OS: The one that got away: Part 4 Pg 30 (4/9)

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vivacious_gurl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

the last part made me cry sanji... so much pain

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Shalini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

hmph thy didnt end up together and i never like those stories where they never end up together but you changed that, i did enjoy this one, however i still felt sad. i did wish that they could have somehow made it through and be together (maybe an epilogue could do that?😃) but there are cases like this in the world. great story Sanju. thanks for the PM.

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zaara2212

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

even thought the ending was heart wrenching, it was emotional and i had tears in my eyes...
Maan proved to be a gud person, even though he loved geet, he never betrayed anyone..

this ending makes me think that all love stories do not have an happy ending but love still stays 😊 lovely OS 😊

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mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Until I read this part of the story, I never realised that it was possible to be choked up with emotions, cry sad tears and smile an almost satisfied smile at the same time! I know I sound a little crazy here, but this is actually what happened when I read through the update! It was beautiful through and through!

I'm sure you understand why I was choked up with emotions. It was really painful to read what sacrifices Maan had to make. 😭 Ahh, the things that responsibilities make you do!

As I read through the part, I could almost visualise everything. Such a vivid writer you are, Sanjana! 👏

I absolutely loved Maan and Geet's encounter after ten long years! It was really the best that could have been. It was actually disturbing to know that Geet held Maan responsible for their separation. I'm glad that she could forgive him. Their conversation and the way Maan told her of being true to his promise of living with Geet made me even more emotional.

There's one thing that left me a teeny-tiny bit dissatisfied. I think Maan should have told his Daadi about Geet afterwards. And Sameera should know that Maan loved Geet. If she does, she'll realise the big sacrifice Maan had to make.

Geet gave a happy ending to Gurmeet and Drashti's love. She wrote it the same way, at least a part of it, that had actually happened between her and Maan. The rest, I think, was how she wanted it to turn out for them too!

The book had become prophetic for Maan and Geet ten years ago. And I think I'll delude myself into believing that it became prophetic for them once again; that they could actually be with each other, not only their souls, but their bodies too!

I really wish you can write an epilogue for this story and give them a real happy ending. I want Geet to find happiness!

My wishes apart, the whole story was beautiful. Leave it to you to make me like a sad story even when I opt for happy endings! Thanks for this, Sanjana! And even if you don't write an epilogue, I have no regrets in reading this. 😊

But the next OS, whenever you plan to write, should have a happy ending. Please! 😊

Mariam

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nikki.171

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

I L-U-R-V-E-D ITTT ! Oh My Gawd ... this must be one of da few tymes I adored a sad ending ! Hopefully.. I shall get back to this comment . But just in case I dont... Lovely! I love da whole background to this story. Truly Amazing ! Just lyke your other works.

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Hi thanks 4 da pm n superb emotional update! Aww poor Maaneet separted by circumstances! Maan married Sam cos she was pregnant wid his bro child n Dadi asked him to take care of dem! Geet was naturally upset! Geet meets Geet Khurana! Maan n Geet finally meet! Both love each other n Geet understood n forgave him bt cld nt move on! The book had a happy ending! Well written!

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

HI SANJANA

I JUST LOVE YOUR WORK AND CONSIDER YOU ONE OF THE BEST WRITERS

BUT DID NOT WANT TO READ A SAD STORY ABOUT MAANEET FROM YOU

WHATEVER THE CASE, FOR THEM TO PART WAYS HURTS

THOUGH IT WAS A FABULOUS OS, IT UPSET ME

NONE OF THEM MOVED ON

MAAN WAS LIVING FOR HIS DAUGHTER, WHILE GEET WAS STILL STANDING WHERE HE LEFT HER

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dreamymishti88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

awesome os dear

loved the ending

superb

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CrazyMaaneetFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Having sleepless nights nowadays, feeling depressd n top of dat read dis ff,all parts n
it made me even more vulnerable, even more sad.

I gues bad timing