OS: The one that got away: Part 4 Pg 30 (4/9)

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Dolly

@kptl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

that was mindblowing update...
m really curious to know
what md where it went wrong in their case

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

awesome going and what went wrong ? And loved the last lines . Jane will always give happiness in d ending so r u 😉isn't it sanju 😃

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vivacious_gurl

@vivacious_gurl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

i hate sad ending... 😭😭😭😭😭... sanji u r gonna end it with sadness na...very bad... nonetheless great update

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Fab part Sanju…I was wondering how you will fit story in two parts…glad that you extended to one more part .Very well written and you are expert in writing in past and present neatly

I liked that you chose the linking of GC & DD and made a story.

I liked the convo bet them on the phone ….eager to know how they fall in love and what happened that they parted their ways….how he married to sameera

Me dying to read the ending…still wish happy ending…but seems the sad ending is best suited.

Waiting for their meet after 10 years…what will happen when they meet

T4pm

Cont soon…cant wait now…don't delay please.

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QuintessentialI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Irony of Fate right 😉

I know Sanju I've exercised my lacrimal glands many a times reading your tragic ones 😆 so am prepared for anything but still like max of Geet fans including you hoping for a union although I know & have a feel it won't be the case !!!

Irony of Life , Love and Society we live in *sigh*

Kudos for penning down certain things we were all witness to 👏 👏 👏

Bravo ⭐️ ⭐️ 👍🏼

Thanks for pm

Edited by .Priya2000. - 12 years ago

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

A very lovely but painful one...

I get it there's not going to be a happy ending...

It is their own hell, I agree...I wonder how such people manage to get through their lives...

I specially liked the mention of Gurmeet and Drashti and the portrayal of their relationship in the novel...looking forward to know more about them...when Maan himself took the first steps, what made him back out...

Edited by mystique_girl - 12 years ago