(MG-OS)THE FEELING OF FIRST LOVE (Link Updated PG 67)

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Hey all... am here with an OS this time ..now, this is cent percent an OS as i had to convert my every OS into ss or FF so this is strictly an OS... since, am unable to continue any of my current ff/ss coz of reasons mentioned in current RM's thread...am writing this OS, as am seeing lots of waiting posts in my every thread so decided to write this ..also, i have been asked to write an Os from a long time ..so @Jyo this is for you dearie ...

PS:- since its Ramzan season so authorities are kind that's why am able to post a long part
... This is an os so pace of the story will be little fast


It was another usual day in a college of science students ' Some students were busy in making assignments which were given to them by boring profs. And some were busy with their partners including MSK .. He was a rich , totally spoiled and a Play Boy tag was given to him as that suited him the most..

Maan was busy with one of the girl- flirting and romancing with her when his eyes fell on an innocent looking girl, entering the college campus wearing a salwar suit..hairs neatly tied in a pony tail ,hands had books , and a hand bag hanging on her right arm .. No heals ,all looked at just a simple looking girl as if she came from an alien world .. She was GEET..


She walked in and was busy looking at her books when she bumped into some one ' That was , MAAN , who intentionally did that to make her nervous .. The girl quickly recovered from that and went from there mumbling a sorry to the person '

Maan was shocked , he was a dude in the college ..No one behaved like that in front of him.. and she just walked past him without giving him any single glace' that hit his EGO.. and he decided that he will make fun of her in front of the whole college ..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 1


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resss

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hey di forst of all thanku for the dedication... 😃🤗
Diii this was really written by u na...
sorry sorry for asking like this, i saw u always wrote sweet sweet maan and chalti phirti disaster geet.. but in this maan is a casanova... omg... always my poor geet...
awww daily a girl... grrr maaannn 😡😡
he tried to talk with geet but geet didnt budge, and she slapped him... omg... how maan's ego will be cool now...
he tried to take revenge and is successful... but geet i am feeling sorry for her. ... ahhh maannn yeh tumne kya kar diya... 😡
and princi... 😲😲 omg omg geet ka image damage hua and what will happen now... mummyyy i am crying...
maan called geet to a hotel room, he tried to force her but seeing her tears it effected her... thanku god... 😃 acha hua...
now in princi room.. i think maan will take the blame... hope soo...

dii now i am telling about our kiddo reaction.. when she read the slap part by geet she will be angry but not on maan but on you... 😆😆 because she never like when maan is a casanova... she want her maanu jaanu to be good boy or arrogant but soft at heart... she will be surely sad reading this...

P.S.: Di when u will be posting next part, by that time i will make the banner... 😃 just tell me a day before most probably i will make today, any choice of pics or can i use what i like... 😕

last but not least. CONTINUE SOON... 😆😆
Edited by jyothikrish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MSgayatri

interesting

continue soon



thank you dear

will post soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow such a lovely os loved maan's different character specially continue soon when r u going to post next part ? Cant wait to read more
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nyc os...!!!
how can maan can stoop dis low in d name of revenge...!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start waiting for nxt
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Originally posted by: jyothikrish

resss

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di i will comment at 1 pm..
but after reading i was like... 😲😲 and then 😆😆

p.s.: my profile pic 😃



congozz jyo..

yeah sure but sadly i may come ol on monday may be

going out 😊

hey loved the pic yaar... 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesoem OS loved it DI
waiting for next part
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maan jerk poor geet waiting for next



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