OS: The one that got away: Part 4 Pg 30 (4/9)

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

awesome start dear loved it a lot

eagerly waiting for next update

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chsweety22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: --Dia--
Good one dear.. Continue soon.. 😊

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mayyo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

I don't know what to comment on this one... It's really nice to read another one of your works, but I don't sense that it's going to have a happy ending. 😕

You've shown that Maan already loves his wife and child but he's attracted to Geet as well. I think I like it that it's not Geet who's Maan's wife since it wouldn't feel good if Maan wanted a woman other than Geet! 😛

Update the next part soon. Thanks for the PM! 😊

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punam2712

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

REALLY DONT LIKE THE IDEA OF MAANEET BEING SEPARATE

DONT KNOW WHETHER WILL LIKE IT

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meenu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

it was awesome,,but i cant handle maaneet separating!!

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lehr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Please dear update this one . me waiting...

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Craziest_MG

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

hmmm ... Interesting ... Dont know what else should i say ?

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Sonali92

@Sonali92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

hell or heaven...who cares...it matters only that maaneet are together

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zaqxsw

@zaqxsw

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

With Man and Geet away from each other, I just wont say the truth that I loved the first part... Y do they have to be away from each other... Please update soon.. :( :(