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Posted: 12 years ago


Thank u dearo ..
hope u will like the update as well ...😳

updating nxt now ..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: moni6262

waiting for update bachche ji...
n maafi ki baat, hm to bachpan se hi din dyalu insan h😉
ok, m dusra b pdh lungi...
n abt publicise... ur writing is very nice really...
loveee uuu more🤗🤗


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Originally posted by: shabnam22

nice teaser update soon...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dolly10

Nice teaser

Update soon



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hope u will like the update as well ...😳

updating nxt now ..😃
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😳

UPDATING NEXT ..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

pics mil gayi ...😃
posting now ...😳
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hi all ..
hwz u ..??

hope u all liked the teaser ...😉

but me sobing with the dropping response now ...😭


still ..heartly thanks to all the readers who liked n appreciated my work ..🤗


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here i am giving the next part ...😳

mera Diwali Gift for all of u ...😳

have a fun filled safe diwali ...😃

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Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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Happy birthday Rajshree Bansode ...hope u will like this b,day+diwali gift of urs ...😊

FRIENDS IN LOVE ..😳



PART 14


After nichol few minutes nichol also left n geet was thr still recalling maan's word n that authoritive tone and a new blush spread across her face ..n she looked up at maan who was still staring at her '



Maan was just lost in his new found Jangli Billi 'he had always knew she can never go against his words ..she nvr had but now they way she is accepting his claim 'the feeling is beyond any explanation 'the feeling of possessing the love of ur life is something beyond our imagination '

Smile spread across M-shaped lips n hearts filled with immense happiness remembering her shocked expression at his announcement in KC of geet's being the next head Interior Designer 'her moral ..her dignity ..her value her self respect all became second just coz he wanted it but he can never let her loose a single bit of it 'KC interior designers had already approved her work in Italy so only he made it done 'but what made him happy was the proud look in her eyes at that time ...first time ever he saw that proud in her eyes for him it was always care ..mischief ..but that time seeing the proud look just made him feel the most successful person living on earth ..
how incredible feeling it can be when the opinion of one person means everything to u ..when the one person thinking is ur actions ..her reaction is ur thinking ...how worthy that look is ..to be standing correct in ones eye let the whole world thinks of u wrong ...but if that one person feels u right then nothing else matters ...

A slight blush spread across his face .hardly noticeable with the thought of what Manvi said ..n he glanced back at geet who was thr still trying to subside her smile '.

The heart beat of the two souls were not in thr control anymore 'with every passing day the new realization n acceptance at heart for thr love made it impossible for them to be as thr usual self with them around each other making every1 getting the chance to tease them 'yet this odd feeling n warmth covering them feels soo good like heaven is just here a few steps away still these few steps r far more difficult to take ..

Maan was sitting thr on the dinning table opposite to geet ..seeing her looking everywhere else than him ..smiling remembering the way she was at KM taking care of his food 'his dinner 'his lunch ..looking after dadi maa .. then top of it trying her best to save Vicky after he gets back late after his late night parties '
Then continuing his dinner ..he was again remembering all the days when she was thr in KM ..her care ..her chirpiness filling km with a homely warmth making it feel like a home than just a Mansion '

he chuckled a bit barely noticeable thinking she was more than a friend thr ..doing all what a wife is suppose to do ..from his morning coffee till the lecture for working late night 'than shook his head at his own comparison 'still she was trying soo hard to hide her feelings all the while 'but now he could clearly see her love ..the feeling that her eyes reflect every time he sees in them reflecting the same emotions '

How sweet yet teasing it is to expect the other one taking the initialization 'the feel to see the love n passion in the eyes of the person u love the most ..thr hearts speaking tales of love 'yearning to be with each other a second more at the very moment they part yet their lips are silent 'but strangely the silence is giving a beautiful tickling feeling '😳😳

maaneet were still thr playing with the spoons 'smiling remembering thr own stupid behavior .. still couldn't dare to look at each other fearing what will they say ..but the silence n the hidden smiles was good enough to say they were thinking about the morning incident ..n wht ever have happened b/w thm till now ..

For the two souls in love life can never be beautiful than this with ur love in front of ur eyes 24/7 smiling ..laughing ..happy ..contented ..
The feeling of love enveloping them 'the trust they have that what so ever the situation may be there is someone to hold us n be thr when ever u will need them even be4 u would call them '

Maan glanced at geet for a moment remembering the way she had tried every way with dadi maa's treatment ..the love he possess 4 her sometimes feels to be tamed in front of the respect she has gained in his life with her own sweet gestures ' nothing can be this much soothing than to have a partner that can do anything just to remove the slightest of trouble wrinkle from ur face n indeed they were blessed to have each other '

Geet looked at him sensing his gaze fixed on her 'n got concerned seeing the tint of pain in his eyes 'but maan instantly tore his gaze n started having his food '
thinking how rudely he talked with geet after the way dadi maa responded it was just his frustration over dadi's condition n his helplessness 2wards it which he poured out on her knowing she was just trying to find some cure of dadi yet again '.

But then he knew he never needs to explain all this to her 'she is the only one who knows him better than what he knows about himself ..n thr she was again with her own cutie way to make him feel better with her sweet cribbing for head ache ..

Maan (st) : I wonder if god had made any other one like u geet 'but 2dat I am truly blessed to have u in my life what if be as friend or may be more than that but yes I treasure this un-named relation more than anything in this world '

May be that's is the beauty of thr relation ..they never need words to say or understand each other it's the heart that says n eyes that read 'no words no explanation is needed ..something that wasn't even required in thr friendship either now its far more than that '

Finally both parted 2wards thr rooms 'with slow steps expecting the other one to break the silence 'but the heart beats were soo high to even think straight walking beside each other matching the step climbing up the stairs ..



geet trying soo hard to hide her blush n maan was mentally reminding himself not to utter something stupid n ruin it all ..making the situation even more worst 'n finally just be4 a step in front of her room he spoke in an urgency seeing her going in '

Maan : geet ..

N here geet sighed finally he spoke at the last minute as always n she got a reason to be around him a minute more ..trying to control the wide dimple smile covering her face she stood thr for a minute facing her back 2wards him 'controlling her over flowing emotions while maan just closed his eyes knowing that he has nothing to say at this moment '

Incredible this feeling is building in thr hearts ..the fluttering butterflies ..the red burning sensation covering both of thr faces ..the slight nervousness hovering thr minds n the partially exited heart wanting to know whats in store for us in the next moment '.

Turning around she stood facing him 'knowing like past two days he won't say anything 2day as well ..n
maan stood thr again cursing Manvi to be in her room this late 'he was soo use to see her serene sleeping face be4 going to sleep that now it has become a necessity that he not able to sleep peacefully since last 2 days without having that small memory of his sleeping beauty's clam smiling face '

Maan (st) : god what have happened to me 'since last two days I am doing this making her stand here gazing her n finally manvi would come n snatch her away from me in those stupid talks 'y the hell cant she sleep in her own room '
N here I am again standing confused what say coz I just cant say this to her that I wouldn't be able to sleep until would make sure she is sleeping peacefully '
Maan Khurana u have turned nuts 'speak up u idiot or again that duffer Manvi will come n will drag away ur geet in that room 'or even for luck this wont happen than either way this Jangli Billi will start her interrogation '

His mind got a halt when the honey sweet voice reached his ear drums 'n he tried to process her words rather trying to stop himself 4rm concentrating on her plum rosy lips which were looking damn irresistible with the raw look 'n here she broke his trance getting him out of his wild thoughts '

Geet : Maan ..aap sun rahe hu na ..??

Maan (shooking his head mentally slapping himself) : han 'han geet mien sun raha hoon kiya keh rahi thi tum ..

Geet : han wohh mien keh rahi thi meri dinner ke baad sister naina se baat huyi thi Dadi maa theek hai aap tension mat loo ..

Maan was yet again lost with her abilities to read his mind 'wondering how every time she manages to understand what he is thinking '

Maan (smiling) : I know geet ..meri bhi subha Sis. Naina se baat huyi thi she told me that u have already called her in the morning 'then y u called her now ..??

Geet was now looking down everywhr else than him as if she was caught red handed stealing something '

Geet : wohh 'actually .i thought aap ..nahi vicky .nahi wohh '

Confused she was how to say that she got 2 knw it the way he was tensed at the dinner table 'while maan was smiling delightedly understanding his innocent Jangli Billi's reason to fumble '



Maan : geet first decide what excuse u want o make than talk ..okiee

Listening to his words she shot back a glare n answered with an equal attitude ..

Geet : n y the hell should I make an excuse that too in front of u ..Mr. Stupid Singh Khurana ..

Maan now leaned on the stair case stand at his back smirking at her defense ..

Maan : well madam i-am-soo-smart ..yeh tou aap hi bata sakti hain y u wanna make an excuse to a simple thing that u got my unsaid words ..!! 😳

Geet was tou all sharam se lal 'blushing furiously n lowered her head hiding the slight smile n red hue covering her ..

Geet (st) : gosh geet control ..n fight back or else it wont be better for u 'waise hi aaj ke liye yeh blushing ka shaker buhat hugaya 'uhh it would be better to get to bed be4 this gets more worse '

But be4 she could move even a step with a strong jerk at her wrist she landed on maans chest n her one hand locked in his long palm firmly n other trapped between her n his body 'the space was soo minimal that with no other option she placed her hands on his shoulder sending a shiver down to both of them ..burning thr existence with the igniting untamed desires 'the black desirous eyes of maan looking deep in the oceans of her hazels drowning in them ..while geet was not less ..lost in his magnetic touch she stood thr staring straight in his eyes '.



Maan (husky romantic wisper) : geet itna tou mien janta hi hoon ke dunya ke shoor mien wohh ek insaan jo mere dil ki awaaz sun sakta hai wohh sirf tum hoo ' 😳

Geet eyes was just emotion less as if he captivated them in his ..n he was made his hold even more firm making her lean her weight on him completely eliminating the minimal gap b/w thr bodies 'standing thr drinking her beauty through his eyes '

Maan (coming forward 2wards her caressing her ears through his lips making his breath fall on her ear shivering her under his tight hold ) : mujhe kuch kehna that um se .. 😲 😳 😲

The low husky voice 'his firm hold n hot breath fanning her just made her knees go jelly ..as if she would collapse if he left her at this moment ..n his word made it even more difficult for her to breath 'anticipating his next move her throat went dry with the urge to listen the most awaited 3 words from him '.n she looked back at his eyes with a slight confused face wanting to know what he wants to say '

N here he stood listening to her raised heart beats 'n feeling her irregular breaths fanning his shoulder 'enjoying her vulnerable condition 'liking his effect on her ..the crimson red face making her look damn serene n the confused hazel looking expecting his confession only made him smile ' is he could he would stand thr with his Jangli Billi in his arm n this moment froze like this 4ever 'but the the steps approaching them alerted his senses n he looked back to her eyes ..n said with a chuckle ..seeing her lost gazing him ..

Maan : Gud night '.(with a slight pause) '.meri innocent si Jangli Billi ..!!

With the first few moment geet wasn't able to process his words correctly with the exotic trance she was in 'n then the love he held in his eyes just made her immune to her surrounding but the moment she got his word 'a cute adorable pout appeared on her disappointed face '😆



n maan immediately released his hold on her with crook smile yet admiring the innocent angry Jangli Billi pouting in front of him from the corner on his eyes ..n next she turned away n that's when he caught her holding her wrist '



But smiled seeing her standing thr facing her back 'n then came in front of her 'n looked at her angered face ..looking too damn cute with the slightly red nose n the pout on her face making her ever soo eatable 'n bowing in front of his urges which he was holding from soo long ..

he moved ahead making geet's breath get caught in her throat n placed a soft kiss on her forehead staying thr for a brief second '.while geet's face turned all the more red n hot with her blood rushing to her cheeks n she held her hand in a fist controlling her own heart which was pacing impossibly at a higher pace which she ever know was possible '



While he whispered moving away from her making his lips brush her skin yet again '.admiring the serene beauty standing in front of him '

Maan : sleep well mishty ..!!

N next second geet ran inside her room 'totally forgetting that manvi n Nichol were present thr waiting for her '.

N maan turned towards his room 'n saw Vineet Singh standing thr with a stern face 'n then went away saying ..

Vineet : we need to talk maan lets go in the study '

Guessing the seriousness maan went with him looking back at the closed doors of geet's room once assuring himself she wasn't thr '



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Inside Geet's Room ..

Nichol : well its my marriage after 2 days ..n guess it should be me getting red be4 coming in front of my sister but look here some1 is being red hot han Manno '.

Manvi : true didu 'say it loud geet 'what the reason that u r blushing soo hard ..



Well the moment geet ran from maan ..she entered banging her room's door hard leaning on the door smiling with her red blushing face ..n that's when her two sister pounced with thr teasing questions '

N here she stands all confused what to say 'definitely she can't say what happened a moment be4 'but what to say ..they r nt at all going to give up ..!!

Geet : umm ..wohh ..nothing ..nothing at all just that I was thinking about our next day 'actually

Nichol : hmm ..plzz care to explain what exactly u were thinking '

Ooppssiii caught again ..

Manvi : let me guess didu 'geet di must be thinking her next bumping scene with our hot maan bro (well yes manvi n Nichol has build up a grt relation with our Casanova singh khurana after all the MSK charm has to work ) ..

Precap :-

teasing continued ...😉
vineet n maan's hot talk ...!!

hayeee koi bachao mere MSK ko geet wearing shot dress maan gulping hard ...😆 😳 😆

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so here it was part 14 ..
hope u enjoy the full maaneet part ..😳
next will be a cocktail part but for that u all will have to wait since next is my physics test ..
so update only after monday (next)

n yes if u guess could mativate me enough may be be4 that as well ...😃

till then PLZZ HIT LIKE BUTTON N COMMENT ..

waiting for ur reviews ...

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww..Thank u sssooo much Sobia...this is the best birthday gift...the update was amazinggg...hhhaaayyyeee...ma Maaneet confused what to say to each other after realizing their love for each other...bechari Geet..usse laga ki Maan woh teen shabd kehne hi wala hai & yeh Vineet beech me aa gaya...god ab yeh Vineet Maan se kya kahega???..i am biting my nails...waiting for the nxt sweety:-):-):-):-)

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