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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712
So this is the HAPPY ending of my very first OS ... Hmm I got mix response for Maan's character. some liked the changed Maan and some hated him... I don't know what will be your views after reading this part .. so let me know in your comments ..How did you find this change in Maan ...!!!

MAAN'S CHARACTER WAS OF A SPOILT RICH SOB WHO CANT SEE ANY GIRL NOT FALLING FOR HIM. SO IT WAS FINE
THERE ARE LOTS OF BOYS LIKE THIS
BUT HER LOVE CHANGED HIM FOR THE BETTER
AN SS WOULD HAVE NICE WHERE YOU COULD HAVE DONE JUSTICE TO MAAN
THE OS WAS RUSHED

my apologies if you felt like that... but it was an os

and i already had said that it is strictly an os...and pace of story will be little fast... 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

@drrose31: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: girlz-rule
@drrose31: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊

thank you dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kashish9687
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thank you so much dear

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Divya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Simple yet cute love story

Shows how love can change oneself

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: april12
Simple yet cute love story
Shows how love can change oneself

thank you dear

yeah...

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Posted: 12 years ago

super awsome os loved it

true love exists

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Smi Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice OS!! Like the way Geet's love changed Maan. I like happy endings.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: drashtimeetu
super awsome os loved it
true love exists

thank you dear

yeah

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