Maaneet OS ~ Kismat (Last Part ~ Pg63) 18/09

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Jeba Rahman

@the_chosen_one

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

when r u gonna update next part ?

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Hey Dia, my little one slept early today. So mEree to read ur update. R u updating?

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Dia

@--Dia--

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: anuandavi
Hey Dia, my little one slept early today. So mEree to read ur update. R u updating?

Just started writing Anu.. Will update late night...

Mera chotu abhi tak soya nahi.. Abhi tho unki bedtime story bakki he..😊

Dono angels so gaye? Little one won't wake up at night?

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Hi Dia..apologies 4 late lieks n comments! Read part 2 n Part 3 nw! Intense emotional n fantabulous updates! Maan was really shattered wen he found out! He unknowingly n slowly fell in lovw wid Geet! He was overwhelmed! Poor Maan! Maan n Sanjana were good friends bt there was no love! Geet sacrificed for nothin! Maan looked for her ! Aarav knw Geet is his mom! Maan takes care of him! Finally Maan meets Geet! she is a soldier n he life is in danger! Maan shocked! Geet awakens ! She meets Dadi n Maan ! Geet very emotional! Maan n Geet talk! She sees Maan's pain! Maan sad wid her decision. Geet hesistant to go bt cos of her son she agrees! Beautifully written! Loved it! U r an amazing writer! Will wait 4 next part n Mitwa n Saiyyan updates! Dia...thanks 4 dis OS! Appreciate ur tym n efforts! Love the way u write !😛

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: --Dia--

Just started writing Anu.. Will update late night...
Mera chotu abhi tak soya nahi.. Abhi tho unki bedtime story bakki he..😊
Dono angels so gaye? Little one won't wake up at night?

She will. May b after 3hours. If ur kiddos have not slept then how r u writing? BedTime story kaun sunayega?

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Dia, me going to sleep. Agar my choti wakes up, to mujhe sone ko hi nahi milega. Will read the update tomorrow. Good Night.

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angelic_cute

@angelic_cute

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

finally they meet after six long years

hoping that geet stay with man forever

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-eiya-

@-eiya-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

aww loved it..finally they met...do continue soon...

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farheen01

@farheen01

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Just read your OS i loved it very much. 👏
Hats off to you. ⭐️⭐️

Some of parts were emotional it made me have tears in my eyes😭😭.

At least Maaneet met again.

Wait for next part soon

Thank you