Mr.Mars & Ms.Venus THREAD 3 NEW THREADLINK PG1/148 - Page 24

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haan school aayi hoon
abb going off
recess over:(
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yaar mujhi confuse maat ker sky tu kunse thread main baat keragi decide kerly
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Originally posted by: payalpari

yaar mujhi confuse maat ker sky tu kunse thread main baat keragi decide kerly

both ek pair MARS pe aur dusra DTP maine...😆
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tu phir se bhag gayi waha se 😡
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payal ..hum har jaga milthey hai
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kya link de rahi hai...
pehle update de Mr.Mars & Ms.Venus ka...
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Posted: 13 years ago
TEASER

:::Present::
Maan was horrified to see Dev's large army entering through the weakened gates. True to Sordo's words the gates had weakened. He wasn't able to manage in time but still called upon his soldiers ,Geet and Sordo to be prepared. He wasnt going to bow down before Dev and give away his Geet. Not at any cost. He had sworn to himself.
With all his courage he was ready to fight.
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There were few moments left before the Sun would rise. They were able to withstand the blow though it was hard.
Dev was getting angrier and harsh in his moves as each of them failed to defeat them.
Suddenly he thought of something and smirked.
He closed his eyes and muttered some hymn.
Annie appeared in the middle of the war. She appeared utterly scared with bruises all over her body. Geet was shocked to see Annie.

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PAST
"Geet! Meet Annie! My newly found sister!"Maan said chirpily.
"Hi!" Geet said shaking hands "She saved me today from a huge accident!" Maan said cheekily.
Geet rolled her eyes, "And what was that may I ask?"
"Well I was about to hit a tree while texting you sweetie!" He kissed her cheek.
"Oh God! Drama King!" Geet pouted.
All three laughed.
Thats when they heard, "Annie your mother has come to meet you.!"

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"Maan!" Geet gasped. "Its Annie!" Maan immediately turned his head in Geet's direction.
Geet saw Dev aiming at Annie and without any second thought she rushed to save her.She pushed away Annie and thats when Maan realized the main aim of Dev was not Annie but Geet.
He tried to create the supernova but he was already thoroughly exhausted.
Geet was shocked to see Maan exhausted and trying to save her. She dashed towards Maan but by then a strong cosmic blow was almost about to hit Maan striking him off as he tried hard to survive it. Geet created the force field immediately and soon the Sun rose. Dev and his soldiers fleed off while Maan fell down on the ground.
"Geet!" He gasped as blood gushed out of his nose and mouth.
Geet was shocked and craddled Maan in her arms.
"Maan! Maan!! Get Up! NOTHING is going to happen to you baby!!" She cried out but with no response from Maan.
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P.S: I am really sorry guys for not updating on Sunday. Lol I fell asleep :P :P So bear with this Teaser for now. Will Update soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
ooye Marsi update
no teaser
we want update
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Posted: 13 years ago
:P *sticking out tongue* no update
only teaser;)
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ooya marsi na kar
baad mein tu he complain karay gi

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