arohi is geet's sister and arjun teases geet and made her cry then arjun shocked after hearing that geet;s parents are no more

precap is interesting

continue soon

bye

thanks for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago



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Posted: 12 years ago
part 23
cute...
so Daadima likes Arohi...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Your all fictions are nice loved them but update this one soon am waiting please...
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Posted: 12 years ago
cool double update
koi nahin agar maan abhi nahin toh baad mein toh honge naa
chalo at least dadi said yes to arohi
kya baat hai arjun aap ne sab kuch tay karr liya
parr geet ka kya
man were they cute or what
cheers for pm
do we see maneet soon i hope

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