NEWFF:CROSS ROADS IN LOVE/LIFE[part2:page19-4/9] - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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mindblowing update yar mona very heart touching eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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how cruel of geet's aunt 😡

i am glad maan saved geet 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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NOTE:plz add "monachweetie" to ur buddy list if u need pm's

TEASER

Maan who came to varanda still on phone saw someone on tree…"koun hai??"maan said loudly for which she gasped n lost her balance…."ahhh"she screamed closing her eyes before landing on maan….

Maan first shocked to see geet there which he least expected but soon lost in her innocent eyes so as geet…his heart is jumping in joy for some unknown reason.."sorry.."she spoke ever so cute yet innocently..oh her voice seemed like a sweet melody to maan…he is looking at her with a smile lost in her….

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He is trying hard to concentrate on the subject rather than on his stupid thoughts.."concentrate maan concentrate"he said to himself n peeped in to the book…but with in few seconds he went to the same mood again again lost in thoughts…he again snapped his thoughts"maan kya hogaya tuje..stupid ki tarah behave mat karo.."he slapped himself on his head with his palm…

He heard someone giggling n looked up to see the innocent beauty who is smiling..she came to in slow steps n encircled her hands around his neck looking in to his eyes..all the while maan is smiling like a mad…

Sorry for giving teaser again..i know I said I'll upadte soul mate but my head is aching like anything as I didn't sleep the whole night…have to catch some sleep now..dont worry friends try to upadte till night..tab tak I thought to give teaser for this..hope u like it😳

love..

-mona😃


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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
aweee... so cute...
geet cane to say thank u kya... bt jo bhi hai i loved it...
omg maan dreaming abt geet ... hayee... abhi se he pagal ho raha hai geet k pyaar mai...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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KIDDOOO tumne jo bhi kiya acha nahi kiya...
main tho yeh FF padi nahi, i was checking pms and came across this...
ok how can i blame u...
i am so sorry sorry sorry for not commenting on this one yaar...
ok coming to the ff... the start was just awesome ... loved it to the core..
hayeee maan is same like me agar ipod ho tho bas i dont need anything... awww i so love priya and maan bond.. they are more like friends than mother-son... 😃
ohh geet is singing a song in the temple bechari kitni pain main hain... maan is attracted by her voice and he want to see her face...
ohh maan is lost in her and geet is fearing...
oh no geet ka accident in prologue itself. 😡 kiddooo tum na 😡

part 1: ohh unknowingly maan is crying my maan is crying... 😭😭
ohooo.. SHE IS MY WIFE.. GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA... yayyy
pehle se hi maan ne geet ko apne wife keh diya... it awesome... love it...
oh so priya informed to geet's family... her taiyiji yuckk hate her...
geet is in that condition and she is concerned for her party...i want to her... chiii
but suhail is nice...
he loves her choti a lot and is also worried for her... bechara crying a lot...
dont worry suhail jab geet ke paas maan hain tho hamare geet ko kuch nahi hoga... hain na kiddo...
ohh he is pouring his heart out to maan... finally maan left from there half hearted...

arey yaar maan dont worry... u both are destined to be one..

kiddo next part jaldi post karna...
love u... 😃

Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely Teaser
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very interesting start...

for a change there is no suspense and hidden story in this FF...

is it so or not...

ok so Maan is mesmerized with her beauty in first meeting only...her voice pulled him inside Temple...what his mother can't do her voice did that...

Geet's accident and he filled the form as stating that she is Mrs MSK... why only Mrs MSK he can address her as his sister or any other relation...it shows that he has already accepted her as his soulmate...

her Tiaji very cheap...but what happen to these henpacked husbands that they don't care for any relation except wife...if Geet's tiaji can threaten her husband that she will throw Geet out if he will try to help Geet then he can also threaten her that he will throw her only out if she will behave badly with his niece...blood becomes thin in front of lust...thank God she has support of her cousin brother...

awesome updates ...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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cute teaser...
Maan imagining Geet everywhere 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi thanks 4 da pm n awesum teaser...update soon

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