(MG-OS)THE FEELING OF FIRST LOVE (Link Updated PG 67)

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

So this is the HAPPY ending of my very first OS ... Hmm I got mix response for Maan's character. some liked the changed Maan and some hated him... I don't know what will be your views after reading this part .. so let me know in your comments ..How did you find this change in Maan ...!!!

MAAN'S CHARACTER WAS OF A SPOILT RICH SOB WHO CANT SEE ANY GIRL NOT FALLING FOR HIM. SO IT WAS FINE

THERE ARE LOTS OF BOYS LIKE THIS

BUT HER LOVE CHANGED HIM FOR THE BETTER

AN SS WOULD HAVE NICE WHERE YOU COULD HAVE DONE JUSTICE TO MAAN

THE OS WAS RUSHED

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kaxa

@kaxa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#322

Lovely update!

:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Love this maan and geet.

<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

Thanks for the lovely is

:-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-)

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

wow nice os loved it doc

amazing

but you could make it a ss na😳

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drrose31

@drrose31

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Posted: 12 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: mel420
wow nice os loved it doc
amazing
but you could make it a ss na😳

i could have but then i had already 3 and 1 joint one.. so couldn't have done justice to all

plus it was meant to be os only.. i don't like to drag stories..

thank you for liking it

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drrose31

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: Ash1991
amazing update...
loved it alot...

maan changed dats good...
lvd it alot...

thank you dear

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drrose31

@drrose31

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: MonaLovesMaan
wow wow wow ima dancing di
yayyy yippie my maan is a changed maan in this..thanku di love u🤗🤗🤗
wow he confessed directly n even she too expressed her feelings without any hesitation..ohooo someone asked msk to change n he agreed...bechara stopped everything at once n as a result he landed in hospital...hmmm this is the magic of love it forces u to do anything how hard it may be...
finally finally they are together...iam really happy with this...

i can't believe i have missed many comments 😲

am here after 2 months.. 😲

thank you .. yeah your maanu changed man

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drrose31

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: luvu4ever143
awesum os..
loved it...
maan really started loving geet..thats y he left drinking n smoking instantly..
really lovely os...

thank you so much dear

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drrose31

@drrose31

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Posted: 12 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: renjini263
Awesome update dear!!!!!
Maan really Loved Geet dats y he left drinking smoking and left all his frnds except Yash!!!!!
Loved it dear!!!!!... If possible can u give a epilogue???

oh !! i didn't think on that..

even seeing many comments after a long time

umm... its an ending i guess... 😳

thank you so much for liking it