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Shefali16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Is ths story a depressing one?
its gng dat way..
kya yar...evry maanetian wants them to b together...
waise m already depresd...nd nw wont b able to sleep coz maaneet are apart...sob sob...(dramaticaly)
SUPER DUPER UPDATE WAISE!!!!!!!!!

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mayyo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

I didn't realize I was holding my breath as the chapter was nearing the end but I actually heaved a sigh of relief when I read your note. A little hope that maybe, just maybe, Maan and Geet might have a chance together. I know it's a long shot but my stupid heart won't let me give up on that teeny tiny hope! 😔

Anyway, about the update... it was fabulous! 😊 Loved every part of it, but why is it Maan's monologue? I want to know Geet's feelings about 'them' too. I loved how you've made Drashti and Gurmeet the characters of her book and their story becoming prophetic for Maan and Geet. I want a happily ever after for both the couples!

Their story happened ten years ago and Sameera is married to Maan for ten years. Do these two things have any connection with each other?

Really waiting to know what went wrong.

Thanks for the PM. Update soon again! 😊

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Maaneet099

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

oopsie... wrong story but right author comment... hehe shall go n post where it belongs ;)

Edited by Maaneet099 - 13 years ago

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LuvScooby

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

GURTI fan in me was not sure if I should be happy or sad...the fact that they loved each other or the fact that they r not together (I'm talking about your story of course 😉)

Jane is my fav too, she had so much innocence in her writing and the male protagonists in her stories were GENTLEMEN.

Loving this OS so far, maybe u should consider of making this into a SS 😳

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ammu5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

superb. will b waiting for the nxt one

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

part 2
oh its kinda painful...
was he married when he met Geet or, i didnt understand that one line him being married...
cont soon dear...

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Dei_Gratia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

awesome story...
Loved it,alottt!!!!
Vry curious abt y maaneet r nt together...
Cont soon
Thnx fr pm

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its_me

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

just ...dear

for ur hard work...⭐️

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-Crayon-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Superb!

Their conversation was Lovely! 😊

Continue soon!

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Clairvoyant20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

It was really touching 👏 loved it ❤️

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