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Posted: 12 years ago

mera net super slow hai ...mene update format edit sab karliya ...pic bhi add kar liya ...

magar yeh preview bhi nahi dekha raha last 10min se ..post huga ya nahi pata nahi ...

mummmaaa mien kya karoon ...
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hi thanks 4 da pm n awesum teaser! update soon
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loved the teaser
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sorry for the extreame delay par mera net abhi bhi nahi chal raha sahi se ...
so mien yeh part without formatting n without pic post kar rahi hoon ...
MY HUMBLE REQUST ...jis ko mil gaye fb pe link post kardo for other
pata nahi mien kar paaongi ya nahi ...thnxxx
n here is the update ...

FRIENDS IN LOVE..😳



PART 7

Having their dinner with geet's cutie talks n vicky's comments ...with maan smiling seeing dadi's contended face ..they all made thr way towards dadi's room making her sleep trio went towards the garden ...n just then it started pouring ...first it was just a drizzle which the three os them enjoyed but within minutes it turned to be a stormy rain ...

Maan n Vicky were running towards the shades while geet was enjoying the rain spreading her hands ...moving in a circle ...feeling every bit of the rain drop on her face ..making maan loose his senses in her serene beauty ...n perfect figure flashing in the white skin fitted shirt she was wearing ...


pls avoid the cloths ...geet is wearing her tight fitted office wear in this scene ...😳
In a trance he made his way towards her ...oblivious to the fact that he was getting drenched ...inches away he stood thr watching her playing with the muddy water ...gazing every curve of her face ...then her perfect shaped body ...the pull was too strong for him to restrain himself to touch her ..n next he placed his hands on her stomach ...from back ..making her shocked n scared with his sudden proximity ...looking side ways having his face soo close to her she was mesmerized noticing the perfect structure ...the perfect M-shaped lips n those deep dark eyes made it impossible for her to think about any other thing ... stairing deep into them she lost in the depth while he was still gazing her pure white angelic face as if some heavenly beauty have descended from the fairylands in front of him ...but soon a thunder made them both came back to reality...

Starlted with his own action he moved a step back ..loosing his hold ..looking down ...wondering what must be going in her mind ...cursing himself to have behaived like that ...for god sake they r no more teenager who doesn't know what thr action may depict ...

While she was still standing in the same pose ...with her eyes closed ...shivering with the thought of the moment passed before ...worried what she was doing looking at him like that ..

Both were still In thr reveries when geet turned ..n looked at his down casted head ..n smiled knowing he is thinking the same ..but as soon as he looked into her eyes ..he forgot all his ques. All his guilt ..the trust n the respect was oozing out of her deep almonds which was enough for him to smile ...

But next moment he was astonished to realize what she actually did ...god dam how could she ..while she laughed out more seeing the shocking angry expression on his face ...splashing some more muddy water on him she ran off from thr ..while he went to chase her ...

After almost half an hour ..they both were now back to the same shades n that's when they realized Vicky left the place long back ...when they saw him coming towards us with an umbrella ...but vicky was amused to witnesss the rage in his bro's eyes who was facing him with his back towards geet ...following his gaze he felt the same anger seeing one of the guard eyeing geet continuously ...n he speeded up towards them n took geet with him in side leaving behind a fuming maan ...

Its 20min.s n maan came out of his room changed into a new pair of jeans n shirt looking for geet n that's when vicky told him that geet was in guest room to freshen up ...but that reminded him that she doesn't have her change n she was too much drenched playing in the rain ..soo he made his way towards a locked room of KM n came out after sometime with a piece of cloth in his hands ...it was his mother's old set of sari n blouse which he found neatly wrapped up in her cupboard n he handed over it to geet ...



After almost half an hour geet finally came out of her room but the moment she came infront of maan struggling with the saari ... maan was lost in her magical beauty ...the creamy white skin n the silky red saari was a perfect combination ...her natural beauty was glowing even more within the moon light coming from the windows of the corridor she was walking bye ...he was completely in a trance forgetting all about his surroundings just gazing her like goddess of beauty has herself descended in front of him ...but what made his breath caught in his throat was the slight red hue on her cheek when thr eyes met & that made her look mesmerizing ...a new sensation was taking a toll on him ...which got broken which the voice of a breaking glass ...

Here vicky stood with his jaw dropped down ..n eyes popped out ..making our blushing geet all the more nervous ...shivering in her steps with the continuous gaze of maan she some how managed to stand in front of both ..but vicky's shocked expression was making her feel weired checking her saari then looked back in the small mirror hunged on a near by wall she checked if she looks good enough ...then burst out ..

Geet : WHAT ..aise kyun ghoor rahe ho vicky ..?

N this made maan come out of his la la land ...slapping himself mentally he paid attention to vicky's next set of words ...

Vicky : abb itni sexy larki saamne hoo tou mien koi bhramachari tou hoon nahi jo nazar neechi karloon ...😃

Listening to this geet was all shocked adjusting her saari on her shoulder while maan looked at him with a tint of anger nt liking his choice of words ...but seeing this vicky tried to rub it more .😉...n said ..

Vicky : honestly yrr geetu tou humesha se hot tou lagti thi apne unn skin fitted formal attire mien ..but this traditional saari is making u look sexy for the 1st time ...

Geet : vicky just stop ur buttering ...aur dobara agar mujhe uss name se bolaya tou acha nahi huga ..

Vicky : acha theek hai nahi kehta GEETU ..par ek surprise hai ..tou aap dono yahin mera 2min wait karna mien 5min mien aaya ..

Saying so vicky ran from thr leaving behing maaneet in an awckward silence of few minutes which was broken by maan complimenting her beauty making her blush amusing them both with what kind of talks they are shairing ...still it made them smile later onn maan revealed it to her that its her mother's saari to which geet said his mother would have been really preetie n maan took her to his parents room showing her thr pic album nthat's when they found out that the saari geet was wearing is actually weared by maan's mom on her roka ceremony...😳

N after almost 15-20min vicky came in the room running n took maaneet in another large room with no furniture except a dvd player ...fully decorated with white curtains n dim lights maaneet inquired about all that to which vicky just said he wanted a dance with geet ..making maan again suspicious as well as some where jealous of thr bond coz he never saw geet having such kind of talks with anyone other than him .n here his mind got some peace when geet refused to dance with vicky coz of the saari she was wearing n then after a few minutes of silence maan asked her for a dance but she looked at him with a scared confused face to which he just blinked his eyes in an assuring manner ..n said taking her hands in his ..


Maan : trust me ...

One look of his eyes n geet forgot all the world everything in her surrounding it was just the depth of his eyes making her loose her sanity ...
While vicky was astonished to see the turn of event here he did all this to jealous his bro making him realize his feeling but now they r going towards the center for a dancing having an eye lock ...

Vicky (st) : grt going bhai ...setting mene ki aur larki aap ura le gaye ..geet ne sahi naam rakha hai aapka CASANOVA ...😛...but agar geet meri bhabi banne wali hai tou I don't mind u both even making out here 😳 since the look of your eyes n the way u both are stairing each other forgetting the fact that your younger brother is in the same room ...I am highly doubtful of ur intentions ...but just hope ye chooti si effort kuch tou kaam aaye enjoy bhai n BHABI ...

Thinking he left the room with a teasing smirk playing on his face ...n the dvd player was already set to timer ...

While both maaneet were standing in front of each other in a ball dance pose (plzz refer to the dance in mausam i.e:-shahid n sonam had)
A slight hesitation was thr clearly to be seen on geet's face due to the proximity they were sharing for the first time ever n the intense gaze of maan was even making her more vulnerable in front of him ...


She went away towards the door leading to a huge balcony attached to that room seeing the rain which was making the situation even more romantic setting the correct emotions in both the souls unaware of thr own feelings of love for each other but seems like destiny has decided to make them flow in the storm of this romantic nature ...

N here starts the music ...😳

N thr maan was standing gazing her with his dark deep brown eyes stairing at each n every feature of her perfect figure ...standing beside her on the other side of the door ...he was looking at her wet straight silky hairs setted free on her shoulder ...then her deep hazel eyes ...which was depicting the same turmoil from which he was going through ...the shivering pink glossy lips was making his thoughts erotic ...the backless blaouse baring her silky marble like back was making him hold his breath with the urge of feeling it under his palm ...the silky red material of the saari was lying perfect over her petite figure ...flashing her slender waist to his sinfull eyes ...ready to commit any sin just to feel this very moment with her ...a sin which felt to be the most sacred sin ...a divine feeling ...a pure thread of desires binding them all together again making them both loose thr senses n think what they never wanted to except the thrudding voice of thr heart wanting each other ...

Abhi abhi toh mile ho
Abhi na karo chootne ki baat
Abhi abhi toh pasand aaye ho
Abhi abhi rootne ki baat

Abhi abhi toh roshni aayi
Abhi na karo muh chupane ki baat
Abhi abhi zindagi shuru hai..
Abhi abhi tham jaane ki baat

The hot intense gaze fixed on her was making geet loose her sanity in those deep dark eyes of the greek god standing in front of him ...glad in thin black cotton shirt ...flashing his toned tan chest ...the few drops of water on his rough stable was making her gulp her saliva hard ...the unknown urge to be in his arms was evoking in her n was getting stronger with each passing second ...involuntarily she started stepping towards maan inches away from him she was about to place her cold shivering hand on his stable making his throat go dry with the same desire clearly flashing in her eyes ...but she stepped back n went in the middle of the balcony drenching herself ...

Hum toh haare mahiya re
Moonde naina neend tihare..
Hum toh haare mahiya re
Moonde naina neend tihare...

N maan came thr close to her gazing her in that wet look as if in a black magic pull ... the magic of her beauty ...the water doplets on her bare skin were teasing his senses ...the silky red sari now sticked to her petite figure like another skin ...urging him to commit the most sacred sin of his life of touching the most purest angel of Almighty ...n he did ...holding her bare stomach from back in a tight possissive hold he glued her body to his length ...he stood thr feeling the heaven under his palm ...making her shut her eyes close ...standing thr vulnerable infront of his claim ...n her urge to feel his warmth in the coldness of the weather ..her bare back touching his chiseled chest ...burning them in their own desires ...the new found feeling they both experienced for the first time ever ...

Teri baazuo mein meri chahate samaaye
Teri dhadkanon ko meri dhadkane sunaye
Teri khwahishon se meri khwahishe riha hai
Teri karwato se meri daastan bayaan hai

He placed his rough cold lips on her marble skin of shoulder ...making her her whole body shiver under his touch n she placed her her head back on his shoulder not able to bear the sensation he was evoking in her for the first time in her life ...the forbidden desire he was experiencing was making him insane with her surrender n the inner storm of unknown emotions running in her was making her oblivious to wht her mind is saying ...her body was reacting in its own accord all the rational feelings were miles away from both of thr mind just in the spell of the nature n thr own untamed ..unknown ... unexcepted feelings ...

Kya sukoon kya junoon
Hum nawa ...

few moments passed ...n She tried to move out of his hold n took some steps infront only to experience a stong pull maan made holding her wrist ...n she landed on his rock solid chest ..n he locked her one hand on her back ... gluing her to his body ...her softness plastered to his bare chest ...heart beat risen to the level of exploding n geet's touch on his shoulder was giving him the feel of possession ... the water drops falling on her face going down from her chin to the path of her nose was getting his attention n he placed an intense kiss on her forehead soaking the droplets from thr moving towards her chin kissing her nose in the way ..he was making her shiver n his hold on her back was so tight for her to even move an inch ...

Abhi abhi dil ki suni hai
Abhi na karo zamane ki baat

Abhi abhi baatein rukhi hain
Abhi abhi dohrane ki baat

Abhi abhi aawargi aayi
Abhi na karo sambhalne ki baat
Abhi abhi zindagi shuru hai..
Abhi abhi tham jaane ki baat

He moved his gaze up to her eyes seeing the same confused emotion in her hazels which he was experiencing ...having the same helplessness in her eyes was making him feel right ...but her not responding was making him insane to heights n he kissed her cheeks ...but his hold got loosen ...here she was loosing her self in his passion ...in his warmth ...
N the moment he created a bit of gap in between them a thunder bolted n she hugged him tight scared to go away from him like if she parted now they will never meet ...

Woh subah toh bewaja ho
Ke guzare bin tumhare jis ki raat..

Her heart was throbbing like a volcano n her hold was getting even more tighter if possible on his shoulders ...burying herself in his embrace ...hiding her self she was standing thr in with an unknown peace felt in her heart ...a tear drop left her eye n got soaked in his shirt ...

Teri baazuo mein meri chahate samaaye
Teri dhadkanon ko meri dhadkane sunaye
Teri khwahishon se meri khwahishe riha hai
Teri karwato se meri daastan bayaan hai ..

N he was loosing the last bit of his thinking ...her surrender ...her smell ..her feel was making him do all the things against his mind ...but for them it was the most peaceful moment of thr life ...the most sacred rain ..making all the clouds of doubts for thr feeling wash away ...
the moment he felt her sob ...Parting he cupped her face in his palm n she kept her hand holding his shoulders tight not wanting to let go ...he kissed her wet eye lid n licked off the tear ...n next moment she lowered her head blushing furiously ...the red hue of her face ...the look of her eyes gave him the courage to go ahead ...
Closing the gap between thr faces he was gazing her soft petal like lips n she closed her eyes surrendering herself to her feelings ...

Kya sukoon kya junoon
Hum nawa...

Mere inches away from each other they were standing thr in the mid of the balcony ...the darkness of the outer world didn't effect them but with each passing second the darkness of their inner heart was getting faded ...replacing with a new feeling ...a feeling which was always thr but they never got a chance to expreince it ...they were feeling each others hot breath falling on either of thr lips ...standing plastered to each other with thr eyes closed ...geet's cheast heaved up n he closed the last bit of gap b/w thr bodies ...making her insane with the burning sensation hovering her senses ...

Hum toh haare mahiya re
Moonde naina neend tihare ...
Hum toh haare mahiya re
Moonde naina neend tihare ...

Darkness engulfed the serene sight hiding them in it ...fading the scene in the moon light ...n a new sun rose with many questions n unsolved riddles ...guilt n reluctance was seen on his face sitting in the same balcony since 2 hours remembering last night ...with closed eyes ..
(still confused ..?? they didn't kissed ...😛)

Maan (looking straight on the emerging sun) : kal raat agar nakul time pe nahi aata tou pata nahi mien kya kar bethta ...kaise geet ka saamna karta ..
Par uss ka saamna tou mien abb bhi nahi kar paoonga kya kahoonga ussko ke kyun mene kal raat aise behaive kiya ..
(hitting his hand hard on the rim of terrace) damn maan kya hugaya tha tujhe maan ...how cld u ...woh geet hai ..geet ...teri jangli billi ...tum ne soocha bhi kaise uss ke saath ...pata nahi kya soch rahi hugi ...kal bhi bina kisi sawaal ke chali gayi ...ek baar nahi poocha ke mene wooh sab kyun kiya .. par agar who poochti bhi tou kya jawaab deta ussko ...kya kehta ...
magar jo mene kal geet ki aankhoon mien dekha wooh kya tha ...who ehsaas jis ko mene jiya wohi mujhe geet ki aankhoon mien kyun nazar aaraha tha ... kal pehli baar aisa kyun laga ke geet mujh se kuch kehna chahti thi magar nahi keh pa rahi thi ...usski aankhon mien ek ajeeb si bechaini dekhi mene .. aur darr bhi ...kya hua hai ..kya huraha hai ...mien kya kar raha hoon aur geet wooh kyun mujh se kuch kehne se pehle sochne lagi ...

before he cld think anything else vicky came thr with a mug of hot black coffee n asked him the reason y he is still here ...its 9:30am still he is not ready ...to which maan ignored sipping his coffee he said its Saturday he is not going office ..then vicky got a chance to nag him asking about the dance last night ..to which he saw him lost n then asked ..

Vicky : kya hua bhai ...kal geet ko poocha tou wooh bhi aise hi bina kuch bole chali gayi ..mene kitni kushish ki ussko rokne ki but she never listens to me ...aapne kaha tha u will make her stay here in KM only ..tou fir

Maan : nahi vicky aisa kuch nahi hai ...all is fine ..

Vicky : wht fine bhai ..madam subha se call bhi nahi utha rahi ..aapne try kiya ussko ...khud hi kal bol rahi thi aaj delhi ghumhainge n now she is not even answering her calls ..

Maan : relax wooh soo rahi hugi abhi tak ...waise bhi madam Geet Rai Chaudhry ko apni naand buhat pyaari hai ....n chuckles remembering last morning when she slept on his shoulder in the car it self ...

Vicky (worried n hesitant) : bhai who mujhe aapko kuch batana tha ...
Maan : wht ..kya hua pareshaan kyun hu ..??

Vicky : who kal jo guard ..who was stairing at geet ..jis ko aapne punch kiya tha n u fired him out ..

Maan ( raged) : don't tell me he is still here ...mene kaha tha throw him out right then ...how dare he look at geet that way ..mera mann tou kiya wahin usski jaan lee loon ..par usski family ke bare mien socha ..

Vicky : ohoo relax yrr bhai wooh guard tou kal raat ko hi gaya ..par wooh geet ne ussko jate huye dekh liya n he was bleeding furiously ... geet ne aapko bhi ghusse mien dekha tha ... jab hum garden se wapis andar aaye ..

Maan : kehna kiya chahte hu vicky ...geet ne ussko kaise dekha ...?

Vicky : wooh tou nahi pata par bhai uss ne mujhe force kiya aur mujhe ussko batana para ke uss guard ki wooh halat kaise huyi aur kyun ...

Maan (angered) : wht Vicky tum pagal huye hu ...kyun bataya tum ne uss ko .. kuch bhi bahana bana dete that he slipped on the muddy ground but tum ..

Vicky : I am sorry bhai ..par aap jante hu na uss dare devil ko ..aap usske saamne kuch nahi bol pate mien kya bolta 😆...par bhai 3 saal mien pehli baar geet ki aankhoon mien aansoon dekhe mene ...for the first time I saw her scared face ...mujhe sach mien nahi laga tha ke geet itni sensitive hu sakti hai ...

Maan : vicky u sldn't have told her all this ...wooh bahar se apne aap ko buhat strong dekhati hai par actual mien ek dam kaansh ki gudya hai meri jangli billi ... Apni yeh side wooh kabhi dunya ke saamne nahi lana chahti par mien jaanta hoon wooh kitni sensitive hai ...har choti choti baat par roo parti hai ..pagal hai ...par dil se buhat achi hai ... dunya ke tactics aur yahan ke cunning logoon ko nahi pehchaan paati woh vicky she is too naive to see all this ...uss ke liye log waise hi hain jaise woh apne aapko geet ke samne dekhain ...

Vicky : bhai mene geet aur emotions ka connection itne saaloon mien sirf tab dekha jab pehli baar mene usss se usski family ke bare mien pocha tha .. n she said she don't wanna talk about them ..pata nahi kya tha par wooh kabhi apni family ke bare mien kyun kuch baat nahi karti ...
Maan : coz she is angry with her father ...wooh 5 saal ki thi jab usski mom ki death huyi ...sid ki birth ke time ...usske dad ne kabhi ussko pyaar nahi kiya coz Mr.Chaudhry is an old fashion phsycho jin ke liye beti ka paida hona ek gali hai ...mujhe yeh baat KC join karne ke baad pata chali jab mien unn se ek conference mien mila ...aur apni iss hi chotti sooch ki waja se unhoon ne geet ko kabhi apne paas tak nahi aane diya ...n then finally ussko zabardasti Hostel bhej diya tha ...usski family se kabhi koi ussko milne nahi aaya ...n that's coz she hates them ...mujhe laga tha itne saaloon baad jab who wapis jaayegi tou sab normal huga lekin 6 saal pehle usski last call se mujhe pata chala that her father is still not talking with her ...

Vicky : bhai I cant believe aaj bhi aise log hain society mien n geet wooh humesha kitna khush rehti hai ..i can never ever imagine this to be happened with such an innocent angel like geet ...

Maan : har baar jo dekhta hai wooh sach nahi hota vicky ...geet apne aap ko kitna bhi hard ...strong pretend kar le but uss se yeh baat kabhi nahi badal sakti that she still carves for the love of a family ...solace of a father n peace of a home ...woh apne dad se bhale kitna naraaz hujaye par mene usske chehre par woh khushi dekhi jab uss ke dad ne ussko 1st time call ki thi wooh bhi principal ke kehne par ...she do love her father vicky ..she really do love her father ...

Vicky : I just don't have words to say anything at the moment bhai ...geet ke saath aisa kaise ..

Maan : chor do yeh sab vicky aur han geet se kuch mat kehna ..that u know all ..ya phir uss ki family ...ussko acha nahi lage ga ...koi nahi janta ke Mr.Chaudhry abb kis jaga kuansi deal sign karne mien busy honge ...geet ne tou unnse last kab baat ki hugi mujhe bhi koi idea nahi hai ...uss ki family hokar bhi nahi hai vicky so its better we don't bring this matter infront of her ...

Just then nakul came thr n told that an inspector is thr meet maan ...n both went down in hall whr inspector told him that a girl is being kidapped last night near 3am from her apartment ...n during investigation they hv got a pic of that girl along with him ...shocking n fearing the worst maan took that picture from the inspector ...

Sweating n shocked were the expression on maan's face which soon turned into fury n vicky snached the pic from maan's hand guessing wht might have happened n both the brother were astonished with the revealation that geet is the girl who have been kidnapped last night ..

Maan (inraged) : aisa kaise hu sakta hai ...geet ko delhi aaye huye 2 din bhi nahi huye ...koi uss ko kyun ..

Ins : sorry sir par humien unki family ko lekar koi link nahi mila all we got is some pic of u both in her laptop n this pic beside her bed ...

Vicky : koi tou clue huga ...geet ko kis na kidnap kiya ...apartment ke logoon ne dekha huga ..aap unnse

Ins : inquiry ki hai unn logoon se bhi par raat ke time kisi ne kuch nahi dekha ...bas ek old lady jo Ms.Chaudhry ke saamne wale flat mien rehti hain unhoon ne yeh poora incident witness kiya hai ...unka kehna hai ke 3-4 ke beech kuch log kale kaproon mien apartments mien aaye aur uss larki ke ghar ke bahar khare 2 bodygaurds ko buhat boori tarha maara aur Ms.Chaudhry ko behooshi ki halat mien lekar chale gaye...

Maan's face went pale with the thought of his jangli billi in danger ...the mere thought of something happening to her was worst than death for him ...he standing thr facing his back to the Inspector listening to all but no words were processed by his brain all he was thinking is how she will be at the moment ...

Vicky ; how is that possible koi iss tarha apartments ke andar aa kaise sakta hai ..apartment ki apni security bhi tou ..

Ins : unko bhi buhat boori tarha maara gaya hai Mr.Khurana ..hum tou yeh pic dekh kar yahan aaye thay taa ke humien iss larki ke ghar waloon ke bare mien koi info mil sake ...may be koi ransom call aayi hoo ya phir koi dushmani ...waise humien innke ghar se tou koi link nahi mila inn ki family ke bare ...koi hai ya phir yeh anaat...



Maan : that's non of ur concern ...geet meri dost hai yahan ek company mien kaam kar rahi hai ..uss ki family ke bare mien koi kuch nahi janta ...other than that jo bhi info chahiye aap yahan aakar hum se poch sakte hain .. I keep that clear in ur head Inspector Maan Singh Khurana is involved from now onn ...mujhe jald se jald geet sahi salamat wapis meri aankhoon ke samne chahiye ...warna aap iss sheher mien tou kya iss state mien bhi nahi dekheinge ...now move

Police inspector was amused with the way MSK was taking interest in this case but then knowing the power he possess he chooses to be quite ...n better make no negligence ...

But the moment he left KM maan dropped down on the sofa ...with his head dipped down ..n vicky made his way towards him n placed his hands on maan's shoulder .knowing wht he might be going through ..



Its been 3 hours the inspector left KM n still thr was no clue whr geet is ...maan was in his study room locked himself in there ..marching to n fro ..his brain was running in utmost speed thinking thousands of questions ..how will be geet ..wht she might have been going through at the moment .. who those Bas*** are will she be safe ...the mere thought of something happeneing to her shivered him as if some storm was thr ..indeed the storm was going inside him ...the helpessness he was feeling was beyond any explanation ...

While Vicky was no less tensed for his dearest friend pacing in his room ..on call with the dectective agent MAAN hired to find out geet ...n then smached his mbl on the ground frustrated listening to all the negative response ... standing in front of the window ...seeing the sun setting down the horizon remembering the moments he spent with geet ...her motivating talks in London ...n her smile when she was thr with maan ...a lone tear skipped his eyes realizing how much she meant for him ...n then a feel of fear engulfed him with the thought of his bhai...

On the other hand maan was stairing at her picture in his wallet ...remembering all the time she was with him ...the close moment he spent with her last night ...cursing himself to let her go ...recalling her argue for not staying in KM ...n then pushed off all the things infront of him on the table down breaking them ...frustrated at his helplessness ..angry to have agreed to let her stay thr ...guilty for not protecting her enough ...

He closed his eyes ...pushing his hairs back ...remembering her laughter ..her mischieves ...her care ...n her concerned scared eyes ...the way she use to get frightened with a single cockroach infront of her ...her fat tear pearls ...n he snapped open his eyes feeling miserable ...with the thought of her pain n got furious with the thought someone making her suffer ...



Without any doubt it ws the most fearful night for them ...with sleep now whr near the only feel of helplessness ...guilt ...fear ...fury n anxiety ws thr ...in both of them ...helplessness to not being able to find her ...guilt not being able to protect her ...fear of something happening to her ...fury to murder those Bas*** who tried to harm her ...anxiety to meet her ...to see her ...to make sure that she is fine ...the night went like that with continues thoughts n calls with the inspecter n detectives ...vicky even went to geet's apartment to have alook but the messed up look of the apartment only made his fearful condition even worsen ...

while maan was going every single place whr she can be ...trying to reach her father to have a check but as usual he was busy ...as much as he didn't have a minute to even talk about his daughter ..who is been kidnapped ...even tried her cell number but it was switched off ...nothing ws making him go eyes ...he was driving in the whole delhi city like a maniac without recognizing whr he is heading towards...

MORNING ITS 11am AT KC

Maan : wht the hell do u mean aapko abhi tak koi clue nai mila ..

Ins : sir hum ne har possible link check kiya hai ...unka office ...ghar ..aur jab kal raat aapne humien bataya ke wooh mumbai ke biggest property dealer Chaudhry sahab ki beti hain tou hum ne unnko bhi approach kiya par unke P.A ka kehna hai ke Chaudhry sahab ki koi beti hi nahi hai ...ab aap hi bataye ek larki jis ke naam se ziada usski zindagi ke bare mien koi kuch nahi janta hum kiya kar sakte ussko dhundhne ke liye ...

N maan turned towards the large class window ...closing his eyes ..not able to bear anything ..just wanting for magic n he will be able to see his jangli billi right infront of him ...fine ...happy n smiling ...frustrated at his own helplessness ...

Vicky : humien yeh bahane nahi sunne Inspector ...jo bhi kariye par geet ko kaise bhi dhundye ...its been more than 24hrs aur aapka depart. Ek larki ke bare mien koi info nahi nikal paya ...aap jante bhi hain ke jo log iss tarha uss ko apartment ke andar aakar kidnap kar sakte hain who kuch bhi kar sakte hain ...

Ins : hum aapki pareeshani samajh rahe hain ...par abb agar humien na kidnapping ka motive pata chale na hi koi aur leading info tou hum kaise kuch bhi pata kar payeinge ...aur upar se jis insaan ko aap unka father bata rahe hain wooh tou unnko apni beti mane se bhi inqaar kar raha hai ...

After few min. Inspector left from thr signing at the adamant brother ready to dig the earth n reach the level of skies to find that girl ...about whom they doesn't even know if she is alive or dead ...😡

Vicky made calls to the detectives n gaurds Maan ordered to find geet to know if they got any clue but again thr was a negative response ...maan turned his his over his shoulder to know if they got any info about geet but seing the helpless n scared expression on Vicky's face ...he got his answer n again closed his eyes with the unbearable pain he was suffering from ...

Maan ( eyes closed ) : kahan hu tum geet ...plss wapis aajao I promise iss baar tumhain kahin nahi jaane donga ...apni bahoon mien chupa kar iss dunya se buhat door le jaoonga par plss bas ek baar wapis aajao ...mien yeh dard nahi seh sakta geet ...i need u ...i really need u geet ...



PRECAP : guess on ur own ...??

n plsss iss baar comment mien review zaror dena ...iss part ko post karne mien jitni energy lagi na agar itni mien PHYSICS ki derivations yaad karne mien use karti tou board mien full mark aajate ...its been 7hrs i hv been trying to post this i hope iss baar post button press karne par post hujaye ...😭

so plzzz iss baar parh kar bhag mat jana mene 4 ghante lagaye hain post karne mien tou kam se kam 4 lafz tou likh kar jana ...

n yes sorry 4 the song sequence if i didn't done it upto ur expectations ...but honestly i think passionate scenes r not a cake walk for me ..
Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
wonder who has kidnapped geet😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW... what an awesome part!
Maaneet falling for each other ...
and Geet kidnapped! 😲 😭
Hope Maan and Vicky find her soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update was too too good
song is superb suits the situation very much
omg
geet is kidnapped
who d this
maan in so mmuch pain
atlest nw exect that u love her maan
awesome upadate
cnt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
really awesome .is d guard behind dis kidnapping?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Really mind-blowing yaar..Romance, thriller & emotions.. very scared for geet..pls cont soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Geet kidnaped now wil see real Maan and his realization for love towards Geet

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