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Originally posted by: punam2712
So this is the HAPPY ending of my very first OS ... Hmm I got mix response for Maan's character. some liked the changed Maan and some hated him... I don't know what will be your views after reading this part .. so let me know in your comments ..How did you find this change in Maan ...!!!
MAAN'S CHARACTER WAS OF A SPOILT RICH SOB WHO CANT SEE ANY GIRL NOT FALLING FOR HIM. SO IT WAS FINETHERE ARE LOTS OF BOYS LIKE THISBUT HER LOVE CHANGED HIM FOR THE BETTERAN SS WOULD HAVE NICE WHERE YOU COULD HAVE DONE JUSTICE TO MAANTHE OS WAS RUSHED
my apologies if you felt like that... but it was an os
and i already had said that it is strictly an os...and pace of story will be little fast... š³
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